Penname: lmlx8 [Contact] Real name: Louise
Member Since: 24 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 46 year old married, mother of 8 , grandmother of 5 who is completely totaly obsessed with Twilight. I like Edward, better then Rob, although Rob is my picture perfect totally gorgous Edward. I absolutly love FF and can't get enough. I am constantly pimping out my favs. and always on the look out for new recs. The stories I read, always have to have Edward/ Bella, or I just can't read them. I don't care if Jasper gets thrown into the mix, just so Eddie is always with Bells. Anything else is just gross and ammounts to unacceptable behavior and a complete "Oh No!! -- We don't Ever Go There" in my opinion.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 273390
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

WOW!!! Sick Mother Fucker, isn't he???   Damn ...That's all I can say...

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Wow!! that was not at all what I was expecting...ummm....geez...I don't even know what to say, Dark? that is an understatement, that was like pitch black...I'm glad you got a chapter up, because I missed this little group of brainwashed sicko's... if you don't get up another one ...Have a Merry Christmas....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

he is creepy.. the chapter was good. what ever became of bellas mom..is she off with phil?

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Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

I knew when Edward left the compound that he was going to see one of those signs. Now what?

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

oh my freaking god...he is one sick puppy. ugh! making me shudder...yuck!  i'm think or rather hoping that is edward coming in the door....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Geez...Aro is just so ...yucky!....and gross! and Gay ( i knew he had homo in him ) and I was wondering where james was going to come into the story. I knew he had to be lurking around there some place ...ok waiting to see what happens, because that is all I can do...thank you ladies for the update...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

i was so glad to see this update....and they better do something to stop that horrible evil  aro before he really kills someone.....but i guess the mental stress is worse then anything...anyway welcome back ladies and i'm soooooo looking forward to the continuatipn of daddy's little girl....woohoo!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3562]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1274741
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

wow....i don't even know what to say. i never read a chapter written by a dead person. and i can only suppose her plans for bella aren't going to work out.....great chapter!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

wow...bella got thown in to a world of sickness...on so many fowl levels...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

holy hell did i say fowl before? i think i meant demented.... did

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

ah he is starting to see bella's true self...not the stepford wife ...sexbot he's trying to create



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking the story.

Summary:

Kidnapped from the dreary town of Forks, Bella must face being sold as a slave to a richer, more demon like vampire. As her master teachers her the rules and uses her, somewhere along the way, he feels for her, but throw in Jacob and Edward must fight for the girl who could potentially change his ways. But what if, one night, Edward's family from Forks comes to visit, and they recognize the chiefs missing daughter? How will they save her too?

Banner:)

I want to thank rpattz1990 for this amazing banner. I LOVE IT! SO much. Thank you dearest.

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I want to thank jennmc75 For this Beautiful Banner that she made for me. You honestly dont know how thankful I am for it:)

 

*Contains rape and a very Dark Edward.*

 

ATTENTION: If you have any experience in making banners for stories, if you could, please make one for this story. Please make one and send it to my email.    Akersiscool@gmail.com

Please and thank you:)


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40554 Read Count: 58654
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Waiting?

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i was wondering if you were going to make him a mind reader...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sequel to Heartbreak Remedy. As Bella & Edward continue to share
their lives, they explore their deepest fantasies & push their limits
together. BxE, AU/AH, very OOC. BDSM. NC-17 rated for language & situations.
LEMONS aplenty.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245042 Read Count: 167150
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 May 2011
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow...you had me worried with the last chapter, i am glad they talked about this...finally. should be a good weekend for them.



Author's Response:

thanks! glad you liked their talk :)

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

sorry i dont get to comment very often, i usually read on my phone and for some reason it will not let me into the review box.....but...holy hell...i been waiting for this to happen!!!! and now i'm so excited  !!!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i'm glad that edward and alice talked ...i can see how she would feel a need to overhaul her life, especially when all she saw in herself was someone she doesn't like...now i wonder what bella and jazz are so heated about.....ps...i donmt know how i missed rgis update, but imm kind of glad i did because now i have two chapters ...instead of one....thanks for writing

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

good chapter...i think with bella and jazz his problem is that he sees her as his childhood friend and with edward he only knows him as the masochist he is...so its easier to inflict him with pain....ok ..just my internal thinking...waiting for next update, wondering whats going to be happening with my favorite three-some....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

i'm sorry to see this story end in that it is one of my favorites...but i agree with you. they are in a good spot and hopefully can live their lives growing, sharing and loving eachother...because that is the greatest thing any of us could ever have...thanks for pouring your heart and soul into this story and sharing your imagination with us....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I fully agree with what you say, couldn't have phrased it that well myself :) It was great having you along for the ride!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

wow!  she asked for it....that's about all i can say...and your right about the sound of the whip....never personally felt it, but i've seen a demonstation and the sound made of it cracking in the air made me cringe....but the reciever told me that it's not as bad as it sounds...and if done right can leave no marks at all...but i'm just not that brave to find out....lol....thanks for the update ...i will be waiting with excitment to see how the rest of their day goes.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the update!

