Date: 20 Jan 2013 8:17 PM Title: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
Kate and her dad were good with each other by the end of this, but it was heartbreaking to see Bella gone. This story was Edward and Bella against the odds and I much prefer the other epilogue! Sorry, just call me a wishy-washy old woman!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 7:55 PM Title: Outtake - #1 A Picture's Worth 1000 Words
I know this was touched on in the whole of your story, but highlighting the background of that picture was great! Emmett really did a pretty good job of pushing Edward to put his feelings into music! And we know how well that turned out!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:56 AM Title: At Last
With all the stuff they both had to deal with, it's a really good thing they got their happy ever after. You mentioned several times this was your first story, and I would never have known if you hadn't told us. It's really a good one and the dummies that didn't review, well, it's their loss!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:34 AM Title: Hold On
No thanks on the outake where Bella didn't survive! That would only make me cry,and I nearly did that already! What a shock about her mom! What a secret to keep all these years. Nearly as bad as that supreme asshole, Jake and his bullshit story to the tabloid! Poor Bella, after all she's been through, just pile on some more!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 5:41 AM Title: Many the Miles
This was a pretty good chapter, funny when the girls caught Edward in his towel, and embarassing when Rose called. The Plaza was nice to get him another suite in a rival hotel. He was about to enjoy dinner when the news sucker-punched him! It gave me goosebumps when Edward saw that damned red hair in the crowd around Bella! Now he can worry himself sick over that!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 5:25 AM Title: Save Me
Poor Edward, guys have a tough time dealing with situations like this. Don't get me wrong, rape and abuse are horrifying for either gender, guys are just supposed to be tougher . A bunch of b.s.as far as I'm concerned! I am glad that all it revealed now between them. Hopefully it will be just a little easier from now on!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 4:36 AM Title: Lonestar
I really wish these two would take their aggravation out on the right target instead of each other! Their real problem i9s crazy Victoria and it's too bad the police can't do something about her! Plus, it will helpa lot for Edward to confess whatever the hell it is he's keeping from Bella!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 4:21 AM Title: And so it goes...
This time apart is going to be bad enough, for both of them, but this ishorrifying! How did that crazy bitch find out about Bella, let alone where she lives? Edward has to let her know immediately and Emmett needs to watch over her!Pronto!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 3:50 AM Title: Tit for Tat
Edward was enjoying his birthday weekend, and patting himself on the back a little, and Rose has to rain on his parade! Wonder what has her panties in a twist? Plus, I'm really curious what deep, dark secrts Edward is still hiding from Bella?
Date: 20 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: Birthday Wishes
Shame on those rude, inconsiderate readers, treating a pregnant lady like that! ( you were a bit shameless about reviews, but what the heck!) I don't mind Edward being a mama's boy, it just means he treats women well because she raised him right. The way he loved Bella was pretty darn caring and thoughtful, too. Definitely one of the good guys!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:52 AM Title: Heal Over
Poor Bella, to think it was her fault that Charlie is dead! It's awful what happened to Edward, but at least no one died! I wonder if that was his mom that was singing happy birthday while getting a shock? Evidently, he really doesn't have sleepovers!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:28 AM Title: What an Honor
This chapter was full of all kinds of good stuff! Too bad it had to end with a visit from Edward's psycho stalker. Now they each have a secret to share with the other, Bella about her scars, and Edward about the attack! The benefit was very touching. It always chokes me up when kids are hurting, especially the terminal ones!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:03 AM Title: Be Gentle to Me
I'm not really sure why Bella didn't tellEdward about the award, unless it just never was the right time. I also have a sneaky feeling that Emmett and Rosalie both being awol this morning is rather suspicious! Hope Edward isn't too upset with Bella.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 1:36 AM Title: Beautiful Disaster
And just when things were going so well, too! Bella must be crushed, to have heard only the last little part of this conversation. She had no way of knowing that Edward was just trying to get Rosalie to back off. I wonder how hw is at groveling?
Date: 19 Jan 2013 10:57 PM Title: Breathless
Pretty darn nice for a first date. I'm going to now cross my fingers and hope this progresses like it should, without too much angst. I se why Bella would have issues with her ascars, but I'm also betting they won't matter to Edward. Who does she think was the inspiration for the Brown Eyes song?
Date: 19 Jan 2013 10:20 PM Title: Another Place to Fall
I noticed you managed to skip the story of Bella's scars, but hope to hear it later. Now I see the connection to the Burn Center. I'm highly encouraged that Bella has agreed to not only a Laker's game, but dinner at Edward's house also. This sounds promising!
