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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3562]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1274733
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

My lord, that is disturbing on SO many levels... Yet, I want to read more. It's like a car crash - so rivetting, you just can't look away or in this case, stop reading. Awesome job, though. :D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Edward acted like real monster in this chapter! Hopefully, that'll change...
Amazing job thus far, though. :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Yes, yes he IS. I finally have a small hope for Edward, and his possible transformation!
I'm curious, maybe Emmett's not as bad as we all thought, as well...
I sure hope so. :D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

THANK GOD! I was waiting for that - took a bit longer than expected, but it was well worth the wait! I'm so very glad Bella is finally standing up for herself, and that Edward is getting the message through his sexy, but obviously thick head. :D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh lordy, what a mean, cruel, awful person. :|

-Sofia

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Should've figured. But... I have an odd feeling that she'll get her break, eventually...

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I actually - for an unknown reason - feel a small amount, I repeat SMALL amount of sadness for Carlisle in this chapter. Though, I couldn't help myself from grinning like an idiot when I read that he died.. *cough* YEEEEES!! *cough* :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I can honestly say... Thank you, for allowing not only myself, but many other people read this story. It is inspiring in many ways, while the plot itself is quite out-of-the-ordinary, it is very worth the effort to finish. It shows that love can triumph over the bad (putting it lightly, of course ;p), everytime. I have to admit that I found myself wanting to click out, due to the content itself, but I pushed through and I am darn happy I did. Thank you again. :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story!  Please check out my other stories (they aren't nearly as bad)

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 16397
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm incredibly happy that you have Jasper and Alice's beginning. I began to go through and look at one of your stories to read after reading, TPW, and I was always curious about their relationship. Can't wait to read more. :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gah, poor Alice.. Nice work, thus far though. :)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Glad you like.  Check out the two shot I have - Blind Faith.  It's an original that is being published later this year.  It's almost finished and then I'll be back to working on my ff stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 158312 Read Count: 124769
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2012
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

I am curious as to how Rosalie would react to Edward's feelings towards Bella, all ready.. Or to Bella, herself.. ;)



Author's Response:

All I can say is that Rosalie does not loke change.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Def. still interested!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Good to know thanks.....

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

I really respect Rosalie in this story, most writer's writer her off as a "bitch-with-a-past," kind of girl. But you didn't, you're showing that she is still capable of being vulnerable, and caring for her family. Though her childhood did make me tear up . . . a loooot, if I'm being honest. ;)
Can't wait to read more.

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Thanks Sofia,

I know a thing or two about having a painful past and I know that sometimes it follows you into adulthood. She felt so out of control as a child that she feels the need to control all she can in her adult life and that can come off as being a bitch. Hopefully she'll be able to move past it and be happy.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

I'm so very sorry to hear what happened, all I can say is God bless you all. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks..

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Goodness.. Can't wait to read more. :)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

I'm glad they seem to have everything out in the open. Also that Edward and Bella's relationship has finally begun to blossom. :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

There's such a thing as too far? ;o
I liked it!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

I didn't think so but you never know, I was just checking.

Lovegame by moneybeet Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Every night she goes about her business ignorant to the man who watches her from her window. She doesn't understand what is coming. She couldn't know the horrors he would subject her to in the name of fascination. E/B, DARK.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44788 Read Count: 6852
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, this is.. Insane, but in a good way. :)

-Sofia

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sheezus. I am now addicted to your story.. There's just something about it, I'm not sure what. Can't wait to read more. :)

-Sofia

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 288692
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

So.. Edward is Tony, and.. Isabella is the girl Edward fell in love with? And the song that she was humming, caught Alice's attention because she's heard Edward play it? :D
I sure hope so! I've read other stories with a similar plot, yet, your's is quite well written. Nice job :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

Haha, love the choice for the baby's name ;D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Def. good tears. :)
An absolute a jewel of a story! I enjoyed it very much, thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it (And the other readers, of course. ;p)
Well done.

