Date: 17 Feb 2016 2:42 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm glad Esme voiced the things to Elizabeth that Edward probably never would have said. That being said, although I stayed and raised my kids after my ex abandoned us, I was still selfish and used drugs to cope with my heartache, thereby alienating my kids forever. Although it has been many years and I am drug and alcohol free for 21 years now, and despite words to the contrary from them, my relationships with them are forever changed and I can't expect any better from them. This chapter brought all this to the forefront for me. Thanks for this lovely story. I am very much enjoying it and hope you still have contact with the fandom.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:44 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Thanks for the pics at the end of this chapter! Your words did a good job describing the outfits, but the pics are nice to have! I too have the feeling that Trager or his friends are not done with them yet....
Date: 12 Feb 2016 10:26 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Last chapter for me for today. I love their playlists, and hearing which songs they picked, but the lyrics in the body of the chapter was tedious and I skipped over most of them, especially the ones I knew. Sorry, just my opinion. I'm glad they worked things out.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 4:32 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
What will happen to Tony? Who will man the front desk now? Can they get someone they trust on such short notice. I'm glad Bella and Edward worked it all out, but what will happen with their SWAT training now? Will they get in trouble for leaving? Too many questions....I'll just read.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 7:14 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I know their relationship is new, but for Bella to think the worst immediately without giving him any chance to explain isn't right. I hope she doesn't get kidnapped or anything like that on her way back to Chicago!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 3:20 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
OH I don't like that the mob has a mole on Alice's security detail, both for now when they're guarding both of them while the guys are out of town, and for afterward when it's just Alice. I hope Jacob might play a major role in helping the girls when the bad guys try to take them.....j/s. and p.s. I really don't like when Alice fusses and tries to glam up Bella, telling her that Edward will love it and it will drive the other girls off. I think that plain Bella alone is enough to do that, and if she isn't then Edward isn't sincere. Alice needs to butt out! just my 2 cents!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:16 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
So, I am guessing that new doctor Trevor is the new boss! Oh ugh! Looks like Bella and Alice are in trouble....love the lovey dovey kissy face stuff!! Can't wait for the first real lemon between them, lemon hoor that I am....
Date: 08 Feb 2016 10:37 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm noticing, the more of this story I read, that it just flows beautifully. The written words on the page slide easily into my head and heart. I love that Edward has finally admitted to himself that he is in love with Bella! Something makes me think it will take her a while to really believe this....
Date: 08 Feb 2016 9:04 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm glad he finally got to tell her his POV of what happened with Maggie. I know they aren't done resolving this, but maybe their friendship, at least, has been repaired a little. I wonder if Trevor IS in fact a player. He seemed nice....
Date: 08 Feb 2016 8:10 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I get how he feels. I do. It's better to never let anyone get close enough to hurt you than it is to be heartbroken when it inevitabley happens at the end of a relationship. I can relate to that. I can attest to the fact that all that kind of life gets you is alone and lonely at age70.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 3:45 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Hi there! This story has been on my TBR list for a long time! Another of yours was rec'd to me but I thought since I've had my eye on this one longer, that I would read it first. I'm ecstatic to find it here in it's unedited form and will happily read it here. Slutward! I love that name....can't wait to read of his, and the other guys', adventures.....
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:13 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
You brought tears to my eyes how you wrote about how proud Emmett, Bella and Edward were of baby Emma. and then I totally LAUGHED OUT LOUD when Bella asked Edward "exactly when did you become the girl in this relationship?" Your writing is amazing, riveting and keeps me on the edge of my seat with interest. I hope you, someday, see this and let me know if you have published anything. TYVM! 11/23/15
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:33 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
OMGoodLord, heaven help them all...your writing is amazing, powerful, gripping. I could go on, but what would be the point? I think this has to be the most any written word has ever held me captive...like Bella and her hostages. Not only the hostages in the ER waiting room, but those of her very dear, loved ones, Edward, Emmett and the SWAT brothers as they fight to help/save her. This made me gasp for my breath. Stephenie Meyer cannot hold a candle to your talent. I certainly hope you see this and continue your ability in writing. TYVM! 11/21/15
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:01 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I LOVED how you wrote that Edward knew the moment when he fell in love with Bella............he knew he did not deserve her and "he could not have her, but needed to be saved from her" (song on the soundtrack of Breaking Dawn Part 2).............just goes to show you that what is meant to be, will be! I love, love, love your writing and I hope you see these comments. I would love to know if you are writing or if you have had something publised in Real Life............thank you! 11/23/15
Date: 01 Nov 2015 2:58 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
im really not fimiliar with this website but i really needed to write a review.