Date: 19 Jan 2013 9:58 PM Title: The Interview
The interview went pretty well, except for Victoria the stalker calling in. It's nice that Edward and Bella both seem to want to see more of each other. I noticed the slightly paniced reaction to the Burn Center benefit, so Bella must have some connection to that, I'm guessing.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 8:43 PM Title: Moving on
I'm guessing that the fact of both Bella and Edward moving the same day will be significant? Since they both know Jasper, I'm also guessing they will meet somehow. Edward's reason for moving sounded pretty damn scary, too!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:47 PM Title: Coming Home - Futuretake 15 yrs later
thanks for the look into the future!! i loved it
Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to revisit these two crazy kids. Thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 10:07 PM Title: Heal Over
Just keeps gvetting better. I am a PTSD survivor and you get it. That is not easy. Well done.
Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad that my story felt true to life. That means the absolute world to me. I'm sorry for whatever you had to endure and hope that your path to healing is well under way.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 9:26 PM Title: What an Honor
I am truly loving the story so far. Great characterization and excellent story exposition.
Thanks so much for the lovely review. It means so much to hear your kind words and thoughts. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 26 May 2011 9:53 PM Title: What an Honor
so she is a burn victim and you made reference that she did it to herself hmmm?
No no. She was in a car crash. The car exploded and the back of her shirt caught fire & burned her. Sorry for any confusion.
Date: 26 May 2011 5:04 PM Title: Another Place to Fall
STORY IS MOVING ALONG NICELY
Thanks for the review. I tried to make sure the pacing was kept at a steady clip. I didn't want to drag the whole thing out. Thanks again & hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:10 AM Title: Tit for Tat
of course the preverbially monkey wrench! haha! i can't believe you apologized for having a baby! that is terrible... if people complained to you for not updating they are a bunch of jerkoffs!! congrats late and i have to say better you than me!!! haha sorry i had my two!! love the story by the way!
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. Thanks for the well wishes. My baby is over a year old now. Sad to say. Thanks again!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:18 PM Title: Beautiful Disaster
oh ed you really step into it bad!!! i hope you get it off ya quick! bella isn't as strong as you think!
He just has no clue, does he? Keep reading. He has a lot of missteps along the way. Thanks again for your review.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 9:57 PM Title: Breathless
sweet i love ed..... i will take you ed!!
Aw, thank you for leaving me these reviews. They make me so very happy. Yes, I just want to take him home in my pocket and keep him forever. lol
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
Nice one - just found it today and had to read through it all at once. sorry for not leaving more reviews but I have to get up for work in a couple of hours. definitely like the HEA better, but the alternate ending was heartfelt. thanks for sharing!
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:41 PM Title: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
Wow, what a great story! This epilogue had me in tears.
I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks so very much for the review. I appreciate it.
There will hopefully be an outtake up soon. (as soon as my poor swamped beta gets back to me!)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: Hold On
I was so hoping that I was wrong about Jake, but sadly I wasn't. But maybe it's better that it is all out of the now. She has a brilliant future ahead of her and this way she doesn't have to be looking over her shoulder all the time waiting for someone to find out about it.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 9:46 PM Title: Burn it Down
I never realized that lint was so flamable. It make sense thought anyway. I know that this will sound weird but I really liked this chapter. Victoria is crazy but what we found out about her was interesting. I knew somethig was up with Garrett but I never would of guesses this. Man that is messed up.
Then their tear filled goodbye. Hopefully it won't be the end......
Date: 04 Feb 2011 9:25 PM Title: Stop This Train
Of shit first she had to deal with Jake now Victoria, Bella can't seem to catch a break. (But seriously there woldn't be much of a story if she did. ..)
I wonder what Jake is going to do..... I can almost see him having pictures of her after the accident and him releasing them to the press. I'm sure someone would pay a pretty penny for them.
Now Victoria is in her house, hopefully someone gets there soon to help her.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 9:03 PM Title: Many the Miles
Things are moving along nicely. I had to laugh when Edward opened the door in only his towel only too be meet by two fans. I sort of wish they did have cameras....
I can't believe that Victoria is in the background I'm sure this is not going to be pretty.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 8:43 PM Title: Save Me
It was actually a little better then I was thinking. I really thought that Victoria had raped him.
I'm really glad that they are able to finally lean on each other. Great chapter. I love how all the crazy Cullen's were out to play in this chapter.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 8:09 PM Title: Time after Time
I am sooooo glad that he is going there so that they could be together and get back on track. Even thought I think there cover is completely blown in the end I think it's for the best. I am so glad that Jane was able to talk Bella into stepping outside her comfort zone. It was just what she needed. Now that Bella is going to be on tv I think they need to get on with their lives and deal with the paps...
I love this story and am saddened that there were so little reviews.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 7:45 PM Title: Lonestar
I love how you traded the Volturi's threat with the treat of the paparazzi, it was a stroke of genius on your part.
I feel so sad for them having to not only deal with the seperation, but then to have a psycho to deal with as well.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:47 PM Title: And so it goes...
I really can't blame Bella for feeling a little insecure. I mean what girl wouldn't have a little doubt about having her boyfriend want to keep their relationship a secret. Sure the important people know, but all the crazy/loose fangirls are easy there and his family is not so cheating would be simple.
