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Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 10:25 AM Title: Confessions - BPOV

Aha!  So this is where you moved this story!  You haven't added on to it yet though. :(  I hope you will someday soon...

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:04 AM Title: Confessions - BPOV

she is not going to be with edward right??

poor jasper!!!!!
i dont like edward he is super heartless, a taken girl is off limits no matter what you feel i understand bella view now and edward is a butt

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:45 AM Title: Confessions - BPOV

Aww that's so sweet!!!

Author's Response:

Em and Bella are cute, aren't they?! :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherry-2010 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:05 PM Title: Confessions - BPOV


Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Confessions - BPOV

I hurt for poor Em and B, they had an awful childhood.  Great chapter.


Author's Response:

Thank you!

I know, they had such sad childhoods, but Emmett is happier now and Bella is getting there :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:12 AM Title: Fix it - RPOV

:-/ oh no don't be sad jazzy! And Rosalie is the peacemaker how cute!

Author's Response:

Love Rosie!

She was acting peacemaker, but she also wasn't that nice to Bella, really, the way she was doubting Bella (Rightfully so) and asking Emmett to tell on her ...

I know right! Poor Jazz!!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:09 AM Title: Fix it - RPOV

Rose was very confusing to me in this chapter.....It's almost like she already knows but going through the motions like a friend should.. I dont' I mean when she talked to Bella she more or less admitted she didn't believe her. .When she talked to Emmett she just kept demanding to know if they slept together..Why wouldn't she want to know if they've been doing anything.??Or is kissing and touching Not cheating to Rose......i don't know her conversation with Emmett was odd..... But then she turned around and defended Bella to Jasper but when Jasper more or less called her a slut (talking about how she was before they meant her) Rose didn't say that's not true....Can't wait to see how Bella acts towards Edward now...... HE did nothing wrong so this better not be thrown back at him...he didn't know Bella had a boyfriend at first.. This is all Bella's fault.. Maybe Jasper and Edward should talk ... cuz they both were kind of lied too..  Great story can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hello Sexy Lady!!

Rose knows what Bella was like before they met her maybe better than Jasper. She was messed up.  She knows that Kissing and touching is cheating, and she's pissed at that, but as well as being worried about the cheating she's worried about B and what it could mean for her. Well, pissed and worried. Bella's backstory - well parts of it - come out in the next chapter and then hopefully you'll be able to understand how Rose is worried about Bella.

Jasper and Edward will talk ... or I suppose 'communicate' would be a better word ...there isn't so much actual talking going on.

Bella and Edward will definetly be seeing each other again.... I mean, they go to the same school and have the same friends. We shall see what happens! ... There are a lot more people campaigning for Team Edward!!

Thanks for the review baby!


Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:32 PM Title: Fix it - RPOV

Thanks for a great chapter.   Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

You are welcome :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing ... I hope you like the next chapter as well!

Reviewer: ali XP Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:54 AM Title: Tacos are Better - BPOV

FUCK!!! I want more story.... it's kinda super fuckin' awesome

Author's Response:


Thanks for the AWESOME review! You rock!

I hope you like the rest of the story as well!

Mel x x x

Reviewer: jnc420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:52 PM Title: Tacos are Better - BPOV

hummmmmmmmm  drama drama drama...can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing ... I love the drama too - so be expecting a lot more!

I'll have the next chapter up soon.

x x x

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:56 AM Title: Tacos are Better - BPOV

OMG Bella is playing a very dangerous game.. i mean she is either in very huge denial.. or she is just the biggest liar in the world........ I mean she did cheat on him.. Yes they never had sex, then say we never had sex........I have had sex with no one but you.. if you don't want to admit to messing around...... she didn't have sex she almost did but Jacob disrupted them......

But damn she has managed to fuck up 4 lives... i mean Rose and  her will never be the same. Jasper is heartbroken, Edward is lost not knowing what games she is playing and Emmett will be caught in the middle between his loyality to his best friend Edward, his possible new girlfriend Rose... or the new friendship he has developed with Bella...... Actually Alice is about the only one who will not be directly hurt but even then she won't like that Bella played with Edwards emotions like that....... i don't know... this is so messed up it's like Bella feels she can live two different lives one with Jasper and one with Edward and now she realized she can't........ I mean i don't even know what to say.......i mean anyone with eyes saw how Bella was with Edward she never hid it ....... and she damn well knew Jasper was coming to that party but yet she still hang on him...   I think she needs to realize she has more then lust for Edward because you don't act like she did knowing it would get back to Jasper.. I mean all he has to do is ask people around town .. the way she acted at schools and parties and leaving with him.. and the truth or dare....... not cool..  Poor Jasper and Poor Edward..... i feel bad for both of them.....

