Date: 07 Oct 2016 4:52 PM Title: 50 Traditions Old & New
I don't blame Bella one bit for feeling as she did when the shark decided to swim along with Edward and Whit! It was no surprise that Carlisle put a ring on Esme's hand. What was surprising was Lee's reaction to that. Glad Edward reassured her.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 3:33 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises
Well, well, things are definitely looking up! Gopher was so thoughtful, giving Edward the means to talk to and see Bella. It was just a bonus that Alice is being a bit nicer to him and cute that Esme got flustered!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:31 PM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos
I'm glad Bella and Alice are making up, it just won't be instant. The bond between Whit and Alice is not the same as between Edward and Bella, but it's neat to watch grow. The one forming between Esme and Carlisle is getting pretty interesting, too!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:27 AM Title: 24 Band Together
Alice and Whit are special people, I can tell from their connection to each other. I hope he gets her to reconsider and change her feelings about the water. Edward and Bella are almost to the point of mutual declarations, oh joy! They are just so perfect for each other!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:43 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out
At least it wasn't a shark! Too bad it ruined the great time they were experiencing. When Bella's family arrives, I'll maybe have an answer to my theory about her being Whit's dream girl. The icing on the cake would be if there is a spark between Carlisle and Esme.
Date: 10 Sep 2016 7:30 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
I'm so sad to see the end of this story. It's a great story and I couldn't stop reading! Loved the characters, challenges and the love they all had for each other.
Definitely going to bookmark as I will have read it again!
Thank you for sharing!
Date: 18 May 2016 11:07 PM Title: 54 New Addition Old Wounds
Wow! Normally Mase is the one with the bad reactions that make me smack my head. But Esme and Carlisle doing that without letting the kids know first... To me, it was wrong. This would have been the right time for him to be upset. Esmeralda and Carlise preach about family, yet they didn't include them at that time? Seems weird to me. Kind of disappointed in them.
Date: 13 May 2016 10:48 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Absolutely enjoyed this story. A great story line with very well developed characters. A lot of laugs, a few watery eye moments, and a lot of fun. A great adventure and fun learning about marine life.
Thank you! We are so glad you enjoyed the journey :)
Date: 13 May 2016 8:58 AM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
i so loved every word of this. to see bella come out of her shell and realize her fears were real but that she could hurdle over them. i have never ever wanted to bitch slap a character before but this alice omg...i was happy once she let go of everything but man selfish little twit lol
i just love this!
Bella was absolutely amazing and we loved watching her grow, find her confidence in herself, and become the woman she had always wanted to be :)
LOL We are glad you loved despite your annoyance with Alice. She made some huge mistakes but in the end she came around, growing up and letting go and becoming a better person for it.
Date: 11 May 2016 7:11 PM Title: 51 'Ohana of Characters
So why does Whit get such expensive gifts, like a gopro, and Gopher gets a dvd?
LOL Because Gopher never asks for anythign expensive. He wants DVDs and comics and considers them way more valuable than a gopro.
Date: 10 May 2016 12:47 PM Title: 47 Say Cheese
Love it!!! I love how the team is together for missions. Gopher is the heart of this time, IMO. He is all about protecting his family, just like they all are, but to me, he is different.
We agree. Gopher is invested in the overall health of the family, both on and off the boat. There's no separation for him because he's already looking at how things will affect them later on where the trio fully separates on and off the boat.
Date: 07 May 2016 11:03 AM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Sad to say goodbye to these beautiful characters but you gave them an amazing ending. Definitely a story that will stay with me forever. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Thank you!! We are so glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:52 PM Title: 42 Got Lucky
ok, I am beyond grossed out. Enough with the nosy people. There are not two people in Bella and Edward's relationship, there are at least 5. Seriously, Whit, Lee, and Esme need to back the hell off. It's not normal or healthy for people to be that involved in someone else's relationship. Even being best friends/family. It is getting to the point where it really is warring on me.
Every family is different. This one just happens to be an open book. It works for them. Doesn't matter that it might not work for many others, the important part is it works for them.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:39 PM Title: 31 Rewards of Trusting
Good progress with Alice. Love that Gopher stepped in before Mase blew his lid.
It is good to see Mase relaxing a bit more.
Still think that Lee needs to learn to mind her own business more. She is always forcing her self into Mase's business. I know she means well, but UHG, it sure is tiring.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:04 PM Title: 30 Along Came Thumper
Hmm... Not sure what I think of how quickly things progressed with Esme and Carlise. I'll have to stew on that a little bit.
Glad Alice is coming around. And yes, I think Guppy went a little overboard with the fake break-up.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:57 AM Title: 29 Reunited
Poor Edward. He really does need to learn to trust Bella more. Gopher makes me laugh so much!!!
Okay - so when do members of the team lose the nicknames? I know Mase, Lee, and Whit are forms of nicknames, but nothing like Gopher, Guppy, and now Thumper.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:15 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
I loved their private moment in Belize. I have to say I am surprised and confused how Carlise could be so selfish to ask Bella to bend to the will of the family who we don't even hear Bella talk about in any way but "the cousins." Especially considering how he and Esme married. It was fucked up and weird but your story was magnificent. I loved Mase and Bella so much. Whit was my favorite friend. Lee was the best in growth. Alice was annoying until the end and the bullshit cousins still confuse me? Love love love story thank you for it. Carry on...
We always have some part of our families that are more obligation than friends and that is what the CCs are here. They do care for Bella and Alice and have always been involved in looking after their well-being, but they are very different from them and have different interests. Had they had shared loves, I'm sure they would have been much closer, but just because the closeness wasn't there doesn't mean there wasn't love and the absolute best of intentions. They wanted to give Bella a fairytale wedding as a way of making up to her that it was the best they could do - they couldn't give her parents back to her.
Glad you loved all the rest!! Thank you!