Date: 05 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: The Perfect Background
They're wedding plans sound perfect. After they shot down his parents house where they had confessed their love I wondered about the meadow. At least with Alice planning her own BIG wedding she shoudn't be too obsessive over Bella's.... Yeah right! haha
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Infinity
Ya gotta love a romantic proposal like that. :0) Once again I say he's perfect. I won't be trying the stir fry though. My hubby can't even stand the thought of mayo. I tell him it's all in his head, but he still won't eat anything with it. When we go to subway he won't have them cut his subs in half because the knife might have touched mayo. yeah he's crazy. lol
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:27 PM Title: Ambient Light
Charlie ran a background check! lol That was great! I'm glad he and Edward got along. Wonder what they were talking about that night??? When Charlie asked Sue to marry him it brought tears to my eyes. Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Flash Fill
Again I say "I loved it" because I did. :0) That had to be one of the best first kisses I've read. Ya know I even loved how before they just held hands. Are we going to get to see what their night babysitting is going to be like? Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Great job!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:05 PM Title: Latent Image
Ok maybe it's just me, but I don't think what Edward told Bella was bad. I think I'd be flattered if a guy I was so clearly interested in admitted to seeing me walk out of a book store years ago and had tried to find me. I don't think that is stalkerish. Now had he followed her around taking her picture for all those years that would have been stalkerish. I think she's over reacting.... where's Alice?... Bella needs a good talking to. lol Read the a/n at the end. I'm glad it won't be emo for too long. Great job!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:00 PM Title: Illumination
This was cool, I don't remember reading about Alice and Jasper having problems too often. I liked this more mellow side of Alice. :0) I'm glad that she seems to be a good voice of reason for Bella at this point. Maybe she'll help keep Bella from ruining a good thing before it even happens. :0) Great job, I'm really enjoying the story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:30 PM Title: Observational Distortion
It was funny how she was kicking herself for the "friends" comment. lol I also really like the part where he had her look at the picture more closely and explained everything he saw that she didn't notice. He thinks she's beautiful. Hope she start believing it. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:08 AM Title: Overexposure
This vas so good! haha Really I loved their day in the park. Wonder how many pics he ended up taking of Bella? I know when I get my camera out to take pics I tend to take 100's without meaning to. I just snap away. Luckily with digital I'm able to only print the ones I want, but I usually save all the others on a disk. I love taking pics. :0) Poor Edward can't seem to get away from his exes. I'm glad he talked to Bella about it and she's not going to write him off. I'm really rooting for these guys. Great job!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Thank you for sharing one of the most beautiful love stories in fanfic. You did an incredible job and I'm sure I will revisit to reread one day. Can't wait to continue with your stories.
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:55 PM Title: Focal Point
How sweet! I remember those days staying up talking all night. I really like this side of Bella a lot more. I can tell where you picked up writing this. More than just liking Bella more the chapter's seem more complete (if that makes any sense) I know the last couple chapters were a collaberation, but they were already sooo much better than the first few chapters. You'r a great writer. :0)
*blushes* Thanks :) Glad you are enjoying it and I hope you like the rest!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
Now I'm wondering... when was the first time he saw her? It kind of sounds like it may have been a while ago. I'm glad that they seem to be having a nice time except for good ol Tanya. haha Reading on.....
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
Okay I'm trying to find something to like about Bella. Why is Edward intersted? She's been pretty rude to him. Although she has moments where it seems like she could be nice. :0)
Yeah...These were the chapters written by the original author. It was a little difficult at first to transition. I never did really find a good way to explain why she was how she was in the beginning and then the big change in her attitude in the next chapter. I sort of did down the road, but I think that if I were him I would have given up at this point too. LOL. Things smooth out a bit once I take over.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:40 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I knew you wouldn't resist an Edward POV. lol
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:31 PM Title: Blurry (by Nikteche)
There is an error. When Edward calls to ask her out he says tonight. When Bella calls Alice about clothing she says she will get the dress and see her tomorrow. Oh, Tanya get over yourself. It's nice to see that Edward is not a huge ego addict. That is a good trait.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:23 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
She gave in too fast. And, I would still be pissed at Alice and refuse to have photos taken. He is a stalker.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:16 PM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
I like it. Fiesty. I hate it when people take a picture of me. I would blow a gasket if it was painted and then sold. Watch out Edward she is going to be a challenge.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:48 PM Title: More Latent Images
Gah- she's so effin dense sometimes. And really? Get over it. He doesn't know about the kids in grade school and bs that doesn't make a damn bit of differenc- wah. At least it only took a chappy for her to get over herself. And who is she to decide what inspires another? She's so annoying sometimes.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:35 PM Title: Latent Image
Poor E!!! I have just had it w shy, protective B! I mean, maybe a teeny tiny bit stalkerish, but he was just hoping to see her again. He wasn't following her to her apartment, and to the store... She gets on my nerves sometimes.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:32 PM Title: Observational Distortion
Gah! Could she have just a little bit of confidence? Boys (men especially) don't love to have to continually tell a girl that she's pretty enough.
Also, friends?! Dammit! See? There she goes w that characteristic fear of relationships.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:00 PM Title: Overexposure
Ugh! Snails pace?! I can see where B's coming from but I always hated when my own husband got all jealous and snarky when we would run into someone I've dated. Hello? I did have a life before you. get over it.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:08 PM Title: Complimentary Colors
How romantic can you get. Amidst the hangover pain and them not really knowing each other, they still meet and can feel what there is between them. It's absoltely beautiful and I've said it before, but I love the way you write.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:09 PM Title: Diffuser
While your "The Story of Us" thing is really sweet, I'm not gonna lie, it scared me a little. It reminds me of "The Notebook" and the fact that she couldn't remember the love of her life and he had to re-read her the same story every single day for just a few fleeting minutes of recognition before her memory was lost again. I highly doubt that you're going that route (and greatly hope you don't), but it just reminded me of that story slightly.
Oh! How is Edward going to ask permission from Charlie? Or will he? Will he ask her while in Forks, or wait til New Year's Eve?? I can't wait to find out!!
LOL...no fear m'dear. I'm an HEA writer. I don't think I could bear to write a "Notebook" type story. I cry as it is when I write the sad stuff...I couldn't bear for one to end that way!
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review1
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:45 PM Title: Definitive Beauty
How Romantic was that? Absolutely wonderful, you are a genius, I have no other words.
I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I really had fun writing this. It forced me to expand my wings a little more description wise. I had a lot of fun doing it. I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:33 PM Title: Sharpness
Oh I love this story! I actually have a degree in photography, so it's nice to have something I can sort of relate to. And yes, very obvious which actors you were referring to (I actually think you may have used her real name in an earlier chapter when Edward was at the lunch meeting the morning of the muse freak-out and succeeding hangover.) But what I find really amusing is the last name you picked for her. There is actually an Angelina Johnson in Harry Potter (I'm a HUGE HP fanfiction nerd as well).
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:08 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
First review for this story, I wanted to wait until one of the chapters you wrote/co-wrote. This has been my favorite chapter to date. The story draws you in, but I love the interaction between Bella/Edward and Bella/Alice. Looking forward to continuing the read. I found you and read Femme Docs & Kevlar Knights and just loved it so much, I have decided to soak up all your fabulousness.