Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Seriously! Seriously! Oh my god! Seriously! You just ended it there. "i think my water just broke." Seriously! I'm loved the story! But I'm a little disappointed about the ending. Did they have a boy or girl, i think you could've added another chapter or at least added to this one. But anyway... your the writer and you did an amazing job.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved this story and the continuation! I am so sorry to heat that you won't be writing any more stories! Why not?! Are you dying? Leaving the fandom? Pulling to publish? What happened? Very disappointed to hear and wish you well, but you will be missed.
Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.Not sure if this was meant to be a one shot but I seemed like everything happened to fast. I love how Jacob just magically disappears and is never heard of again. It's true he always ends up getting his heart broken. You are a good writer and I enjoyed they story, but I think this story has potential to be something bigger like a full story. More time for things to developovertime. Every good story has a good conflict, and I never saw that in here. So just an idea of making it into a full story having both guys fighting over her possibly. Not trying to offend just giving my thoughts and suggestions!
This was always intended to be a one shot. Something light and fluffy for charity. I will however be adding a second chapter (again for charity) but it won't be made public until 14th March. So if you want to read the second chapter before its posted, you need to donate to Fandom for Heroes.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are quite captivating. Each on makes me wish there was more.
Thank you. And I'm sorry there's not more but I'm a firm believer in "always leave them wanting more" lol. Good news though, there will be a second chapter of this.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I had a reivew all typed out... and the site decided to log me out. Grrr...
Anyway, here's what I remember:
This was very cute, I really enjoyed reading it. It's nice to read something fluffy every now and again, though I tend to sway towards fluff more often then not.
This is my very first reivew on this site! I got off to a good start on the submitting it part didn't I?
Anyways, more on topic, great job!
(Does this site look suspiciously like Twilighted or what? I like it!)
...Yeah went something like that!
lol. Thank you for the review. I'm honoured to be your first review on this site. And yes, it is a lot like Twilighted.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Im gonna have a heart attack with it ending right there..I need like...oh GOD I WANT MORE!!!!
Jesus woman...all that hotness and then to just leave it hanging...I think ima die from unresolved sexual tension.
I'm so sorry I left you hanging! Maybe one day I'll bring these two back to correct that UST! Thanks for the review.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved it!! :) wish i got a wrong number like that....lol!
Thank you! And I actually did get a wrong number like this. It led to a life long friendship (unfortunately no soul mate at the end of it) and that is what led to this story!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
this was so effing cute!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesomeness..... Maybe continue this? I would love to see how things play out since they now have 'met' Alice was being very sneaky, and i wonder what happened with Jacob?
There are no plans for a continuation at present but maybe in the future that will change.