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:45 PM Title: Wild Nights! - BPOV

OK well that answered that question... Rose got her in ass about Edward..

Now i forgot to say on the last chapter what's up with Edward won't kiss Lauren on the mouth but he fucked her without a condom??? WTF....

I will be honest I kind of skimmed over the sex with Jasper and Bella.. so i can not comment if it was hot or not....(sorry).. i am the totally B & E girl but i really do like Jasper.. just not doing Bella...

Now what was that with little miss Alice...... and how she acted when she saw Jasper.......and the blushing...... (all embarassed).....hmm interesting.. although I don't think Jasper noticed Alice......he seemed a bit pieced off over Bella's reaction and looks towards Edward.....had to laugh a bit how he noticed Bella wanted to know who was behind that door and beat some bitchs ass.

poor Edward seemed so hurt.... i felt bad for him. i really do cuz Bella is playing games with Edward big time.. she is leading him on.. . yes he knows (now ) that she has a boyfriend but when she is all hanging on him and kissing him and asking him please to fuck her...... what is he suppose to do ..and now when her man is back she flauts her relationship with Jasper in his face.........and that is bullshit........... and Bella needs to's not fair to either Jasper or Edward........SO i say dump Jasper and run to Edward.. lol

Author's Response:

He did use a condom ...  it was like movie sex - you just don't see it ...

<3 Jasper! All Jasper sex is hot! I could rec you so many hot and awesome stories with Jazz!!

Poor Jasper! Don't you feel bad for him... moving all the way out there and then seeing Bella all over this other guy?! Poor baby!

Nooo!!! I say keep Jazz and leave Edward!! .... You cheer Team E and I'll be Team Jazz ... we'll see what happens .. it's a hard choice! Hell, you can always console Edward and I'll make Jasper better if it goes wrong for them ...

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:49 PM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV

OK i was going to ask and kept forgetting did Edward even know she had a boyfriend?? Cuz i didn't think it had every came up before with him.. and now she just told him.....after he said she was a tease....

So  umm ya Bella is a bit slutty but only with Edward so I guess that's OK , it's kind of funny reading how Alice doesn't know how "to dress right" in this story and it's Bella helping her with the what a twist

So is James a 'good guy' in this story or is he a piece of shit in diguise??
It's hard to see James as a good guy.........Alice has to hate him for a

So Wankward huh?? Sounds like he spanks a lot.. like whacking

OK so Rose isn't a fan of Edwards huh.? Big shocker

But ya know it's NOT Edwards fault he ISn't the ONE in a relationship... She is , she is Wrong...  so Rose can keep her judging to where it belongs and it belongs on the one cheating on her like i said i believe Edward just now found out she has a bf. but anyways Jasper is nothing to him .........So yep before Rose decides Edward is Satan she needs to put the blame on the one who broke her brothers heart......i am so sick of everyone blaming Edward when anything happens in any of this stories between Bella and Edward.....OK my rant is over........can't wait to read next chapter.

Author's Response:

She hasn't told him out right, but Emmett and Alice know, so he knows through them. He doesn't think too much of it before she tells him though ... I mean why would he really? If she hasn't told him, then as far as he knows she is gonna break it off with the boyfriend ... that make sense??

I wanted this story to be different lol .. That;s why Ali can't dress well, and Bella and Rose are BBFs and Alice is with the guy she will be with ,...


I kinda like James! He's hot! He's not that good ... he likes to cause trouble ... but he's not exactly bad either... He's just fun.


Lmao!! I would have told you to calm down, If I hadn't read your other comment already!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:48 AM Title: Lust's Passion - BPOV

Holy shit..........that girl can't control herself around Edward can she.. I mean her loyality just flies right out the window and she knew Edward for what one day?? And only left Jasper what  week ago?? Ha.. not that i am complaining I love Edward and Bella together and they are hot.........that up against the wall as fuck....... but i am dying to know what Edward said to the mutt to get him to run with his tail between his legs......

