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Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:52 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Really a great story!  Thanks for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 5:26 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a delightful escape from the angst and a great reconnecting for Bella and Charlie. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 7:03 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Bella is definitely wise beyond her years. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 6:48 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 6:22 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

It was good of Bella to stand up for Lauren and Jessica. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Another great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 6:51 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 9:02 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 8:09 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, the parents really did a number on these poor kids. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 6:17 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a couple of eventful chapters. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 8:28 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Very intense!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 3:35 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Soooooo, the plot thickens. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow,  didn't want to stop there. Glad I don't have to wait for an update. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 8:44 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Love that she was able to stand up to Mike and his cronies. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:32 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great chapter!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:04 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, wasn't expecting that they were involved with her abduction and for them to not tell anyone is all kinds of sick. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:56 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I thought Garrett had already told Bella that Peter was watching her for him. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 10:55 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm really glad I don't have to wait for updates. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Reunion

thanks for sharing this AWESOME!!! story on here with us ;D

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 9:55 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

That had to help both of them. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 9:48 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

So glad they called Edward to come be with her when she goes into the room! 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:17 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How horrible that she can't even play piano anymore. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:09 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How very observant Garrett is. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 2:23 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Such a great job giving us the details of Bella's horrible trial. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 12:34 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow, they have all been terribly abused. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:31 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

She didn't handle that very well, but if anyone has the right to be angry, it would be Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:25 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I don't think Bella is going to understand. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 9:18 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

What a horrible thing for that teacher to do to her. 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:09 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Its stupid, wrong and irresponsible to let a really hurt girl go to school It doesn't make sense I'm going to stop reading 



Author's Response:

Probably a good idea to stop reading. I do appreciate you taking the time to at least attempt my story.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:31 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

What happened to Jasper and Rose's parents not wanting their children around Bella?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:17 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

These kids are remarkable. It's great that they are so supportive of Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:10 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm guessing that Rose and Jasper aren't going to react well to their parents determination to keep them away from Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 10:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

How horrible for Bella to have to endure that after everything else she has been through. I'm so sad u had to remove ur stories from FanFiction, but am so very grateful that they are still available on TWCS. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:44 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm glad Bella had the idea. Can't wait to see how Emmett does in the kitchen. LOL

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:43 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:07 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a touch chapter to read. Poor kid. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 4:06 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

It was great to hear from Edward. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 3:58 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I was reading this on Fanfiction.net, but it disappeared between chapters. Anyway, I'm glad it is over here so I can finish this wonderful story. What a horrible thing to happen to Bella, especially the hysterectomy. I hope they're able to find some of the other men involved in violating her. 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:17 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:11 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:00 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:50 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:40 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:22 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:38 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:28 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:15 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:05 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:33 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:15 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

She's amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:03 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:48 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Uh-oh 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:39 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:27 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:19 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:07 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Uh-oh! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:23 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Go Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

They are amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:05 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wow

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:47 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:38 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Wonderful 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:31 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:25 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantabulous 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:19 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it 

 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

She is such a strong person 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:54 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:36 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Emmett is an amazing brother!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:57 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:35 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:12 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Fantastic!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:02 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:55 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:49 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 2:06 AM Title: The Moment

Nice..Edward..

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 1:58 AM Title: The Moment

Wow..I really love...this vampire.. Bella..awesome..

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 4:07 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

very emotional story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here with us ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:20 PM Title: The Moment

awesome story ;) i loved her powers ;) how come they had silver rings? wouldn't platinum be stronger?  also their father wasn't a minister? ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:44 PM Title: The Moment

This was areally good story, regardless of it being your first vampire tale! All the elements of a good story were there and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:29 PM Title: The Moment

Quite a lovely way to say goodbye, even though it took three hundred years to achieve!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:13 PM Title: The Moment

Such a soul-satisfying ending to that battle! The wolves are pretty happy Bella didn't end the world, too. I think she's rather glad about that herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:00 PM Title: The Moment

It's with a sense of gratitude that read the scene where Bella dealt with that nasty little bitch, Jane! Aro was a ower hungry deluded fool!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:29 PM Title: The Moment

Hope there's enough help for Bella to defeat Aro and his army!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:16 PM Title: The Moment

I think it was the perfect time for them to totally complete their bond this way! I'm betting it will make them even stronger now they are truly one.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 7:53 PM Title: The Moment

Whew, that was close! I didn't think Edward was going to be able to talk sense to Bella for a minute!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 7:32 PM Title: The Moment

Bella seems to have tapped into Alice's powers, and witnessed what could happen when the Volturi come for her. What I don't understand is why them coming causes Bella to kill her family? It makes no sense!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 7:10 PM Title: The Moment

I really like the rapport between Bella and Rose. This isn't the usual dynamic for those two, and it's a nice change. I'm thinking Rose is on the right track, also. Bella may have all that power and ability, but it doesn't mean she has to end the world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 6:57 PM Title: The Moment

This is such a poor time for Carlisle to stick his nose into Bella's love life! Oh wait, maybe it's Jasper?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 6:28 PM Title: The Moment

Okay, now I have to hear what this prophecy is all about!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 5:45 PM Title: The Moment

It must be a real burden, to have that much guilt weighing down your soul. Maybe acknowledging Edward's love for her, and her's for him, will help ease that burden.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 5:27 PM Title: The Moment

Appears that Edward is a calming influence on Bella's enormous powers. It's progress that she's finally admitted to at least thinking she's in love with Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 5:12 PM Title: The Moment

Now what do the wolves want with the vampires? It's good that Carlisle and Bella discussed Edward and it's good that she and Eleazar cleared the air a bit.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:57 PM Title: The Moment

Now we know why the brothers want Bella. Hope to heaven they never find a way to get her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:45 PM Title: The Moment

Eleazar knows how to understand powers, so he must be telling the truth about Bella! That was a kind of devestating story, alright. Don't blame Bella for the guilt she bears.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:31 PM Title: The Moment

Well, obviously no love lost between Bella and Eleazar. Now UI'm curious to know what went down in Africa! It seems to mean an awful lot to Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:09 PM Title: The Moment

Maybe now they will figure it out! Hearing how Bella destroyed a large newborn army, I'm beginning to see why even the Volturi don't mess with her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 3:00 PM Title: The Moment

Oh goody, now we get to hear the history pf Jasper and Bella! Can't Bella or Edward figure out what's gouing on between them? I never thought vampires were that clueless!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:46 PM Title: The Moment

Just had a suspicion that shapeshifters might be involved with that uneasy feeling Bella had! She kind of seems to enjoy school more than she thought she would.

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