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Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:56 AM Title: The Moment

Love vamp stories. Loved read this one. Thank you.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:50 AM Title: The Moment

Sweet. Not saying anything about Jerkob. He's such a little prick

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:44 AM Title: The Moment

Good fight scene

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:11 AM Title: The Moment

I like how you've twisted BD into this storyline as well as all the associated characters.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:04 AM Title: The Moment

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Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:34 PM Title: The Moment

Oh!!!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:28 PM Title: The Moment

Good one

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:18 PM Title: The Moment

Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 10:34 PM Title: The Moment

This really has turned into a compelling read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 10:11 PM Title: The Moment

Enjoyable read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 9:49 PM Title: The Moment

Oops. Looks like he caught her afterall. 🤓

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 9:23 PM Title: The Moment

Gees. She can't catch a break at the moment. Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:55 PM Title: The Moment

Lol. You know I'm so hypocritical. If canon Jerkob came out and said 'she's mine' that would be so repulsive and icky. But when Eddie says that well let's just say there is a lot of swooning happening around here. LOL

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:23 PM Title: The Moment

Oh. Didn't expect Eleazar. Edward is so sweet. Confused but sweet. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:03 PM Title: The Moment

Good backstory and Edward is always Hawt

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:32 PM Title: The Moment

This is really interesting. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:16 PM Title: The Moment

Oh. Wow. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:06 PM Title: The Moment

Nice mystery developing. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:25 PM Title: The Moment

Nice one. Thanks

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:17 AM Title: Taking Chances

So many tears.

such a lovely story.

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:44 AM Title: The Reunion

this is one of my most favorite ffs ever!!! i just love ever word of it...i know how hard it is being so busy and finding your mojo but one day you will do a future shot or something for this. as for me i cant wait to see what it brings...flove ya girlie!

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:00 PM Title: The Moment

Diferent I like it

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:52 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Really a great story!  Thanks for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 5:26 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a delightful escape from the angst and a great reconnecting for Bella and Charlie. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 7:03 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Bella is definitely wise beyond her years. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 6:48 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 6:22 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

It was good of Bella to stand up for Lauren and Jessica. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Another great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 6:51 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 9:02 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 8:09 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, the parents really did a number on these poor kids. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 6:17 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a couple of eventful chapters. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 8:28 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Very intense!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 3:35 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Soooooo, the plot thickens. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow,  didn't want to stop there. Glad I don't have to wait for an update. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 8:44 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Love that she was able to stand up to Mike and his cronies. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:32 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great chapter!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:04 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, wasn't expecting that they were involved with her abduction and for them to not tell anyone is all kinds of sick. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:56 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I thought Garrett had already told Bella that Peter was watching her for him. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 10:55 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm really glad I don't have to wait for updates. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Reunion

thanks for sharing this AWESOME!!! story on here with us ;D

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 9:55 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

That had to help both of them. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 9:48 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

So glad they called Edward to come be with her when she goes into the room! 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:17 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How horrible that she can't even play piano anymore. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:09 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How very observant Garrett is. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 2:23 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Such a great job giving us the details of Bella's horrible trial. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 12:34 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, they have all been terribly abused. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:31 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

She didn't handle that very well, but if anyone has the right to be angry, it would be Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:25 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I don't think Bella is going to understand. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:18 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

What a horrible thing for that teacher to do to her. 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:09 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Its stupid, wrong and irresponsible to let a really hurt girl go to school It doesn't make sense I'm going to stop reading 



Author's Response:

Probably a good idea to stop reading. I do appreciate you taking the time to at least attempt my story.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:31 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

What happened to Jasper and Rose's parents not wanting their children around Bella?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:17 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

These kids are remarkable. It's great that they are so supportive of Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:10 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm guessing that Rose and Jasper aren't going to react well to their parents determination to keep them away from Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 10:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How horrible for Bella to have to endure that after everything else she has been through. I'm so sad u had to remove ur stories from FanFiction, but am so very grateful that they are still available on TWCS. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:44 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm glad Bella had the idea. Can't wait to see how Emmett does in the kitchen. LOL

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:43 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:07 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a touch chapter to read. Poor kid. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 4:06 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

It was great to hear from Edward. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:58 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I was reading this on Fanfiction.net, but it disappeared between chapters. Anyway, I'm glad it is over here so I can finish this wonderful story. What a horrible thing to happen to Bella, especially the hysterectomy. I hope they're able to find some of the other men involved in violating her. 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:17 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:11 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:00 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:50 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:40 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:22 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:38 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:28 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:15 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:05 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:33 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:15 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

She's amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:03 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:48 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Uh-oh 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:39 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:27 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:19 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:07 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Uh-oh! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:23 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Go Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

They are amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:05 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:47 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:38 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wonderful 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:31 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:25 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantabulous 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:19 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it 

 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

She is such a strong person 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:54 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:36 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Emmett is an amazing brother!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:57 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:35 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:02 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:55 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 2:06 AM Title: The Moment

Nice..Edward..

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 1:58 AM Title: The Moment

Wow..I really love...this vampire.. Bella..awesome..

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