so i had originally fell apon this story a few years back i believe, i got to around chapter 20? before my laptops history was erased and i totally forgot the link to this story.. now just a few days ago my laptop sort of actually started working and showing my book marks AND i happened to find this story again.
and holy cow i fell in love with this story all over again! im not even a twilight fan im not even a bella/edward fan i mainly just liked twilight for the wolf shifters. i also am not even a fan of one person perspective HOWEVER! despite all of this i was pulled into this incrediblly written story that some how popped out of hiding for me.. i have been reading nonstop for the last 3-4 days and im in love, this story is so thought out and amazingly put together.
i cant express enough how much i enjoyed this story! i could totally see myself in bella as this girl next door tom-boy feminist and it made me like it so much more! the way you wrote edwards and bellas relationship had me craving me own and the bond between emmett and bella was so amazing and inspired me to protect my own brother. this whole story had me sinking into this world of doctor bella where i could fully imagine the scenes playing out in my head.
It was so cool to find this story after a few years and i just really needed to express how much you have inspired me to write my own fanfictions while trying out 1 person perspective and trying new things too. im not sure if your still on this site but thank u for writing such an amazing story .
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:59 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Wow!! I re-read this one in just few hours, its past 4 in the morning. It sure kept me engrossed! I forgot half the events that happened. I got so mesmerised by it all over again. It gave me heart ache when the story skipped 5 years. Developments that followed teared me up. Especially Edwards back story. Good thing I read it at night otherwise I wouldn't have been able to feel it fully.
It's a lovely story, I liked roughward too at the beginning. What turn of events, you sure know how to keep your readers wanting, begging for more!
I'm surely looking forward to how further events unfold.
Date: 21 Mar 2015 8:58 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
Wow, this was a gut-wrenching read. Powerfully agonizing, in a good way. A very good way. I must have come across a rec for FYW in one of the fics I recently read, because I came in search for it. I'm so glad I did. Your writing is captivating and I found I just couldn't put it down until I was done. Now at the end, I am craving more.I know this story is years old, but I have to ask if you are well and truly done with Roughy and Isabella. Might there be more? Hopeful, but not optimistic. I enjoyed what you shared. Thank you for enthralling me with your words.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 7:10 PM Title: The Moment
I really like the rapport between Bella and Rose. This isn't the usual dynamic for those two, and it's a nice change. I'm thinking Rose is on the right track, also. Bella may have all that power and ability, but it doesn't mean she has to end the world!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:16 PM Title: The Moment
I already like that you made Bella and Carlisle siblings! Their's must be a really interesting backstory, especially if it's been three hundred years since they have seen each other! I know I'm going to want to know why and how Jasper and Bella are together, too!
Date: 19 Sep 2014 7:29 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
The Haymount sounds so fancy and familiar. Like, The Citadel where Edward lives, The Westin where Bella worked and now The Haymount, where they both enjoy food....Strange yet not.
We have some major progress here, they have moved beyond the general talking and now have actual sentences to say to each other, or is it questions seeking answers?
-looks for the next button-
Date: 19 Sep 2014 6:57 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
And there we have it....the reason for all of Edward's fuckedupwardness.
Josie is not biologically his.....so Jane was a dirty whore who led Edward to believe that Josie was his right from the get go?? No wonder Edward is suffering. I cannot imagine the pain he must be in from that betrayal which essentially broke him.
Bella's issues stem from neglect growing up, and living and dealing with the continued rejection from Renee. I'm sure watching the Graham's interact was foreign to her since she never really experienced anything like that with her own family.
I'm kind of reluctant to move onto the next chapter, primarily because there's no more 'next' button to click on and I'll be left in limbo, guessing.....Oh the drama LOL.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 6:22 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Renee is awful, what the fuck is wrong with her and why the fuck does Bella continue to torment herself with such disappointment is beyond me!
Her relationship with Edward is tenuous and so fragile.
Jane, Josie, shit how old is Edward?