Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
Just found your story -don't normally like crossovers but i have enjoyed yours - occassionally disjointed and jumpy - jet i am really looking forward to the next installment. I love the idea of Charlie and Mr W working together - I would love to be a fly on the wall during their work day.
As usual I am in awe with any one with creative ability - who is able to put it out there for the world to see - I know what i like but sadly no ablility.
Thanks, I somewhat agree about creating something, yet i have a few ideas so i thought i would try.... its an interesting process.....
about the jumpyness i needed to move time along quickly sorry if i didnt do it so smoothly :)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
So far I'm following the story. One question: You mentioned that Bella was an animagus? Is that some type of shape shifter that morfs into a specific type of animal? You made a reference to Phineas Black he shifted into a large black dog or wolf is she like him?
Sirius Black was animagus in the Harry Potter series. He transformed into a dog..
Phineas Black was a previous Headmaster at Hogwarts and has many portraits to which he can go back and forth... He is used to help Bella and Dumbledore communicate that way no one can track their communications.
Now an Animagus is a magical term where a which and wizard will transform into a particular animal. J.R states that it can only be one animal and that animal is particualr to the person. Like with the patronus charm.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope that the Cullens see very soon that she fixed her own arm and maybe they will start believing her. Update soon. :)
After her apparting from there living room. I think they have ton's of questions...
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Haha lol i am loving this Bella even if she is a little cold but i guess its expected. I am curious as to why she had been with the Centaurs before. Hope you update more soon
Why she was with the Centaurs..... In my mind Bella visited with them when she was a student... Learned a bit about them and was taught some of their customs... probably did a few detentions in the forbbiden forest...
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
For some reason, I haven't been receiving email updates for your story (or any of my favorites, actually). Sorry I haven't been here to respond! I just didn't know you were updating :) Great job so far. Hopefully I'll figure all this out and get my updates fixed.
Well I hope you get if figured out too..... thanks for the review
Date: 20 May 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
So the Cullens or Edward haven't spoken to Bella (of any consequence) in months? I'm kind of confused. Are you trying to speed up the story line? That would be OK if you were. I just wanted some more Edward/Bella communication. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: everything you think is correct; we'll see on their comm skills
Date: 17 May 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yay! They finally TALKED! Progress, progress, progress :-) And THANK YOU for your explanation at the beginning...it totally answered my question. Also it put a huge smile on my face and made me blush to know you liked my reviews, haha. Merci! (I took four years of french, studied abroad for six months...and "merci" is practically the only word I remember, lol. Isn't that sad? Two words: college credit.) Anyway...I digress! This story really is getting more and more interesting. I'm excited and ready for Bella and Edward's relationship to grow. That's going to be awesome to read. Loving your updates! Can't wait until the next one :-) Have a fantastic Monday :) :)
Date: 16 May 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm just curious, are you ever planning to do a chapter from the Cullen's POV? I just found myself wondering if Bella blocked Edward's gift like she does in the books, and if Alice was able to see Bella's future/Jasper was able to feel her emotions. Again, I'm loving your story :-) If you wouldn't mind taking a moment to answer that question for me about Bella's reaction to the Cullen's powers, I'd really appreciate it :-) Thanks so much!
Author's Response: I hope my response in chapter 15 is adequate enough. If not let me know. I might try to do an out take one day but i would have to seriously think on how that would go.
Date: 16 May 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Haha it's driving me nuts that she refuse to anyone! I'm glad I got your response to my last review about Bella feeling like humans are inferior & the Cullens would help her with that. If I hadn't gotten that response, I think I'd be about ready to pull my hair out, lol. If you can't tell by my long reviews...I'm a talkative person. I have my Bachelors Degree in Communication. I feel rude if I don't leave a review. Imagine how bad I'd feel if I purposely ignored someone! I don't see how Bella can do that w/o feeling like the biggest bitch on the planet! People must think she has a stick up her butt. I love how you have her getting closer to Charlie though. She's finally beginning to learn she can grow fond of certain humans. I find their interaction sweet. :-) I hope you didn't mind my rambling. I do that at times...ha sorry! I've got more to read so I'm off :-) Loving your story :-)
Date: 16 May 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
why is she being so mean to the cullens ... she can see from the time spent observing them that they are different and dont behave like 'typical' vampires ....
Author's Response: one phrase, Bella is troubled. There will be more of an explanation in the notes.
Date: 13 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww...poor Mike. I never thought he was a creep, just...desperate, haha. I'm glad she's finally in school. Maybe things will start progressing faster now. Update soon :-)
Author's Response: I dont know if I havent made it clear or not, but my magical Bella wouldnt really want to respond with muggles. She has a distaste for muggles and how they live. I think the Cullens will help her with this.
Date: 11 May 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I agree that the Bella/Jake thing was just aggravating. If she was that in love, it should have not really been that big an issue. I also really like your Charlie's attitude. I always hated his in her face treatment when she was rarely around him growing up and then that she was over 18. He should have had a little more respect for her. Looking forward to next time. p
Date: 10 May 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loving the update! I'm so glad Charlie's in the story now. I love some Charlie! And also love the fact you aren't planning a romantic triangle between Bella, Edward, and Jacob. I agree with you...keep the romance between Bella and Edward and keep the friendship between Jake and Bella. Romantic Jake and Bella just didn't mix for me. I'm so ready for Bella to meet the Cullens! Next chapter? Update soon :-)
Date: 06 May 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love this chapter! It's nice to see the story progressing. It's going to be awesome to see Bella finally meet the Cullens at school. I can't wait for that chapter :-) And no worries about the wait. As a communication major, I'm very used to writing a minimum of 3 papers a week - mainly for this particular semester - and a sucks beyond belief. I'd love to write for fun, but writing that many papers kinda sucks the fun outta it. I don't see how you had the strength to update, haha. I'd have to have a break if I were you. Loving the update though! Can't wait to read what you have for us next :-)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yay! I love being asked random questions for the story :-)Hmmm...exotic would be interesting :) I was about to say go for a North American animal because the exotic feline would be more noticeable...but then I realized a feline is going to stick out like a sore thumb either way in Forks, hahaha. Personally, I could see Bella as a leopard or tiger. I know...not too inventive, but they are extremely fast and powerful. I know I'll be happy with whatever you choose. :-) I'm surprised Edward hasn't heard any of Bella's thoughts yet. Does this Bella possess the same shield that the Bella in the series does? Update soon! Xoxo
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really getting into this :) Interesting idea...I can't wait until Bella arrives at the Cullen's. Question: are you planning on this eventually evolving into an E/B story? I'm a sucker for Team Edward stories. :) Either way I'm sure I'll enjoy whatever you come up with, I was just curious. I'm looking forward to your next update! :)