-Sofia(:

Season of the Lie by Anadabyel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 332]
Summary:

 

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 Awsome banner above by S is for Psycho, Crap one below is mine.

 

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Lonely Edward, Jasper, and Emmett come upon a lovely desperate young woman as she is about to commit suicide. They decide to try and make her their mate by unconventional means.  Dark Cullen Bros.  AU/OOC/AL/AS 

This is my first attempt at Dark. 

Story will contain violence, murder, physical, and psychological abuse.

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Emmett, Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32730 Read Count: 27573
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That poem made me tear up.. Along with everything else in this chapter.
Nice work. :)
Can't wait to read more.

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bravo, that's allllllll I'm sayin'. ;)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much Sofia!!  xoxodana

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jasper kidnaps three year old Bella with a promise that he'll give her to Edward the moment she turns 16. What happens when Jasper develops deeper feelings for her and will Edward keep his promsie and change his ways? Follow them through first days of school, boys and report cards.


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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32277 Read Count: 37749
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2012
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I've never read or even came across a story with a similar plot. One chapter in, and I'm all ready hooked. :)

-Sofia

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Making and Breaking Promises

I like development with Bella's "power!"
Poor Bella, I am curious as to what ever happened with Bella's actual mother. Is there any chance she will play into later chapters? Oh, and does Bella know that they (Jasper & Edward,) took her the way they did?

Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Home

"Am I too young to say I've found the one?"
Enough said. Cannot wait to read more. :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: First Day Fiasco

So, she could bond with anyone else, if their (Bella and Jasper's) connection was severed? What a depressing thought, poor Jasper. Can't wait to read more. :)

-Sofia(:

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!

 

Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73294 Read Count: 10439
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: KISS

I must say.. One of the most interesting developments I've ever read! Not at all what I expected.

Amazing story. I cannot wait to read what happens next, I'm hooked.

-Sofia



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  So glad you liked it!

Summary:

Just another Hooch/Snape fic.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Severus Snape/None or OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2823 Read Count: 21
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2010 Updated: 02 May 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I NEVER thought about this pairing.. And yet, I find it strangley adorable.. In a smutty way. ;)

-Sofia

His by CyanideandFineLines Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Banner by: terriberry

Bella & Edward were friends as children and Edward always seemed to be possesive of his Bella, controling her in every way possible. His parents moved him away at the age of 12 to try to break his control over her.

 

Now she has a backbone and won't take orders from anyone but will someone ever notice it might just be a mask to hide her pain? And when she sees Edward again who will be furious at who for breaking their promise?

 

Rated for mature content (i.e: abuse, violence & more.) 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26888 Read Count: 36515
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2012
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Secret

All ready?? Wow, I didn't think she'd run into him that quickly.. Though, I'm not complaining. The sooner the drama, the better. ;D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Escaping Him

I love how Bella's fighting Edward's control, really sticking it to the "man!"
Poor Jasper... *cough* nooooot. *cough* ;D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: High

Dangit. Every time I can honestly say I hate Edward's character in this story, he does/says something that makes me like him.. A super tiny bit. Really interesting concept, though. Can't wait to read more. :)

Sofia(:

Summary:

Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 19467
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Bantering with Carlisle

LOL, a little is putting it lightly. :)



Author's Response:

Okay, but hey, it is Carlisle, so sexy Carlisle...:)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice

What a web of secrets.. A destructive web..

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Yep, this web is very tangled, and James is doing most of the weaving...Thanks for taking the time to read and review for me. It makes me smile when I get them, Diane.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.

