Penname: MaryMary [Contact] Real name: joyce
Member Since: 29 Jun 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a  retired 66 year old grandmother from Texas. I was born and raised in Texas. My husband and I own a ranch in North central Texas and raise cattle.  I have two children and 4 grandchildren. I love reading my favorite stories are about the mafia and mysteries.


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Reviews by MaryMary
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 274913
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Oh my.. sick sick. Not sure if I am going to keep reading this.

 

Father ARO.. is soooooooooo sick. UGH

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

finally

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3564]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1290369
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

this is the most hope we have felt since the beginning. I mean Charlie and James dying was wonderful ( that alone is awful to read). You gotta do something to Carlisle. Perhaps a stroke and a wheelchair and he can't talk and Esme cares for him and speaks for him and ties him to the chair. How how wonderful.



Author's Response:

Trust me, Carlisle will get what's coming to him before it's all over.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

the only happiness in this story is Rose & Em's baby and the fact Carlisle,Demitri, Charlie and James are dead.. sad story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

what a story..

 

Thankyou,

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

just get a gun and shoot all three of those abusers.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

good chapter. too Bad Carlisle did not get mugged and lost in the city.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

:-( are they training her to be a prostitute? Oh this is so insestual.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

so sad. I want to get a knife and do a Mrs Bobbit on these guys.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Ya know the two story house has windows jump out of one and die that would be quicker and easier than this life.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I do hope he made himself sick at his actions.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Well perhaps Jasper and Alice can steal her away. Make her dissapear because Edward is still some form of Carlisle. Carlisle is no better than Charlie.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

That was a sweet chapter. She has to find the courage to tell Edward about Carlisle.  Just say if you don't believe me just watch out for him trying to get me alone and then walk in and surprise him.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

finally she has started talking to Edward. Next she has to tell him about Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and your reviews! I'm glad you're "liking" (saying 'like' never feels appropriate with TPW - lol!) the story so far. I hope you continue to enjoy the progression of Bella and Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95461 Read Count: 108796
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 May 2014
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ha. I mate is a mate.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I could have lived fine without the wolves.  I know Jacob. That so does not work for me.

 

 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, it's an E/B story.  Jacob won't stand a chance!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hmm..

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

Banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15084
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Dec 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Tramp Abroad

Edward needs some one SPECIAL..

 

grrrr

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 75344
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Okay this is a good story. I read one similiar to this last year but it was not finished. I hope you keep this going.

 

suspense!

Heroin Lullabies by ayngyl22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 326]
Summary:

Edward is a lead singer of a hard rock band-lots of drugs, alcohol, and sex. Bella is a massage therapist freshly out of Massage Therapy school and her first job is with the band, Loxley Screws that consists of Cullen Masen, Emmett, Jasper and Jake, who is managed by Carlisle.  If you're under 18, please DO NOT read this story as it contains material that is not suitable for minors i.e. graphic detail on drug and alcohol use, sex and language.

This story is dedicated to Peter Steele of Type O Negative who passed away April 14th, 2010.  I will miss you.  This story will have the ending you were supposed to have had.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125581 Read Count: 29700
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Mar 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15-Romance That Hurts

 I keep hoping Bella will straighten him out. But no you have thrown her down that rabbit hole. He does NOT love her. He is a disease walking. She will die of something, God am I glad this is fiction.

 

This is depressing.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Beyond Redemption

sorry, but this is so sick. I know people do this on drugs. BELLA  I want better for her.

 

CRAP.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- In Praise of Bacchus

I read this chapter first in Fan Fiction.  I keep thinking that Bella is now on the road to being Jane. If you don't get Bella out of this she will be no better. I have had dealings with addicts, never heroin.  They can function to a degree in between episodes but it pulls their health down and all the do is focus on the next hit. It will affect his music, he will be come more depraved. Bella is now sinking into the life style. How long till she starts on heroin?  He doesn't care about her, he is using her.  If he cared he would not have called Tanya.  He cared enough for Tanya to search her out. So here is the deal  we got to ride this to the gutter because the bottom you have no where else to go but up or out.  It takes professionals and want to to stop heavy drugs.  Charlie would be so upset if he knew what she was doing and what Carlisle had led her into.  Dang.. Charlie show up.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Guilty

Well, well all the chickens came home to roost.  Those who play pay. Bella has herself to thank for some of this. She chose to let him screw her over. She could have walked out and she should have. When he started hiding the laptop, when Josie walked in. All of this played out for her. If she wanted the experience then she should just have  told him last night... here is your happy birthday. This is what you wanted I hope it is enough for  a lifetime. Then left the next day with the gifts she would return and get her damn money back.  DRAMA

HE IS AN ADDICT, this is what they do destroy.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- Alone

His love for heroin is greater than anything. He has to shake that or he will die.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Less Than Zero

Until the heroin is stopped and the coke he will not be okay. Matter of time.

