Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 38
the family is dealing with alot
i am still waiting for the other shoe to drop
how cool carlisle will walk bella down the aisle
edward and bella are so in love and ready to start their lives
the family has alot to be happy about
alot of changes
Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 35
I like the bit of humor in this love scene. The very last line was perfect. I think the person following her could be her father. But then the reviewer who said it may be Jacob could be right too. Although, I'm not sure Jacob would be all that happy that it was Edward that protects her.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Who knew what kind of kinny was inside both Bella and Edward. That was hot. It is always nice to bring toys into the bedroom. All you need is an open mind.
The anonymous point of view has to be Jacob, but if he loves her so much, why did he hurt her so badly? Is he a member of the mob, too? So many questions and answers litlle by little every chapter.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Everyone is happy so that means that the shit is about to hit the fan. The shit I talk about is Tanya's families revenge on the Cullens. Especially, Tanya wanting to take care of Bella and Edward personally.
I hope that the outsider who has been technically stalking Bella will play a part in keeping her safe. He has people watching her 24/7. They should be able to know exactly when Bella is in trouble and do something to help.
There is so much planned, we just need to hope it all works out...
Date: 24 Feb 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
wow i am glad they decided on honesty
thank god he is rid of the skank. but we all know she is going to be a pain. he may have divorced her but he is not rid of her. i sure hope they are careful where she is concerned.
thrilled dinner went well
Date: 16 Feb 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Well the story is progressing, trust me in FF that is rare. I hate the going backwards business. In some situations is is warranted, but just to prolong a story it makes it nerve wracking.
Next time..........she is not Tanya. Must be his family.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, I think their first time was just what they both needed. very sensual, loving. What they did by waiting, being friends, confidants, before being lovers created a strong base for their relationship. I hope Tanya and her family can't destroy it.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
i am thrilled that edward sent esme over. that was greatly needed seems bella got a few answers
they just need to talk and i pray edward is honest with her. bella is not stupid and for their relationship to b strong they need truth. they have it now i hope they don't go backwards. love it
Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what happens next. I do want Tanya divorced, and I want her to get hers. Not let her hurt Edward or Bella. I hope that the mystery man stalking Bella will handle that situation or let them know what may be going down.
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
they have come so far. things are going so well
divorce is on the rise i am getting excited. but they should know i hope that it won't be that easy to get rid of tanya
my oh my so much more to look at coming there way
the next chapter scares the hell out of me and what's to come
Date: 22 Jan 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
well i am glad bella and edward keep open communication
they are good together.
tanya man i hope you get what you deserve
i am not sure what has happened. cliff hanger. wow
not sure if the baby didn't make it or you can truly tell the baby is alec's. hmmmm what a way to stump us.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
That sneak peek sounds like Bella might be meeting the Cullens.
I am not sure what to think about Tanya's mother coming out and saying that Edward better go in the room. Is Tanya going to die? Did the baby die? Does the baby even look like him? If the baby is dead or alive, I would still want the DNA test.
Thank you for the update. In your mind, how long will this story wind up being? Just curious. Not ready for it to end yet, ;)
Thank you for the great review. We find out all the answers to your question in the next chapter. I'm not sure how many more chapters. but i can tell you that i ahve up to chapter 34 written and there are still a few major events coming. so its not ending any time soon.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
What could Tanya possibly be at that door for?!! She is daft if she thinks she can talk her way out of this! I am glad the teaser says she is going into labor. Bring on the DNA test!
She is a bit out of her mind isn't she. thanks for the review.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am definitely curious about who would be following Bella! The fact that they know the truth about stupid Tanya is great, but how will they help things out. I am glad she has some protection because Tanya would not hesitate to get Bella removed! I liked Alice, and love that she will not let the baby wear any of her clothes because she knows it is not Edward's!
Date: 19 Jan 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
wow i had a feeling he found out.
too bad he didn't see tanya's boy toy leaving the house. wow when that goes down look out.
tanya man what a case of worms
i sure hope edward follows through and takes her skanky ass to court
So glad you liked it.