Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 65
AWESOME story!!!! ;) i'm looking forward to reading the sequel ;) a few things threw me a bit though ;) when bella was practicing her gift with carmen i thought it was kate with the electric gift? although i always thought it made more sence for her to have it because eleazer was her mate and he had a gift and garrett didn't who kate was mated with ;) i loved how you named the children and that they had green and hazel eyes seing as bella was keeping her brown as a hybrid ;) it was also cool how they shared thier gift with each other it will be interesting how this all develops ;D
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 65
You are spoy on about this is the place to stop. This story was such a delight to read! You got rid of a lot of grief and agony from the saga and I love how it turned out! Not to mention it was a lot more fun to read about that electric connection between Bella and Edward and the fabulous love they made together! Think I'll have to read the sequel!
Thank you for all your reviews. I am glad the enjoyed my changes to the Books. I had fun writing about the Lovebirds and the whole Cullen clan. I could have written about them forever, but it was a good place to stop.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 61
This is all just great! Bella has been changed, in a way, and without the accompanying agony of traditional transformations! All the perks, without the side effects!The babies all have the same gift and can join forces to read others! I'm thrilled with the way you thought all this out!Real or fictional, human or vampire hybrids, babies are truly a blessing!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
Your idea or a suggestion from a friend, having pregnancy change Bella to a sort of hybrid makes perfect sense! This has been quite the journey and it has so far been such fun to read! Can't wait for Charlie and Renee to see their grandbabies!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 58
Wonderful chapter! Bella sure was unhappy for a bit thinking of being an invalid for a while. By the time the weekend was over, she is in a much better frame of mind. What the heck, lots of women have to put up with bed rest the final weeks of pregnancy!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 56
This was a real good chapter! Esme taking Bella to the class for first-time mothers and the prenatal swim class. It really affected Bella to hear Esme's story, it's so nice she has her as a stand-in for Renee. This sneaky plan of Bella's to celebrate Valentine's Day sounds great!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 55
Usually Edward is all over things like this, so I don't blame Bella for being surprised this trip was spontaneous. Another reason for happiness now Bella is sure she's having more than one baby, a boy and a girl. More fun for Alice, Esme and Rosalie to set up a second nursery!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 54
Bella's maturity and practical attitude are some of the things I admire about her. She is a young woman who knows who and what are most important to her, and acts accordingly. She and Edward are thrilled about becoming parents, but if ther is a problem, she knows her survival is paramount to Edward.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 53
The picture in my head of all the family rubbing Bella's baby-bump cracked me up! I had to chuckle at how excited they all are, singing to the baby to get it to move! With her wanting to help older folks and pregnant teens, Bella has a good heart.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 52
Frankly, I would have been amazed if Edward hadn't gone into full-on guardian mode. It is just who he is and he may have a really tough time getting over it, if ever! At least Bella has some coping techniques, so she isn't tempted to kill him!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 51
I wonder if Bella is going to tell her mother about the baby, or wait a while? I love the tour of Pike Place Market and the description of the Rose Parade! Living my whole life in the Pacific Northwest, it's fun to read about things I've seen for over seventy-one years!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 50
Probably the best Christmas any of the Cullens have had in all the years they have been together. They are all nearly as happy about the baby as Edward and Bella. Edward is exactly right when he thinks how his wife has changed all their lives, and for the better!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 49
Fertility drugs, really Bella ! She must have wanted to get pregnant as soon as possible. The increased appetite , mood swings and cravings gave it away. What a great Christmas gift for both of them. There's just one thing Bella may n ot have thought of, the fact that using the fertility drugs may lead to multiple births! Wouldn't that be something?