They were right - whips don't have to leave marks, and they don't have to really hurt, either. And they are a hell of a lot scarier than they are, if wielded by someone who knows what they are doing. Although for obvious reasons it's easier to keep things sensual rather than painful with a flogger than a single tail lol 

Yeah she asked for it and i don't think she was disappointed lol

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

hmmmm....that was an interesting evening....i'm not sure i understand his last sentence...maybe i'm just slow today...anyway good chapter...thanks for the update...louise



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

I don't know what you don't understand about the last sentence, as you didn't specify - Edward misses Jasper, not just because by now he has gotten used to having him around again, but because he's an integral part of his life and heart now, and unless he has his entire family around him, he'll always feel like something is missing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 262525
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

man o man ...bella is teasing the shit out of him...my edward would give her a spanking for that....lol....good chapter ...for a second i thought maybe bella was having second thoughts about getting married, i don't know exactly why ..but it popped into my head and then it was gone as i kept reading....have a great week sweety. i'll be waiting to see edwards reaction to the picture she sent....it would be sooooo freaking funny if alex or someone else like jasper answered his phone and saw it...lol...i know that's my sick mind....lol...louise



Author's Response:

you are sick...lol.  I wouldn't have it any other way!  Your Edward would have her trussed up with a sore bum by now...absolutely! lol.  Bella never has second thoughts..she's not thrilled with all the attention she'll get...but that's normal for her.  I just finished writing the next LRM...had quite a bit of fun with Edward.  I've said it before...i like him nervous.  Thanks!  I'll be watching for your next update also!  ---Anne aka Emmamama

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Wow!! These two are really getting their groove on...lol..then again it's like the forbidden fruit, one taste and all you want is more....Nice chapter E, they are having a great honeymoon ...thanks for writing..



Author's Response: Thank you! they needs lots and lots of practice..lol. glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

this was a sweet chapter i lol at the peen discussion that is soooo....bella...and it's great that she had someone to hang out with....btw..thanks for the rec...i didn't get to read because i didn't recieve an update notice...because stupid me was so busy reading your story i never added to favorites...i know what the f was i thinking....i got ya now though......on to the next chapter..... t



Author's Response:

Thank you!  i've been writing so much..my brain hurts.  i've been enjoying the heck out of your story! i need to go back and review the chapters I haven't done yet.  Glad you're enjoying mine too!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

holy hell...that was great and sooooo fitting withthe story and the characters.....great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

i think you hit it dead on....sweet, romantic and loving....



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I tried!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

i don't know how i missed the update except to say that my e-mail was messed up....stupid bella should have called the hospital to check on him ..or one of the other officers.....silly girl....thanks for the update.....



Author's Response:

thanks!  i think TWCS had a wonky day last week.  Fanfic has entire wonky weeks. lol. 

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

ok...now you have me waiting to see what is going to happen and i cant wait to hear bella's thoughts...good chapter...



Author's Response:

THanks! next one up now.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

ohhh...poor bella...first victor james terrifies her and now they want her on oprah.....lol...great chapter and btw congrats on your nominations...i'm sure you were as excited as i was....dang who would have thought...(at least that's how i felt....



Author's Response:

i was surprised too...makes all the hard work worthwhile when you know people are enjoying it.  Thanks so much!  I've been having a hell of a good time reading your fic .  until next time...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

Hey Sweety.. The wedding is getting closer...and Mr James just will not leave well enough alone (such a prick) Great chapter and it makes me wonder what else is going to happen with the week leading up to the wedding...On a personal note. I feel for you with mother nature - she can be a tough one when she gets angry...but i'm glad that everything worked out ..we are still sorting through water soaked boxes from the basement, i'm of the mind to just throw everything out and start over ((all except for Christmas Ornaments...those are 30 years of irreplacable memories) ...have a good week...louise

Summary:

stories/33558/images/LRM.banner.final.jpg

 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 66051
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Empire Builder to the Windy City

i adore your edward he is soooooo sweet....thanks for the update it was great



Author's Response:

