Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:14 PM Title: Seattle
so weird when i read the 1st story i clicked on your name and it took me to your page with all your stories but the last one and this one wenret one there? i had to search isabella whitlock to find them....glad i could find this!!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:07 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
Sorry for not reviewing before now. I got so caught up in the stories that I just had to finish them...fantastic...please consider doing another sequel for the European tour. I'm sure you would have lots of happy readers, me just being one of them. Thanks.
Thank you :) I might, I'm just not too familliar with Europe so it would take alot of research on my part.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Boston
Hi there, hey probably a stupid question or I have been really tired (reading this while my daughter is in hospital) but has Victoria been in the story prior to her being the Omega. Where does she fit into the whole scheme of things? Thanx.
Victoria was in the first one as one of the reporters who asked her a question at the press confrence at Charlie's bar. I brought her in as Omega because it was unexpected.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 10:23 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
Over the past few days I have read both Breaking Swan and Breaking Swan: The Tour. Both stories are fabulous!!! I really enjoyed them and as always look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:14 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
wow! You skipped ahead a whole year! I think that's great, but what happened when Breaking Dawn had to go out on tour........did little Charlie stay at home with Bella? Did they go together as a family?
Say you are going to write the European tour with little Charlie and the rest of the babies around!?!?!?!
I can see it now!............PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, Breaking Swan didn't go back on tour during the year because they were focusing on a new album, Charlie's birth, then Olivia's and Aubrey's.
And I might write another one covering the European tour but I don't know yet. At times this one got really hard to write and I would have to do a ton of research on Europe before I could do it.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:00 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
So no more tour? not even a sequel? oh well it ended great. my perverted self would have loved one last lemon but that was cute none the less. lol thanks again bye
Thank you:) You never know when I might decide to do another one...just saying...
Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:30 PM Title: Hurry, Baby, Hurry
GOD you had me crying that whole chapter. it was so beautiful and I thought for sure Edward wasn't going to make it. I'm so happy he did. and then Charlie at the end had me crying so soon after I calmed down. lol thanks again bye
I sobbed like a baby through the entire chapter! I swear I went through nearly an entire box of tissues!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:29 PM Title: Hormones, Grammies, and Baby
aww that last part got me a lot weepy. lol I love that they one their grammies and I thought for sure that she was the one going to be in labor not Kate but oh well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
It got to me too! Thanks:)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:40 AM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
love the update! but you need to change it from a solid paragraph to have proper spaces. It will make it easier to read.
Well, damn. Thats not how I uploaded it! Thanks for the heads up. I'll fix it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:37 PM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
First for the soundtrack I too love Let's get lost then followed by Jonathan Low. As for this chapter I love how emotional bella is with all the hormones. she can go from crying to being mad to crying again. too cool how you depict that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Jonathan Low is a good one too!! Honestly, I love the whole soundtrack. I have all three soundtracks in one playlist....Just amazing music!
Pregnancy is such a crazy thing! Hormones are insane!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:51 PM Title: Home Sweet Home
Great chapter. Bella blames herself over their baby being sick is sad. I can understand where she is coming from but she needs to let that guilt go. She did everything for the most part right.
Thank you:) I did the same thing when we found out about my son's defect. I worried that it was something I did, even if everyone tried to reassure me that it wasn't.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:38 AM Title: Los Angeles
that's not it right? :( I want to see the baby. I can't wait to see the baby and then (it won't be long) after sex with Bella and Edward. lol I can't wait. thanks again bye
Nope, we have a few chapters to go before I am done with them:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:13 AM Title: Phoenix
yeah for Dunkin Doughnuts and yeah for peanut butter. lol I can't wait for more. I hope bella has another day of increased horniness just so Edward can eat his words about thanking god that bella is into cravings and not so much sex anymore. those poor guys. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:01 PM Title: San Antonio
wow you just keep giving us more and more don't you? lol I loved it. two sex scenes in one chapter. you are a goddess. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Thank you. The updates will start slowing down now that I am caught up to what I have on FF.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:41 PM Title: Dallas
god that girl had me crying almost all the way through. from them not believing her to her nightmares to the bathtub to the little girl at the end. those moments had me crying like a baby. I know wimpy but true. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
It had me in tears too when writing it, espicailly since it is something so close to me.
Date: 23 May 2010 10:37 AM Title: New York City
aww I love the sequel and Im SOOOO glad they caught Omega which EWWW by the way Victoria? Gross. :D I loved it though. totally threw me off guard. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 16 May 2010 2:41 PM Title: Denver
Loved it as always!! Here are the others!! Tell me if i have forgotten sth or/and if you want me to change sth!!