Summary:

Edward left Bella like he did in New Moon. 8 years later and she's joined the Volturi and is now engaged to one of the Volturi Leaders. The Cullens arrive along with Bella's human family and it's now up to the Cullens to win back Bella's the rest of her families forgiveness for them leaving behind all while she's planning on becoming Queen of the Vampires... Bella and Marcus!

Lemons, and AU!

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79821 Read Count: 5793
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The View From The Other Side

You know I love this. Bella gets to say who cares to the people who abandond her.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67280 Read Count: 92373
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I dont know, granny here. I think he is still questionable.  She is rebelling at the same age my daughter did. I know what this is like. We finally got through it, but I went nuts in the process.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Short updates often are far better than long updates spread out. I hate that.

 

Having said all that, I was not happy with Edward talking drugs to her in the beginning. Now that dropped. I am hoping it stays that way.

 

17 yr old girls............grrr

Summary:

Written as part of the To Kill a Cullen Contest.

Set post Breaking Dawn. Emmett is fed up with being a doormat. He finds out Rose has been cheating on him, but with who? And when a mate cheats what are the consequences? And what is up with Bella and Edward getting arrested for public indecency?

 

Warning contains character death, Breaking Dawn spoilers and lemons. However it was written as a comedy.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4652 Read Count: 496
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

FUNNY>>> VERY FUNNY

Summary:

Bella runs away from the Cullen's house after she thinks she sees Edward kissing another girl. She lands up in the hands of the Volturi and her soul mates but is everything as it seems


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19966 Read Count: 5972
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can not believe you abandond this. Really different story.

Stolen HeART by wordy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

 

Bella Swan was planning her latest heist in the art world. A sixty million dollar Picasso hung on the wall of one of the richest men in the world... He is the only person standing between her and a vast fortune.

Along with her team of artisans, Bella has six weeks to finalise details of the operation, and familiarise herself with the movements of the infamous Edward Masen.

 Nominated for two Indie Awards


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28737 Read Count: 1402
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Background Checks

keep it going.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Personal Invitation

very interesting. Good story line.  Come on post twice a week if its already written.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Bone and Smiling Faces

Grandpa indeed.

 



Author's Response:

I know!! How cheeky is that, Grandpa!! You'll get to realize my large crush that is James. I do heart him.

Wordy :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 80502
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Finding Comfort in the Truth

this is a sad story. I know HEA perhaps but oh the sadness

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

Well that picture made that subject a little hard to deny.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still

Yep she has been afraid of confrontation. You can not change what you will not confront.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling

Well she is making slow steps forward, much like this story. I have been reading forever.  

 

Please update, this story is so worth the read.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapt 30 The Way We Were

tough.. LOL

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 377]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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episode


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 284003 Read Count: 60267
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Sharp

I have this feeling that Bella is gonna get hurt again.  She really needs to be not so focused on one man.  Especially this man, who has many women running after him and he has the misfortune of being hurt (like what happens to us all).

 

Write Bella focus on your craft then have drinks and have fun. Just don't focus on this one man or that other one from. 3 years ago. Really.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Barline

Sweet Bella, I hope she does not get hurt.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Quaver

Well Edward .. ok he let his guard down.

 

Bella I am worried about.  She did a wonderful thing for him. Bless your heart MS author.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rest

Ok Edward, you snooze you loose. PERIOD

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Apostrophe

Hanging in there, I don't care for Edward's ways. His I may say it I may not. Too indecisive.  He knows she is not Tanya she is after all just a young writer that is insecure, he can spot that. 

 

She needs to track up to the cabin and write and let his ass find her. Make him work for it. OR not whatever you are writing this.  Some people think they should just fall into place, life is not like that.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Asterisk

Well. BYE BYE Bella she will never believe him now.

 

We shall see what you do with this.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 421]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163311 Read Count: 48494
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes

Excellent story. Blind or not she is awesome.  I love Bella written with style and strenght if even she has challenges she rises above them.

 

Edward is cleaning up nicely. LOL

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reviewing and even more so for your kind words.

Oh he certainly is, our boy always rises to the occasion.

Aurora

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 35669
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

OK now.. enough on the CLIFF HANGER...

