Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
well i feel bad for drew. but i am glad bella is with him and hopefully going to be taking him with her. he will be well loved. maybe he will get his fight back or maybe they decide to turn him to stop the pain and be able to live a life cancer free. it will be good for the family to be together in full. i am looking forward to how seth acts around nessie. see how well papa edward deals. he is just happy he has kids and gets a chance to make a mends
look out bella alot of surprises for her. so love this story. can't wait till the next chapter is up. thanx for writing
Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hey, why couldn't Drew be turned? That is, if he wanted to be.
*rolls eyes* I can just imagine Charlie's reaction to seeing the Cullens, and especially Edward.
You are writing such a great story. I love all the different characters you've created, and the storyline is great. Once again, thanks for writing. I'll look forward to your next update; I'm excited to see what happens next. =)
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your story is so awesome! I'm so glad that you're writing it. I can't wait to see the reactions of both E/B when they see each other for the first time in so long and the emotion of Edward seeing his children for the first time. I'm so excited! I'm not so excited, but definately curious to see who is obviously after Bella, and probably her children too. I have a few theories about that, but I think I'll just keep them to myself. Thanks again for writing. =)
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow so much
i am curious as to who is after her if james, laurent and victoria are dead. maybe one of them had someone to carry the grudge for bella
my having kids losing edward and going through cancer man tough
she is a wonderful artist cool that esme has her painting
looking forward to the kids meeting their family
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I feel so sad about Drew. I keep wondering if there will even be anything that can be done for him. I knew Edward would step up and help get the guys to Bella. It is a great idea for Charlie and Sue to be there too. Edward will answer for his mistakes. I hope everyone can be happy that the kids will finally have both their parents in their lives. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh so happy about a new chapter thank you so much.. I will be patient and always excited when you update... we certainly do learn alot this chapter I must say... oh so very anxious for Bella and Edwards reunion for sure... such a wonderful story ... you have a very creative mind...
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
WOW...What can i say...
bloody fantastic writing,
I just couldnt stop reading to review each chapter,im so into this story that ive checked in three times today to see if you have updated ...Brilliant ..cant wait for more.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am very glad that you are back irregardless of the delay, and extremely happy that I found this story, its wonderful... Watch it turn out that Dr. Lawson is a Hybred vampire or something... no just kidding... anyway... can't wait for more...
Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I have been only reading FF's for a little over a year now. I am one humble reviewer, but I must say... I am in awe of this story. Truly Magnificant! I can not wait to read more.
The painting was right there!!! With the children. Wow! This is so good!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can not believe you abandond this. IT is way more interesting that Breaking Dawn and it was the better of the 4. The children coming in as human then changing later. Makes more sense. Also Bella with cancer adds to the drama. My only problem is my dislike for the way Edward treated her. That is not undying love.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I am not a fan of Edward at this point. He lied etc. So. He clearly has not hurt enough. I am ready.. so Okay you get to reap what that poor woman endured with just three words.
Nice story so far, by the way. I see you have not finished this.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have loved this story so far. Please keep going and update soon.... I love the way Emmett is acting... he is so funny, but a fierce protector of Bella.. the only concern I have is.... is this going to be a Happy ever after???? Please say yes!!!! I can't wait to see the family with the kids....uncle Emmett!!! To see Rosalie with them, she will finally get the chance to watch children grow up and be a part of their life...
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness... what a tear jerker... I'm so glad that Bella has a friend like Angela with her. I hope that she and Edward can work through this and be happy... don't let Edward be a dumn dumn twice. Update soon....please