So Edward can sing and he sang a really good song and she just now figured out he was singing it for her?????? Lol

Damn so i bet Bella is wishing she wouldn't have invited Rose and Jasper down for the party...... in a couple of

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:39 AM Title: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV

Alright damn that was a pretty fucking hot kiss for a dare.........damn.. but ya i can totally understand why she got all upset afterwards.. I mean not only did she just cheat on her boyfriend  but then he text and said how much he loved and missed her so ya i can see why she left crying.

so Emmett is acting really weird with Bella...... but he isn't attracted to her that way .... i was wondering if Bella was gonna remember to take a picture for Rose of Emmett.......

OK Jacob is a creepy fucker.. I mean hello they haven't seen each other in years.. they were friends when they were kids.. and he is all frowning and sad cuz she said she wants to be 'friends " then he kicked his tire..........damn get a grip weirdo... seriously.. he gives me the creeps.. did he think  she would run away and marry his ass....lmao..

so damn now what will Bella do.?? stay away from Edward, avoid him..?? I hope not. that would suck.

Author's Response:

Lol, wouldn't you kiss Edward like that if it was your dare though?? I would! Yeah, how sweet is Jazz! *sigh*

Rosie needs her picture of Emmett .... she needs to see how hot Emmy is... And, Bella wouldn't forget her friends - she does anything for them!

You'll never like a Jake though, lol. He is kinda creepy though ...

How could Bella stay away from Edward? Come on! Look at him ... It's a hard choice between him and Jazz .. I know who I'd choose though ... and it's not the same person as you :P

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: Bad Girl - BPOV

Damn phone sex was good but hard to imagine between Bella and Jasper but it was good..... It is gonna take me a bit to get use to Bella's umm what do u call it.......her forwardness towards people.. I mean i would say she was rude to Alice but i guess that is just her and she didn't mean it to be as mean as it was.. So where did Emmett and Edward go.. i mean she got a phone call and the they were gone??
That's the way i would like to wake up Edwards hard bulge in my

SO in 4 days Jasper is coming and Bella can't stop thinking about Edward... hmm interesting........ and Alice said Jasper is hot.... things could get interesting very fast........


Author's Response:

Aww, what's wrong with Jazz... just think about how incredibly hot he is and you'll be fine with it! You do have some Bella and Edward to keep you going :P

She wasn't being rude - it was just her nature .. .I guess calling it her 'forwardness' is a good way of describing it.

Edward and Emmett left when Bella got a phone from Jazz - Edward didn't know he was her boyfriend by then really, but he didn't like the way she was talking on the phone .. he's very jealous. And Emmett wanted to grill him about what was happening with him and Bella in the car ... we all know Em has this weird protection thing going on with B...

Alice thinks he's hot - who doesn't!- but she has a thing going on with another guy, which will come out later.


Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:25 AM Title: Black and White Town - EPOV

OK what is Emmett's damage?? I mean i understand daddy is in prison but WTH , i mean he just meant Bella and he is damaging Edwards car because Edward made and comment the he starts crying?? I don't get it.

Too funny with Jessica but if Edward doesn't like the 'girls' in forks why doesn't he drive up to Port Angles or Seattle......and meant some girls.

Ok so Edward and Alice's dad is never around ... that isn't good i assume this happened after the mother died??
Emmett's mother could to him? Is she around?
UM Bella is quite the handful isn't she........first day of school and bailing.. lol

And what were her and Edward doing in the car........just like holding hands tripping on E while she sat on his lap??? Didn't quite get that part.....


Author's Response:

You know about Emmett's issues now right?? Sorry I told you! You can punish me later!


I don't know, I guess he's lazy ... you'll have to ask him that :P He doesn't need to now he has Bella though ...


Yeah, he couldn't handle with the death of their mummy. :( Emmett's mum is around, and she'll be coming into the story later - like in the next few chapters ...


I think Bella is awesome! I wish I had the balls to walk out of school as much as she did! I could only do it a few times a week! And I always sneaked out - I didn't talk to the teachers!


Yep, they were just chilling out and taking E... you can't really ... or don't ... have sex on E - touching and stuff is all you can really do. If they weren't on E they probably be fucking there on the front seat!




Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:12 AM Title: Troublemaker - BPOV

Ok Bella is kind of a bitch huh.. now i mean i don't know the history between her and Charlie but come on that is her dad and she was also pretty rude to her mother too.. i mean she is a trouble maker admitted troublemaker but being totally disrepectful to your parents isn't cool......and she has no respect for her dad.. like to find out what's going on there...

