Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:54 PM Title: Epilogue - In My Life
I absolutely loved this story!!!! I just found it a few days ago and I couldn't stop reading it. Beautiful and inventive concept and sooooo enjoyable to read. Bella got on my nerves there a little bit here and there but she usually does in most stories, huh? The epilogue was probably the coolest one I think I have ever read. That was a very unique way of doing it and I loved it. Great job and thanks for sharing!!! Will definitely recommend to friends!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:58 PM Title: Epilogue - In My Life
Having Bella read through the scrapbook was a nifty way to catch up on friends and family. It's always neat to keep track of the big moments in life. The anniversary present was fabulous, who wouldn't want to see Tuscany? This was a wonderful story and I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:39 PM Title: The Luckiest
What a lovely gesture, and what a cool way to get married without a big fuss. Sounded nearly perfect to me, the nearly part being caused by Edward's parents showing up unannounced. I'm curious as to why they came, too. Anyway, this was a great way for this chapter of their lives to go.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chasing Cars
That sounded like a little bit of heaven. Bella and Edward are gouing to build that house up there on that mountain and love each other in it and in Port Angeles and anywhere they are together! He'll doctor and she'll run the bookstor/coffee shop and it all sounds wonderful.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: Fix You
You did a really good job! Bella and Edward are in tune with each iother as I thought they might be. It wasn't a big romantic production, just a straight from the heart happening, something they both needed. I thought it was lovely!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:10 PM Title: Not Meant to Be
Is Edward unhappy because he worries about gambling away this inheritance, or because he has to leave Bella for a while to go take care of it? The car deal was unpleasant, with Paul being a jerk, but it was heartbreaking for Bella to let down Jake. There just is no good way to say that kind of thing!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:38 AM Title: Who I Am Hates Who I've Been
It actually went better than it could have. Bella isn't going to change her attitude over night, I guess. She is headed in a better direction, at least. Kind of surprised to hear Edward tell her he was a compulsive gambler, though! He sort of declared himself, too, talking about how long he's had a crush and how wonderful she is.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Long Way to Happy
I'm hoping soon to read why Edward has his mood swings, like Bella does. Sometimes he is confident, calm and collected, other times he's almost crippled with shyness, or something. I sure would like to see them get along better!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:21 PM Title: Let Down
Are you serious? No way in hell is Bella perfect, the way she worked so hard she forgot to have a real life. She was so focused on her shop, she picked a guy who was a con artist of the first waters and never bothered to see Doctor Gorgeous , who came in every day for two years!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: I'm Going Home
This whole thinking she was dead thing seems to have had a good effect on Bella. She has changed her thinking just a little and evedently feels better about it! A date Saturday night with Edward probably doesn't hurt!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Ordinary Day
Seems as if some connection is growing between Bella and Edward. He sure was surprised that she remembered his visits in the ICU. Sounds like he's a pediatrician, from the conversation with Charlie. What could be better than a gorgeous man who loves babies and shares a tale of loss similar to her's ?
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: I Can See Clearly
I'm thinking the mystery man is Dr. Masen, who saved Bella when she hit her head and nearly died. Maybe he has been to visit her, too, just like her friends. It really is odd that Bella heard all the memories and none of the daily goings on of the hospital routine.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Ghost of Me and You
That was relevetory, I think Bella just had an epiphany there! Maybe that;s why she's here, whereever here is. Maybe she is supposed to achieve enlightenment? ( grasping at straws here)
Thanks so much for all your reviews. You also just helped remind me that I hadn't finished posting the story over here. So away we go....
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Time of My Life
Maybe I have a totally wrong slant on this tale. Perhaps Bella is in purgatory. Whereever she is, she's sure not very happy about her past or her present. I kind of feel sorry for her, that she feels like everything was for nothing, and she could have done so much better. Personally, the flashback stuff shows me a pretty nice person. I think she's way too hard on herself.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Hit the Road Jack
Just shows you that carpe diem should be your motto. Do whatever today, because you never know what will happen, or how long you have. It's true, your wealth in this life ought to be measured in how many friends you have when you get to the end.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: I'll Stand By You
Hanging out with her dad at work, while he recuperated should show Bella she's a good person, and ought to perk up her self-esteem just a bit. Heaven , her version, is a funny place if it has day and night and she gets to sleep in a hammock. I'm wondering still where she is!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Tappa, Tappa, Tappa
I'm getting a whiff of It's A Wonderful Life, here. Bella has gotten so far down in the dumps, she thinks her whole life has been a waste of time, I can tell. Maybe with Alistair's help she can get a better take on it!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Where's the Light?
Bella doesn't seem to remember jumping off a ledge, or being hit bya bus, etc., so maybe she isn't dead? Whether she is or not, she sure has had a run of rotten luck, poor thing. Aro is never a good character, is he? In your story, he's a real bastard.