Thank you! for taking the time to review...I'm horrible because I've been reading yours like crazy but owe you a slew of reviews.  I wouldn't be opposed to your Edward punishing me for that.  :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is the daughter of strict Baptist preacher, Charlie Swan. Charlie accepts the position of head pastor at Forks First Baptist Church, and moves his family from Phoenix, Arizona to Forks, Washington. This uproots Bella, along with her cousin Jasper who lives with them, from the only home they have ever known. Bella is going through a lot of hard times on her road to self discovery. Her mother is dead and she doesn't really have many friends besides Jasper. Her father is very protective of her and doesn't let her have a normal teenage life. She desperately wants independence so she can find herself in the world. With the help of Jasper,her new love intrest bad boy Edward Cullen, and her new friends at Forks, she just may be able to figure who she really is, before her father brainwashes her into believing she is something that she's not.

AH. E/B J/A R/EM M-rated for language,sex,drugs,drinking,religious ref.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 189558 Read Count: 32461
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hi...i have a question...how old is bella? and the comment i would like to make is that ihave a first hand knowledge of religion that rules your life....it is very repressive, yet when that is all you know...it dosn't seem wrong...anyway, i liked it on to the next chapter

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

one comment....christians don't gossip..they share



Author's Response:

LOL I love that, and it is so true! Also Bella is 17 :) Thank you for all the reviews! I loved reading them!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

that was a great frist meeting

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

omg!    lmao...i think i just relived  one of my own teenage nights...lol...except i remember danceing on a bar and some guy i didn't know helping me down and then another drink....and that's all i remember  ...and i was suppose to be at a youth group meeting.....lol...ahhhh memories...



Author's Response:

too funny! I won't even get into what i did once at a overnight youth retreat....lot of repenting went on that next sunday :) A lot of this story is written from personal experience (though I will never admitt which parts haha), my father was a strict baptist preacher and thought the only way to raise a child was to keep a tight rope on them at all times....it backfired to say the least. Now that I am a parent I see how hard it is to let go and trust your children, but at some point you have to!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh...my freakin god!.....lol..scarred for life...lol.....i love that he took care of her...and helped her with the excuse...this story is drawing me in....and i find i am enjoying it vey much......

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i grew up in acatholic however my mother always thought that i should get to experience life ans so i ventured off to ucc... and the a chuch of god...very biblical..and very legalistic...at the time i thought it the way to go...i have six daughters...yes 6 and 2 sons...there is atruth to your writing and i can see our paster calling his daughter up to tell everyone that she was a virgin...as a mother i would be happy as a 17 year old girl i would have been mortified....anyway good chapter...keep going i really like where you are going...i just hope that bella doesn't become a total slut because that would loose who she is........however she needs to experience live before it passes her by



Author's Response:

Wow six daughters! I only have one and she keeps me on my toes at all times lol. I have 1 son and I have to say boys are way easier! Thank you so much for your reviews! I can promise you I am going to try and keep Bella true to herself while she learns about life. It is a slippery slope, and she will falter but every teenager makes mistakes, the point it to learn from them before falling in to deep :) I hope I can portray that in her character correctly!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

bella is so sheltered...the real world is out there and it's just waiting to get it's hands on her....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i drooled over rob too....how do i get one.    anyway good chapter...alice should have warned her abot the eddie-bergad.....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

that poor silly eddie he doesn't have a clue

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

that was a sweet chapter...her first kiss...hmmmm....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

that was a thoughtful gift...that way she can listen without her daddy finding out.....and what a great first/second-first kiss....she's going to be having some happy dreams tonight.....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

holy hell!   you had me laughing so hard i cried....it's poking me...lol....can i see it.....lmao....lol

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

what did she barf from?  im going to have to go back and reread it......poor bella is so out of her element....she'll get it....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ok...now i'm all caught up and dying to know what he has in mind....great job girl....



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just posted the next chapter so you can finally find out what he was planning :)

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

he is being so patient with her...it's sweet to see



Author's Response:

:) wish i could find a guy like him lol

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

your doing a pov from eddie's peen.....lol......can't wait for that one.....this was a good chapter. made me laugh....when she admitted to watching the porn...tooo funny



Author's Response:

:) So glad you liked it! And yep the peen has spoken... i just posted it :0)

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

lmao....omg...you have to give it a name...oh shit that is tooo funny..and i suppose jasper bursting in is better then charlie.....lol



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Charlie would have flipped! And he does get a name in the next chap...whic i just posted :)

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

way too cute....poor jasper....lol....samson is a great name....sam....some amazing manhood...



Author's Response:

*sigh* now i am thinking about his manhood again lol