Date: 01 Dec 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's chapter, especially Bella's beautiful words, was just lovely. :). I loved that the story was sweet and steamy, but also realistic, with drama, money issues, and growing pains...these two oung people faced quite a lot, but with determination and commitment, made it through. Can't ask for more than that! Glad Riley joined them, and so glad for Rosalie and Emm too! Lots of grand babies to love on.
thanks for a great read. I really enjoyed it! Lori Ann
Date: 30 Nov 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
I don't think she's being immature. If he was, she would have left him long ago. I think that after the shitstorm they've gone thru, she's just trying to stay positive. Edwards kinda clueless about the toll this is taking on her!
Date: 30 Nov 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my god....I am not a child person, admittedly....but I'd want to kill that brat! At this rate, she'll throw Masen out the freakin window! I wouldn't let her near my baby...she'd probably smack him! Gah!
I'm worried Bella will have the baby and leave, despite their contract...how much drama can she put up with??
Hey, ,maybe they can give the beastly brat to Rosé and Emmett! Hehe
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great epilog, wrapped up things very nicely! I really enjoyed this story, though it gave me fits at times. I thought if one more awful thing happened to Bella and Edward , I would weep! Sure glad everything turned out so well for them!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
That letter from Kate, especially the part for Emma, was really unexpected! That was the icing on the cake, kind of, since Bella got help for her post-partum depression. Even Bella talking to Jacob isn't so creepy now that Edward is included! When Emma called Bella mommy, I was so touched! I guess this proof that you just have to hang in there!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
Jasper ought to have his ass kicked for buying all that booze for Bella. She isnot a good drinker, it always ends up with her sick as a dog!. I'm afraid she could have a problem with her depression added to alcohol. Dangerous mixture!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
You are being awfully hard on this little family, and the stress isn't good for any of them, especially the mother-to-be! I'm thinking they all have more than enough on their plates right now and more will arrive with the birth of Masen.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank God they have Emma back and straightened her out on the notion she wasn't needed anymore, because of the new baby! I have to agree some with Edward, Bella's parents are a bit odd. They care for her, I guess but aren't real good at expressing it.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think Riley has it right, Kate's mind doesn't work like it should. She has some really weird ideas about life and how to do things! Just because she wants it makes everything okay! Nice work if you can get it! Makes me want to tear out my hair!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, at least Riley has some common sense, not wanting to be an accessory to kidnapping! Kate truly is a blonde if she thinks any of this going to work out well! Edward and Bella are just in limbo, waiting and praying that they get Emma back!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a bitchy thing to do! Kate gets pissed about not having her way with Emma, so she steals all Edward's money! Never occurs to the dumb broad she's literally taking food out of her childs' mouth! I hope he prosecutes her to the max! Thank heavens his folks can pick up the slack!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thankfully, Bella gave him another chance and this time he's not going to mess it up! Kate is being rather philisophical about getting back together with Edward, which is nice, if surprising. It looks like maybe this will be a good Christmas. The photo album was a really nice gift.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor little Bella! What a shitty introduction to life as a grownup! No wonder she feels broken and Edward now knows he accidentally caused it! I hope he can make Bella believe in him and herself and heal things between them. I wouldn't hold out much hope for Kate, not with the way Edward feels about Bella.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really don't think Edward meant to keep Kate's return a secret, he just got carried away talking phone sex with Bella. It sure hit her the wrong way, probably hurt her heart! I really hope there is a future for these two and circumstances don't screw it up!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Just what we need, another complication! I wondered if the baby-mama was ever going to show up again, and here she is! I'm a bit disappointed that Bella went right back to Jake as soon as she got back. She seems to have no faith in what Edward feels for her!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like Edward interested in more than just physical release, the way he's impressed with the rapport Bella has with Emma. Too bad they aren't a little closer to each other, area-wise. Long-distance relationships are very difficult.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
i dont like leaving negative reviews because i know you put your heart into what your writing but bella has to be either mature or imature. seeing jacob and hiding it is extremely imature. whichever way you choose to write bellas character is the right way, it just has to be consistent through out the whole story. thank you for putting your story out there though. i am enjoying it.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
well if we are going with honesty, im glad the kidnapping is resolved. when i read a story, i know that i am intrusting you, the writer, with my emotions. i dont mind angst, but when it comes to little kids, i like it resolved quickly. i would have enjoyed a more creative way in which emma was found, but i think you are doing a good job telling the story, thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I absolutely LOVED IT! And what happened to the others stories? I want to read them SOOSOOOOOO BAD! But they'll never be finished and I really wish you could. I hated when u started aging them up to 7 years. I was afraid it was gonna be one of THOSE endings. You know the ones that they get all old and then the readers left feeling like I need a better story for next time lol. Hope you will someday continue . . .
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit. Things are going to get scary aren't they? I think Bella is acting pretty much the same way a lot of us would in the same situation. JMO. There has been so much going on with everything, and she's got to be going stir crazy being in the house all the time. I know she wanted to take back the lie she told Edward, and I have a bad feeling about that. xo
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I feel so tense, this is killing me! You've written such a good story. xo
I hate Kate so much, she is so selfish. She's convinced herself that what she's doing is justified, she doesn't really care about her daughter or she wouldn't be pulling this bullshit! Arggggg!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
I knew it! I had the feeling this was going to happen. I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter just waiting for this to go down. That fuckin Kate; I want to kill her, even though she's just a fictional character. I'm so emotionally tied up in your story that sometimes I forget that! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
My heart kind of aches for these two. I swear it's so easy to misunderstand things and jump to conclusions, especially when you are so far away from the person you need to talk to. I am just so wrapped up in your story; I absolutely love it. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know if this is the right word to descibe your story, but I think it's so sweet. I know E/B have quite large obstacles to overcome, but of course anything worth having is never that easy, it takes work. **Then we have the Jake factor; I wonder how he's going to try and screw things up.**I'm still in love with your story, by the way. =)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Robicorn this story was great and i really, really , really loved it. I'v alway loved your work!!!!!! This is the first time i've been on this site,,,,, i'm alway on fanfiction reading and i read your work as well. You never disappoint!!