Date: 21 Dec 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 45
That was different, posting this chapter twice! The whole family doing Romeo and Juliette while having the theater all to themselves was fun! Bella is feeling a strong call to help others and Edward and the rest of the family will support her in that endeavour happily!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 40
It's really great that Bella is having the experience of college life with Edward and the rest. A side benefit is the times Charlie gets to ride along with Carlisle and Esme and enjoy the whole sports deal! Makes me hope he'll still be a part of Bella's life after her change. Dartmouth sounds wonderful!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 39
I loved all the good wishes , poems , songs, etc. from all the family and friends. What a great idea! The thought that went into all the foundations and donations was wonderful, too! Now that their fabulous honeymoon is over, back to real life, school, family, the new house, etc. Can't wait!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
What a great idea to have Kaure take Bella and Edward to Kachiri, and thus to Huilen and Nahuel! Now they have the facts from those who lived through it,plus new friends! Now maybe Edward won't be so afraid of Bella becoming pregnant.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
This wedding is going to be the production of the century, as always thanks to Alice! Genius move to have the girls haul Bella off to the spa while the guys take Edward hunting! It may even take their minds off how much they want to be together!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
It's no wonder that Carlisle is so enthralled by everything, science and the supernatural alike! He has access to all kinds of information, too and a lot of different sources! It was sort of funny that some of the info from Carlisle freaked out Edward! As crazy as he is about fast cars, I wasn't shocked when he and Bella christened that red Ferrari!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
Can you blame Bella for breaking down and weeping from happiness at how wonderfully he takes care of her? I sure can't ! This is a young woman who realizes just how fortunate she really is in who she loves! It is beyond wonderful that her love feels the same way about her!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
That was the best sounding spring break in Florida I've ever heard of! It was fun for all the Cullen siblings and for Bella to spend time with her mom! It looks pretty much like all three couples are going to Dartmouth. That will make Charlie's buttons pop for sure!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella is a lucky girl! She fell in love with her soul mate and gained another, larger family into the bargain. They all get along, vampire and human alike. Every woman should have a selfless, caring , considerate lover like Edward! Yes indeed, a very lucky girl!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Your Edward is quite a bit more relaxed than the original version, and he sure is having a better sex life! He's very protective of his "fragile little human", still, but he doesn't go overboard with it! It probably helps that Bella has a better attitude, also!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
You have changed very little about this saga, just enough to spice it up and make it your own. It was great to have the danger from Victoria nipped in the bud, but it makes me wonder if you plan on having Bella's awful birthday party and subsequent parting? Boy, I hope you don't, New Moon makes me so sad that they both suffer for so long! Then, there's the Volturi to deal with also! I'll trust you to come up with a better story line!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is such a different Bella, she doesn't mind Edward buying her cars and gifts, Alice shopping for and with her and all the trips to spas and such! Since her parents are okay with the wedding plans, it does make all this much easier.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I know Edward is nervous about Bella perhaps no longer wanting to be changed, but it was nice to read him counting his blessings as far as his family is concerned! At least it gave him something to do while he waits for Bella to wake up!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
Close to canon, but I'm glad Bella didn't have to break her father's heart to get out of the house and run from James! I have always been of the opinion that it would have saved a lot of grief and agony to just get rid of the nomads in the ball field!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Their first time was everything it should be and more! They love each other to distraction and could do nothing else but express that love! A thought did occur to me though, is there going to be any chance of a pregnancy? I only ask because they didn't use any form of birth control and are not married, either!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Those naughty young people, doing that right in the classroom, in the presence of their fellow students! Edward must like living dangerously! What if Bella was unable to remain quiet? That would have given away the game for sure! All she has to worry about now is Billy telling her dad what Edward is!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
So, Charlie knows about Edward and Bella is going to meet the family! Next thing you know, there will be a baseball game and unwanted visitors! Sorry, I couldn't resist and truth to tell I never get tired of this story!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is just different enough, aside from the lemons, to make for really fun reading! I have been a sucker for these young lovers ever since I read Twilight. You know how it is, first the books and then the movies , then the dvd's of your very own! I'm hooked, what can I say?
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
That's kind of messed up, first hot and then cold! If he had just ignored her from the beginning, that would be one thing, but he seemed to be really interested, especially after the van incident! No wonder Bella is upset, I don't much blame her!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 65
great ending. would love a epi or a sequel.
ty for writing and sharing.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry I have not log into TWCC in a while or I would have responded to your reviews sooner. I do have a sequel posted on FFN. I have been remis in posting it here, because the last time I tried to upload a story, I kept getting an error message. I'll try again this weekend and I will upload as many chapters as I can.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 59
wonderful baby shower and gifts. Love Esmom being there for her.
As I mentioned before, I wanted them to seem more like a human family. I love Esme and wanted her to play a bigger role in the story.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 52
I agree with not telling Renee. fainting spell was scary. glad they are being reasonable with her health although e needs to chill a little. lol
over protective E strikes again. I love to bring him out to play. I admit my E had lots of different personalities.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 46
OMG ROCKY HORROR!! Freakin LOVE this movie. Used to work at a theater in the 80s and we play this every weekend for Midnight Movies. (yeah clean up was a bear but soooooo fun to see eveyone dressed up).
Wonderful details you've included.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 39
Really enjoyed the thought you had to have had to put into this chapter. Charities are wonderful additions.
I know it's only fiction, but I wanted the characters to be seem more human and to be concious of the same things we are.