Great chapter I could really feel their pain..
Date: 04 Feb 2011 12:26 AM Title: Birthday Wishes
First off I want to say Congrats on the baby. I'm sure the little one is here and that you are most likely already well established in your schedule.
I loved this chapter they got over the hardest part and now they will only have to fill in the missing holes. I really liked that Edward put Bella and her needs above his own, he really is a gentleman...... Esme would be so proud....
Date: 03 Feb 2011 11:41 PM Title: Heal Over
That was really sad. I had a feeling that she blamed herself, but I never thought it would be that bad. Then there is Edward I wonder what else he didn't tell Bella I wonder is he has some kind of scar from Victoria's attack.
I am really enjoying this It is now 12:45 am and I should really be getting some sleep, but I think I will read just one more.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 11:03 PM Title: What an Honor
Wow that was soooo sweet what Edward did for Bree. I'm glad that Bella was able to tell Edward before the concert....
I wonder what happeed with Victoria? I also wonder what happened to Bella? Why does she feel guilty about her accident. I'm also wondering if maybe it is survivors guilt.
Great chapter as always.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 8:34 PM Title: Breathless
That was so sweet......
Thank you so much for your reviews. I really appreciate them all. I remember your name from the Twisted Twilight Tales contest I just hosted. I forwarded all of your reviews to the authors. It's really great that people like you take the time to review. It means so much to hear feedback from people as they read your stories. So thanks for that!! Enjoy. Hope you like the rest. It gets a bit bumpy pretty soon, but since its finished, you don't have to wait for any of the chapters to be posted. Lucky you!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:29 PM Title: Another Place to Fall
Owwww You really are a tease arn't you. I loved it the scene on the beqach was so playfully cute. I wonder if the paps caught on?
So we got a little glimse into Bella's pain. I really hope that between Alice and Edward they can make Bella see that her scars are something that she can be proud of. Because from the sound of the burns it seems that she is lucky to be alive.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:01 PM Title: The Interview
Oh I can see the wheels turning in ALice's head. She will not be letting this one slide. I am so glad that Bella and Edward are going to be catching up and that they chemestry is so strong.
So I see that some of Edward's scars run from Victoria. I wonder what she did. Bella acted really funny when Edward mentioned that everything from his concert was going to a burn unit. I wonder what Bella's connection to that is?
Great chapter the interview was fun, and I love clumsy Bella and the fact that Edward was so concerned.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: She Works Hard for the Money
OMG! I LOVE this story. It is so well written and you have a defenite flare for describing things in a way that ou really feel like you are there.
Okay I really, really, really want to know what their stories are. It doesn't seem that he left her for his music. He doesn't seem the type that would leave his girlfriend because he wanted bigger things.
I am sort of glad that I only found the story now after you have completeled it. Because I would of gone crazy if I had to wait to find out the amswers to my questions.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 5:52 PM Title: Moving on
Oh I am intrigued... There are so many questions that I have running through my mind. Like I wonder what their stories are? I mean they have both been in some kind of accident, I wonder if they were together when it happened.
I see that Jasper is going to be their common link. I wonder if it is Alice that throws them together again.
Great start I can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:37 PM Title: Epilogue #1
wow i have to say i havent read a story this fantastic in a while congrats i think ur one of my favorite authors now. i was completely enthralled by ur story and i cant wait to read more from u. and im happy b/c i got to give u ur 100th review on this website. keep writing b/c its a very special gift that u have.
Glad you liked it! Thanks for all of your reviews & you get an outtake of your choice being the 100th review! So far I already have outtake requests for B/E in High School when he wrote his song about her and their trip to Costa Rica where they conceived Kate. So anything else is up for grabs.
SO just PM me and I'll add it to my list of stories to write!!
THanks again & feel free to pimp this out if you liked it. I'm on FF.net and Twilighted too.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: Many the Miles
this is getting good i cant wait to read more. u have me addicted to ur story wit ur out of this world writing skills keep up the good work.
You're so sweet. Glad you're enjoying it!! Not far to go now!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:25 PM Title: The Interview
oh i love your story i can't wait to read more i really love your writing style
Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the outtake of Edward & Bella in High School should be posted this week.
I also have a couple of one shots that I'll be posting in the next month or so - so put me on your author favorites & You'll know about them as soon as I do.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: At Last
Okay I take back what I said about Jacob, that was a pretty redeeming thing he did writing the letter and then turning his life around to help others. So that was pretty awesome. Loved this way you wrapped the story up.... It truly was wonderful you do have a talent and a gift hope you feel inspired to continue on with more in the future. Now I just need to read the Epilouge and Outtakes..
Laters Kathy xoxo
Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it and hoped you enjoyed the Epilogue. I'm still waiting on my beta, but hopefully my outtake will be up in no time!