God, I hope James dies a verrrrrrry painful, slow death.. Just saying :)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Lol...are you being a 'Bad Girl" .  :)  I think most everyone that responds to this story will back you completly up there. The hate you are feeling for James, natural. Take Care and I hope to hear from you again soon....Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Time to Talk

-Thank god it's all out in the open, now.. I'm glad they're all on the same page. I'm curious as to what made James cut Rosalie's hair, though, if she works in a "adult male club," she would need to look her best.. And with hair that's shorter than Jasper's, and not even cut straight.. That would tip some people off. Just my thoughts on the matter. :)
-As far as Bella's pregnancy goes, I figured it was going to happen... With all the fun they'd been having, it would be surprising if she didn't have a bun bakin' in the oven. ;D Great job, thus far!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

James cut her hair because he wanted to push all of them. He doesn't want her to pay him off for the hit on Carlisle's life. He wants Carlisle gone, any excuse will do. Carlisle flipping on him over the hair, or Rose faulting on her payment, etc.

You'll understand that soon enough as the kids start to take control back.

Thank You for reading and reviewing :)

-Diane

 

Summary:

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The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 12506
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is.. Creepy, but in a good way. :)

I can't wait to read more!

-Sofia

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 5635
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

As much as it pains me to say this.. I believe it necessary for the plot to develop even more. Wonderfully written; those days you took, really delving into her character to make it more.. realistic, were well worth it. :)
I do hope that Esme doesn't make another apperance, I feel it would only cause more problems for the erm.. "happy" couple. ;p
I can't wait for J & E to get back, though.. Drama city - I'll be strapped in, and ready for the after shocks. Wonderful as always,

-Sofia :)



Author's Response:

Hey Girl,

 How ya doin'? I love hearing from you. Thank you so much for the compliment. I tell ya that chapter kicked my butt in more ways than one. I can only hope Jasper doesn't kick my butt as well...lol. You do know that Peter does have on more big blow coming, right? Drama city will be coming your way again soon I hope. Take Care and thank you for the review. :)

 

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

LOL! Now THIS is how the book should've gone. ;D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Well as long as those same good-looking men are in it....lol. :)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

She is fucking insane.... But I LOVE it! :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Wow, I am loving your attitude girl. :)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

I think that would be interesting.. Maybe Esme? To see how she's coping with her loss without Carlisle, allowing us a look into what the family is like w/o Carlisle and Jasper? I would say Alice but... I don't like her in this story lol. Nice work, thus far! Truly an interesting concept, bravo!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi Sofia,

 Did I cause you not to like Alice? I am so sorry if I did. I just thought it was intesting the way Isabella twists things to her advantage.  Esme would be an interesting pov to write from. I'm sure she is feeling the lose of Carlisle and one of her sons.

Thanks for the bravo, I always need encouragement when I sit down with this one. It's a booger to write. I try not to leave loop holes in it but I'm sure I do. Thanks for the review and I hope to hear from you again next chapter...Diane  :)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Room

Oh no! I've never really been a fan of Alice's character, but then again, this changes depending on how she's written. Though for the most part, I don't like her. ;p
I love the fact that Bella has.. erm.. "rescued," my two favorite characters (Carlisle & Jasper.) :D
I'm literally itching to read more, your story had me cracking up. :)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Jasper are my two favorite's as well so we should get along just fine from that standpoint. I'm glad you were laughing because that's what I hope for Peter to be in this story, Just carefree and funny. :) I would love to hear more from you in the future.

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Bravo... Interesting chapter, to say the very least.. ;D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Thank You, I'm kinda happy with it myself. :) Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Ugh.. I do want Carli- I mean, Peter.. To survive, he's so.. Carlisle-y! :P
I do think what Bella planned for Jasper was a bit intense, but I kinda figured she had it all in the bag . . . The entire time ;p
I am really getting tired of Esme's interference.. Everytime I see her name I want to shoo her away... lol, dangit.
Wonderful job, as always. :)

-Sofia!



Author's Response:

Hey there and ;p to you as well...lol. Evil Isabella does pretty much keep things bagged up and thinks ahead but every once in awhile they have to get one over on her. They have lived a long time and are very intelligent. I am really missing Carlisle as of late. But I am happy that you are liking Peter. I was lucky enough to meet him at our local mall and he is quite the little ball of energy. Or it could have been the two large cups of coffee he drank...teehee.