So Emmett and Alice are not related.?? Cuz she said me and my brother Edward and Emmett introduced her as Alice Cullen .. so Emmett is dating Alice?? Or they are just good friends?

Bella invited Rose and Jasper to the welcome party? So they are going to drive all the way from AZ to Forks this weekend just to come to a party..?? Damn that's true friends cuz that is a awful long drive.......


Author's Response:

Yeah I guess she is a bitch ... but she can be real nice as well ... what she's done for Rose is nice - she love her friends. Does that make up for the snarky bitchiness??? Bella and Charlie's relationship will be an important part of the story later on ... I think their main problem is that they just don't know each other at all.


Nope, Alice and Emmett are not related - Edward and Alice are brother and sister and they met Emmett when they moved to Forks. They're just friends - not dating!


Yep, they are dedicated friends! They love Bella and wanted to see her again - they didn't really have any reasons to not go either I guess. Jazz couldn't leave his car behind either, just like Bella.


x x x

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:24 PM Title: Leaving Town Alive - BPOV

Hmm so Bella lived in AZ with Renee and Phil and she did something to get her sent to her dad's but she really didn't do it Rose did and she is covering for her?? Interesting... I can't believe Rose was able to talk her dad into moving to Forks does he not know that is where Bella is moving too .. Or maybe he doesn't care...

Phil is a druggie huh damn i agree i would hate to be Renee  when he goes through drug

I can't believe they trusted Bella to drive to Forks.. So i wonder how Bella and her dad get along.. She has been to Forks before right to visit her dad? Or is he really a dead beat and she never has been to visit.. this could be very interesting.... and Jasper and Rose will be done there in 3 weeks that isn't to bad........this is really weird having Bella and Jasper in a relationship together......i am a totally Bella and Edward girl so this is kind of hard for me to read but....... since i love u i am going to continue it.

Author's Response:

Yeah Rose did it. But Bella took the fall so Rose could still get into the good college she was supposed to. Bella was already in trouble anyway, so it didn't matter that much to her. Rosalie isn't happy about it though ... she feels mega guilt!


Yeah, I may have to do a one -shot or outtake or something of how Renee got on with Cold Turkey Phil! lol


Well, Bella had to drive, she wouldn't leave her car behind! Bella's seen her dad a few times - but not for long and they were never really close or got on well.


Aw, come on, give Jazz a chance ... he's hot! There will be some Edward/Bella moments to keep you going! I love you for reading it even though its not all Edward!

x x x

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:19 PM Title: Wild Nights! - BPOV

Oh man already Alice is swooning over Jasper turn her lesbo quick! Lmao

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:25 AM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV

I absolutly
love this story
CONTINUE. asap PLZ!!!!!

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 8:37 AM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV

i'm not into jasper and bella only edward and bella so i'll find another story to read about them together i thought yours was about them together

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 9:53 PM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV

loved it!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 9:36 PM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV

oh my! great chapter!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 9:24 PM Title: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV

What a kiss! SO HOT!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 9:23 PM Title: Lust's Passion - BPOV

Edwards place seems interesting,hope to see more of it....excited to see how everything goes when Rosalie and Jasper come...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 9:10 PM Title: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV


Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:55 PM Title: Bad Girl - BPOV

wow!!!! if that was you version of a lemon over the phone i can only imagine your real!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:46 PM Title: Black and White Town - EPOV

crazy first day of school! hey, doesnt she have a bf, lol...what about Jasper?

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:37 PM Title: Troublemaker - BPOV

curious/excited to see what happenes with the AU coupling..will it be B/J or B/E? hmmmm...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:28 PM Title: Leaving Town Alive - BPOV

i like the idea of a troublemaker Bella, my only hope is that once she meets the Cullens she doesn't change into a good girl.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:56 PM Title: Black and White Town - EPOV

Wow can't wait to see if she tells Edeward about her man Jasper.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:36 PM Title: Leaving Town Alive - BPOV

Great story so far!

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: Lust's Passion - BPOV

Cant wait to see what happens when Jasper arrives. Loving this story.

Author's Response:

Hey bearygirl,

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Troublemaker. I love reviews :)

I'm so happy you are liking thi story ... I love writing it.

Jazz will be back in the next chapter :D

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 11:13 PM Title: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV

Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: laurajaexo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Troublemaker - BPOV

rose is so funny

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Date: 04 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: Troublemaker - BPOV

omg i luv this soooo much

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