Date: 16 Jul 2011 9:55 AM Title: 18. Death by Bling
thanks for having rose redeem herself.. too bad she couldn't do it before anyone got hurt. well you eased my mind knowing ed and bell got away from jessica. now they have to get out of there before it blows up!! can't wait for the end
Date: 13 Jul 2011 11:20 PM Title: 18. Death by Bling
Woo! Go Rosalie! lol Well I was shocked there wasn't another chapter after this...for some reason when I started reading this I thought it was complete lol But anyways I loved it and I can't wait to read what happens next :)
Date: 11 Jul 2011 5:08 AM Title: 18. Death by Bling
Pretty action-loaded this chapter. It seems that Rose is not that bad and only human when it comes to emotions, but in the end she made the right choices.
But it seems that everyone of the family has skeletons in their closets and somehow every skelet has some kind of revenge or personal vendetta against them.
Nice chapter, on with the next one.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 6:05 PM Title: 17. Operation: Retrieve Bomb Boy
i love it!! more!! thanks! where did Lauren come from anyway? she was never mentioned as a character before was she?
Um....Lauren was only mentioned in the chapter where Jacob got shot. She wasn't named. And Rosalie spoke to Bella about her. LOL Does it help?
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:00 PM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
I think I'm only 98. Sorry. Loved the ch. I am impressed that B was so willing to throw herself in there full force. It was nice to see them open up to each other. Hope Em's holding up ok. Can't wait to see Jess get her ass kicked.
I can't wait for write the actual showdown. I think it's been running around in my mind since I started writing this crazy stuff!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:22 PM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
No dont stop. Five shots rang out..................... what happened their all good shots so they took them out. I would love to see Jess and Bells duke it out but i think Bells would probably go into some type of ptsd and cower. Never know. Love it please continue.
LOL! They might...some might've missed.....and She could cower and hide but you never know, I'm full of surprises!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:51 PM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
This is a good story, I just started reading a couple of hours ago and have finished what you have posted so far...I can't wait for the next update.
Thank you soo much! The next chapter will be posted tonight!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:57 PM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
So much happened. To see the preparation for rescuing Emmett is like watching a clockwork. Everyone knows their jobs and stick to it.
It was cool that Edward is proud of Bella that she discovered the needed information.
The morning scene was funny, Bella screaming for Edward, Jasper and Rosalie ready to kill someone and Edward cooking.
This chapter was really exciting.
Thank you...I thought I crammed too much info into one but I didn't want to cut it or anything. The next chapter will be posted sometime tonight.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:51 AM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
oh shit... and it has begun. I can't wait to see the next chapter and see what is going to happend. I am also sooooo glad that edward finally pulled his head out of his ass and got together with bella!!!
LOL...Thank you! The next chapter will be posted sometime tonight
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: 15. Declaration to Conspire
wow it was about time that they made love. This was the first time right.? I hope I am not mistaken. ANyway I love it.
Umm, no this is the second time. The first was when Bella round out about her mother...Thanx for reading!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 11:29 PM Title: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now
I hope that they can figure out where Emmett is before Jessica starts cutting off parts of him.
They’ll find him that I can tell you. Now, how complete he’ll be I cannot. The chapter is done and will be posted tomorrow.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:00 PM Title: 8. Mixing Business with Pleasure
Oh! Royce is with Jess as in Bella's step-sister Jessica? That isn't going to go well because I think that if Bella sees her again she is going to snap and do more dammage than she did to Rose when she stabed her!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: 4. Starting On Shaky Ground
Well that conversation didn't go well did it. I really hope that the girls warm up to Bella because something tells me that regardless of what Bella learns about what they do I don't think that she is going to go anywhere.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:57 AM Title: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now
Yes, Bella's all perfect. Edward sucks and his family's defending Bella. Bella has a right to throw a tantrum because she killed a man, yet Edward doesn't, even though he doesn't believe in torture. Does that even make sense?
I want to thank you for taking the time to read my story. I’m sorry it wasn’t your cup of tea. I wasn’t expecting everyone to enjoy it. I don’t think Bella’s perfect. She has the flaws, to me they are obvious, but then again I’m the writer and I see her in a certain way. Edward’s tantrum had to do with how she did it. The way Bella killed Jake, reminded him of how he was hurt in the past. I even stated he was being bi-polar. He was confused. But once again, thank you. I always appreciate honest feedback.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:45 AM Title: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now
Loved it epically amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter
Thank you so much for all of your reviews. The fact that you gave me a comment for each and every one made my day. The next chapter will be posted tomorrow. I’m just putting the finishing touches.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:11 PM Title: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now
Yay, a new chapter!!! :) So glad to be able to read more. High fives to both Jasper & Rose for supporting Bella for what she did to protect her new family. Hope you can update again soon!
I am beyond amazed with your dedication to this story! Thank you! Thank you for reviewing on both sites! It’s readers like you that make me want to keep going. The chapter will be up tomorrow. I’m just adding the finishing touches to it.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now
GOOD JOB EDWARD!!!! FINALLY he is going to snap out of it. Love this story...
LOL, Thank you! Yeah, this is all new to him. He's not used to having those feelings circulating his thoughts.The next chapter will be posted tomorrow. I’m just putting the finishing touches.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: 12. Destruction and Disbelief
See? I'm not the only who was dumbfounded that she shot Jake. And, it was the way she did it. So glad E and I agree.
LMAO I think she did what she had to in order to keep Edward safe. But I know, I was surprised too ;)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:45 AM Title: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
This chapter was unexpected. First Bella has sex with Edward and than she shoots Jacob. But I don't believe that it is so easy to get to Royce, he will probably counting on something like what happened and place a trap for the Edward and the rest.
Bella was really tough, I guess now Edward starts thinking twice before he gives an order to Bella.
Why do I feel like I'm disappointing you? I know she jumps a lot, she felt threatened.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:57 PM Title: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
Damn. Bella is badass while at the same time batshit crazy.
Yes, yes she is. LOL. She's confused, angry and she feels used. Then you surround her with even more crazy people and this is the outlet she first sees so she takes it. Thanx for the review
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:08 AM Title: 10. Jealousy, Surprises, and Amendment, Part 2
Oh my god!! You bitch!! A cliffhanger?! Erggg, haha, hurry and write a longer chapter.. it's getting good. :] <3
LMAO Oh god!! LOL I think this is the funniest review I've had. No one ever really called me a bitch. You really made my morning. So Thank you! The next chapter is not that far off I promise. Though if you think I'm a bitch now, I hate to see what you'll call me next.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:49 AM Title: 10. Jealousy, Surprises, and Amendment, Part 2
They talked!!! At least that was the only happy thing in this chapter. And Emmett is in danger, who would have thought. It was just a matter of time, until something like that happened.
It seems that somehow Bellas mom is now also involved or it was Jessica with a good disguise.
What keeps me thinking, is where was Rose. She was not at the house for dinner, perhaps she followed Emmett and will save him?
Until the next chapter!
She was in the room, I just didn't mention it. I have a reason behind everything I write. Hopefully you would enjoy the way things play out from here on out.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:15 AM Title: 9. Jealousy, Surprises, and Amendment, Part 1
Seems like, that they don't waste time to get going. I would have thought, that Edward would have been there at least to wish her good luck with the job interview. But now he will probably pretty pissed that Bella is going on a lunch date with Jacob.
You are very quick with the update, which is cool. Can't wait for the next one.