Thanks for the review. :0)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

Oh. My. Goodness.
Possessive Jasper = Hottness ;o|
But poor Peter... *Chants mantra* Get pregnant, get pregnant, get pregnant.. ;D

-Sofia!



Author's Response:

Well at least you're not upset with me for making Jasper the father. You wouldn't believe how my reviews dropped on that chapter. Carlisle fans are not happy with me for it. But it was not my fault! Jasper wanted me to make him look all bad ass and Daddish. It's his fault for whispering in my ear. :) . Carlisle will have his day to sparkle in our hearts though. But not until Peter gets his heart broken.

Thanks for taking the time Sofia.

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

:O... *waits patiently!!!!!!!!*

-Ever-Faithful reader, Sofia! :)



Author's Response:

I know, I know you want to shoo Esme away...lol. I understand and I'll try and keep that woman down. ;)

Please stay a faithful reviewer.

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goodbye

I like.. squealed when I saw that you had updated!
Awww! You just popped my little bubble of perpetual-smiles-and-lemons, for this oh so happy couple!
I was really looking forward to J & E's returning, but oh well. We shall see how the drama unfolds. :D
I really don't want to see Esme, and how "HAPPY" she'll be when her precious Carlisle returns (though who can truly blame her ;D).. Gah, I don't but I do, you know? Conflicting feelings.. Yuck lol.
Really interesting how he reverted back to his 'old ways'! I never thought that would be possible; I liked his english accent ;p
I think it's sweet that ALPHA Sam was all.. Sappy and sweet. Poor pup. :o
Anywho, wonderful, as usual. :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi there,

 I actually did have a chapter written where Jasper and Edward came for them and Peter found the files in her desk at work, they were staying there to be safe. I don't know what happens to me though I just get to writing sometimes and things shift. I couldn't let Peter die unloved, or not loving. I think when you begin to understand that you are dying, you forgive.

 Yeah poor pup, Peter got to him as well.

I had fun writing him from way back although I was flying kind of blind. I got tickled thinking about him mumbling to himself about his things being moved as well, such a man thing to do. Esme will not get her HEA in this one. Her love for him will only fuel the rage. (at least for now, my mind is so flippy about things.)

 Anyhow when he becomes Carlisle again would you like to see him turn normal again or change into a pervert wanting to do everyone?

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

Well, of course I want to see the Carlisle we ALL know and love.. Buuuuuuuut, I do want to see his character act more... Carefree, and if going around "do-ing" everyone will help, being a complete and utter perv, so be it! ;p

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi Sof,

 Yeah I think I have finally figured out the direction the 'fuck hot doctor' needs to go. I have the next chapter written and I will post it as soon as my beta gets time to do her thing. Things are in motion in this next chapter, The vampires are getting out of hand...there's a bite, a fight, and a not so nice make-over. I hope to hear from you then. :)

 Take care, Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

...DANGIT! Bella, Bella, Bella.. What a web you've weaved.
I was so sure that Jasper was not the father; glad my suspicions were correct!
I feel kinda bad for Edward, though, such a sad little-boy. (Emphasis on the little.) Loved the taunting on Jasper's part!! ;p
And Esme? CRAZY much? Not even the GOOD crazy! Just, weird crazy.. You know the kind who steals babies - yeah, that kind..
The little makeover thing made me laugh; I never expected that! I hope that Rosalie just falls into a pit; don't care where, as long as Esme and Alice follow soon after. Hmm. :P
Crazy hens... Anywho, great job.
Cannot wait for next chapter :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Okay now I just have to ask if you are Southern? Crazy Hens sounds like something from the south...you know, kind of like calling an asshole a 'dick with ears'...lol. It's pretty smart of you to figure out my twisted plot with Jasper, he made me do it, told me what to say in that chapter and everything...I know, Iknow, who sounds crazy now? <raises hand>

I have to admit I had a good time with Jasper and Edward taunting each other. Jasper was like the older brother who picks at mom and dad's favorite. I screwed your girlfriend...nananananana...lol. And Edward is kind of pitiful, he never fails to stand up for Bella, even now.

