Date: 24 Apr 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is such a sweet and entertaining story. I really hope that you'll come back to it. Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your writing. Thank you. -RoseE. x
Author's Response: I'm writing a new chapter now. Thanks for being patient.
Date: 06 Nov 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
HOW FUNNY I NEEDED THE LAUGH'S I GOT FROM THIS CHAPTER I DO HOPE YOUR UP DATES COME MORE OFFTEN AS I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH TIME I HAVE CANCER CAN MOVE VERY FAST OF COURSE I AM HOPING FOR A LOT MORE TIME BUT WE NEVER KNOW IF THE TREATMENTS GOING TO WORK. I LOVE YOUR STORY AND THE LAUGHS YOU GIVE ME AS I READ YOUR CHAPTERS SO THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
just started reading this story love it almost peed at this chapter i could see it all and it was hysterical!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm currently trying to get over a severe case of writers block. I've actually begun writing the next chapter and hope to get it posted soon. Thanks again.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS IT'S 3 MIN. UNTIL 9:OO AM AND I HAVE NEVER LAUGH THIS EARLY SO I THANK YOU SO MUCH THERE ISN'T ENOUGH LAUGHTER IN MY LIFE AND I OWE TODAY'S TO YOU. KNOWING HOW IT FEELS WHEN YOU JUST HAVE TO HAVE STEAK AND YOUR SO SICK OF CHECKEN I'M VERY MUCH LIKE THAT NOW I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF STEAK AND I KNOW I'M NOT IN THE FAMILY WAY CAUSE I'M 68 AND CAN'T HAVE ANYMORE KIDS. THE GUY'S ALL FIGHTING OVER ONE STEAK GOT THE BIGGEST LAUGH I REMEMBER ALL TO WELL ABOUT THE MORNING SICKNESS SO THAT FOR ME WASN'T TO FUNNY I CAN HOWEVER SEE HOW IT WOULD BE FOR MEN AND EVEN OTHER WOMAN. ANYWAY I REALLY ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter...also, 'Colorado' oysters are also more commonly known as Rocky Mountain Oysters...lived there for a while. Almost got tricked into eating some once...lets just say hubby was lucky he kept his oysters. LOL
Author's Response: I know about the Rocky Mountain part, I live in Colorado Springs, CO. Poor Edward wasn't thinking straight with all that was going on. Thanks for the review. My husband asks me to try something new and I always so no. Lol, though I don't think he'd risk something like that.
Date: 07 Jan 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good.
When I was pregnant with my baby girl I went through phases. At one time I craved KFC zinger burgers, and they had to be spicy which was really good when they had the extra spicy sauce. I think in a couple of weeks I ate there about three times a week. At the same time I had anything else spicy I could get my hands on.
After that I went through a cheeseburger phase. Maccas became my best friend for about two weeks.
Another thing I craved was bacon. BLT's with cheese and mayo in particular. The bacon had to be cooked just right too. Not too crispy but still had to be a little crispy. In a month I think I went through about a kilo and a half of short cut bacon. (Eye pieces)
My girlfriend who was pregnant at nearly the sametime had no morning sickness and never craved anything. But I was the complete opposite sick the whole nine months and went through a few different cravings. Drove my husband nuts.
Another craving I have witnessed is ice cream. But particular and weird flavours. Not easy ones to come across and not something you can get at the local supermarket. A friend of mine always wanted ice cream. But it was one that you had to get from a baskin and Robbins, or some other speciality ice cream shop.
Another friend of mine is normally allergic to strawberries and while she was pregnant all she wanted was strawberries. She had them anyway she could get them, fresh, frozen, in ice cream, in smoothies. And funnily enough while she was pregnant she never once got sick from them or had an allergic reaction but as soon as she gave birth she was right back to being allergic. She thought she'd try them after she gave birth as they came with cream and champagne to celebrate the birth of her baby and no sooner had she finished eating the first before they made her sick and she had a minor allergic reaction. Never had them again after that.
Hope some of these ideas help.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is absolutely hilarious. I love that you just went with it and the humor is perfect. I can actually see this happening to a family and it really being disturbing for the men when they finally figure it out.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I think Emmett and Rose were made from the same mould! :-). Glad everything is cool with the school and now we hav the Alice connection
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I so missed writing it. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
omg!!! hahahahaha.... that's so hilarious!! the guys have so much to deal for the next months! hahahahahah... all of the girls will be hormonal and with mood swifts and cravings! hahahahah.. poor them! can't wait to read more...
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been wanting to read this forever.....And I am finally caught up with all of the WIP's I am currently reading. I am so excited....I sound stupid.
I love that he went to such great lengths for Bella to be his TA before even seeing her. And I love that the 2 of them are both like it's not a date when it so is a date....
I love it! I am so sorry it took me so long to start it....
Date: 27 Nov 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just adore your story! I love all of your characters too! I know I already said this, but you are so funny! =) Kelly
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried I was losing my touch. It took so long for me to get my computer back. Glad you still like it and thanks for the review.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was hilarious! There must definetely be something in the water, everyone is turning up pregnant. I'm glad Edward finally got up the courage to ask Bella what he's wanted to since basically he first met her, and I think it's going to be a very short engagment if our couple has anything to say about it. I can't wait for more! Hope you have a great Thanksgiving!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
hahahahah.... It was so amazing!!!!! Such a hilarious chapter... hahahha... "run Edward, run..." hahahaahh... Charlie is right to only want the best for his daughter and Edward is really lucky that he likes him...!!!!! Can't believe that Bella is pregnant... So Sue, Esme, Bella and Alice pregnant all together... No the only one missing is Rose...!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more...!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was hilarious! That chapter was great from beginning to end, Edward getting caught necking with Bella, Charlie and Sue pregnant and Bella's reaction, and finally Esme being pregnant to. Must be something in the water, everyone is pregnant except Bella and Rose but I'm sure if Edward has anything to say about it he will be getting her down the aisle and pregnant in no time. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! Jessica is still trying but it won't do any good... hahahah... Can't believe that both parents are expecting!!!!! GOD!!!! Both Sue and Esme are pregnant!!!!! PERFECT!!!!! All the kids are so happy!!!!! And you expected for Bella or Alice or Rose to get soon or something but not the parents...!!!!!!!hahahaah!!!!!
I love what Edward and Bella hav etogether and that they can't keep their hands off of each other... Charlie took it really well in the cafe...
Can't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! They defenatelly know great games...!!!!! They learnt so much about each other!!! And the best is that they told the truth... Loved the lemon!!!!!! Can't wait till next chapter... How will Jessica react when she sees Bella as a TA????? And Edward's girlfriend????
Author's Response: Jessica doesn't like TA bella...at all.