Esme crazy much? yes ma'am! I love her, don't get me wrong, but she just kind of tries to hard to be loved and to be the good wife. Makes me go hummmm, I wonder what she's hiding. <I know there fictional characters, but still>

I think the makeover thing was a twist for Alice. She's always trying to make Bella pretty and buying her clothes. But hell has no furry like a woman scorned. Evil Isabella grew up and she's sexy as hell now. So of course the first thing a pissed off woman would want to do is take that away from her.

Thanks for the great review...I love hearing from you...take care...Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

"Maybe if my wife wouldn't have cut off her hair and painted her up to look like a damn clown, she would have came back," Jasper accused.
"Oh and let's not forget…the women in this family planning to kill her. There's that small problem," Emmett added....

LOL, god that was funny. I cackled! And to answer your question, I AM from the south. Most people don't pick it up, though.. Hmm.
I had a feeling that Esme would be upset when she finally realized that Carlisle wasn't hers anymore. And what a bummer that must be.. Missing out on the ultra-sexyness that is Carlisle Cullen. Facinating how more.. Animalistic he is. I love it!
And the whole, "Oh, kill me Carlisle, I cannot live without you!" Thingymajigger, made me laugh. So.. Not surprising. I loved the cooperation from all the Cullen men, especially Emmett. He's the bomb. :D (But Carlisle is still the earthquake! Inside joke)
I'm assuming that Bella is still alive, and there's a reason she's gone.. I have my theories. :D
Anyways, good job! Can't wait to read what happens next!!

-Sofia :DD



Author's Response:

Hey there Lady,

 I just knew you were southern by the way you phrased things. We just have a knack for saying things in a unique kind of way.

I love having the men interact with one another, they can be funny as hell. The cool thing about men is that they can argue and later that evening, if there human at least, they'll go out and have a couple of beers together. Women, on the other hand...well...we tend to need more time I guess.

The Esme thing...I have seen that card played a few times on the unsuspecting...sad thing is, it usually works too. Guilt, guilt, guilt...eye roll here.

Yes, Bella is alive and I hope you are curious as to how she got out without even a trace of a scent left from anyone helping her. I still have a few surprises up the arm of my shirt...hehe. Let me know if any of your theories match what happens. Although I believe next chapter will be Carlisle laying down the law to his family.

Hope to hear from you again next chapter...Diane.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

To start off: hopefully everything will be all right with you, first and foremost :)
Now back to the story.. I LOOOOOVE that your Carlisle put the women in their place - Rosalie, especially, Emmett's too cool for that shit. :D
About Bella's absence.. Carlisle thinks that she's dead?? Poor Baby.. Being raised by all those sexy men, hmmm. ;p
I loved that Carlisle enjoys the power he's been granted - a little too much. But ESME? REALLY? Gah! I had to close my poor eyes... Then re-open them a little bit to finish, but I truly didn't want to! ..only a little white lie ;D
Good job! And God bless. :)

-Sofia :D



Author's Response:

Hi Sofia...and thank you for your well wishes. I think I may be starting to feel human again after all. I'm glad you love the new Carlisle I think he's totally sexy myself. Emmett certainly is to cool for that shirt...lol. To be honest I would allow those sexy men to raise me even at my age...hehe. Jasper with those red eyes in Eclipse almost made my panties wet. :) I asked a friend of mine to write the next chapter for me and she did. But I was so sick that I didn't get it posted. But I will soon and then I'm thinking two more chapters and we'll be ready for the second part of the story. YAY!

Always glad to hear from ya lady !

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out

Wow... Uhh.. Yeah, I have to say.. I didn't mind that, at all! ;)
BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT... I hope Bella doesn't, either!
Can't wait to read more! :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

He'll have to hold back a little I guess for Bella. Guess she'll have to turn vampire in the future, huh. :)

Thanks for the review sweetie...Diane

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: xSofiax Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Def. interested in reading more. :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Thanks!