 

Good story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: Dark Edward/Cullens
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 69748
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 May 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

Well she is powerful. Ahh.. first target............TANYA >>LMAO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

Wow Jacob is a real sicko!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within

Nope Jacob is bad...

 

Edward my gosh in human terms he is bi-polar!

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

hmm..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

Okay well I am still reading. So it is dark, but it is more like I picture Vampires than sweet humanitarians.

You know some people are never satisfied. I read some reviews. I mean every chapter in this type of fiction is not buring the house down, so to speak. You set up for the next one or explain what just happened. I like to read continually so I get the rythym.

 

Your writing is fine. This is just dark. Of course you know that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Doomed

Carlisile , I think I felt this all along. Why else? Rose, she is so full of herself.  I guess the other girlfriend he had so much sex with was TANYA.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

do I like it.. well not sure.  They are all so evil. So I probably will not read all of this. I am just going to read a few more chapters and see how this is going. If it is torture and mayham. Then no.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Like a Moth to the Flame

Well I say rip off Tanya's head. Burn her to ashes.. first thing!

 

 



Author's Response:

:] she will die! but not yet hehe xx

Summary:

AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 136601
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Aerial Perspective

I know you finished this sometime ago. But, I have enjoyed the ride. You write well. Your story progresses. The characters are like real people. Bathroom breaks, anger but then forgiveness. Bella is strong and yet still Bella.  Some of these have her in such a state she needs to be commited.

 

Thank you,

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Good Job..

Summary:

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 77129
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ugh rape is rape. Edward or not.ugh

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well he operates on fear. Well that works until she is tired of being afraid, and kills herself.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ahh hah.. he wants to be loved. LOL..  Stockholm has not arrived yet.. Too soon.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You know I don't care how he has a conscious now, she is still in pain.  This will stay with her.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Let her see you tear that whip to pieces. Tell her no more whips.  Remind her your temper is bad and you will start trying to do something about it but you need her help for that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

:=( she is drugged and probably in some type of shock.  She has withdrawn in her mind.

You can not force this, he just will never learn. He has someone he wants feelings from other than hate. OOPS wrong path.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What do I think?  Your story, I think it has an end but it does not look HEA. It looks bleak. She is going to die I am afraid.  He want to possess her, he does not understand love and he thinks he is so much better than her. Of course that is true in Twilight. He has that arrogance.

 

I hope she is strong. I hope he makes a mistake and she starts changing. Once she changes, she can deal with him. Oh yes One on One deal.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

about time..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well he will have to change her or bury her.  I bet he wants to change her. Well no he might drain her and cut his losses.

 

He would be lucky if she lost her memory and forgot this abuse after the change. LUCKY

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You know I like your story. I like at the end you have our E&B together.  It was her story to tell.

 

good job



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you liked my story and the ending.  I really appreciate your comment.  Thank you.

Summary:

 

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

Ascension of the Morning Star chronicles the journeys Bella must take on the path to her fulfill her destiny.  In an almost-canon Post-Eclipse universe, we find Bella and Edward at the moment of their engagement and follow along the preparations for their wedding, the consumation of their vows, and ultimately, her envenoming and beyond.

Unfortunately, as they saying goes...the best laid plans of mice and men...

After all the planning and wedding hoopla, Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, and the future is anything but assured; however there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places.  The journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity, which was thought to be lost forever. 

The inevitability of change is not only the perview of those who seek their destiny, but it is the boundary of all life, eternal and merely mortal. Without the momentum of personal growth, life stagnates.  So it is for many of the Saga, they are emotionally stuck in ways they cannot understand. In her journey, vampires and humans alike discover in themselves new life, new possibility, and hope for the future.   Touched by her unconditional love, no one is the same. 

Nothing will be the same.

A strange human, more comfortable in the dark world of shadow than with her own kind, Bella will discover her destiny is not a choice... it is a gift of love she was born to give.  It was decided long ago.  All that is required is for her surrender to the power of the Fates and accept the unlikely role she must play in history.  By her existence, as human and vampire alike, she will rock the foundations of the mythical world.  Although we grieve, she will rise like the morning star to bring light to our eyes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 306630 Read Count: 2901
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Jul 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Aug 13: "Under a New Moon" Part I

ok... now. Edward unleashed >...LOL

 

 



Author's Response:

I may have to use that as a subtitle... !  thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

After joining a prestigious and illustrious private club built around sexual dominance and role play; Bella enters into a submissive relationship with wealthy and predominant businessman Edward Cullen. Will secrets and a dark past keep their D/s relationship from blossoming into something more? AH. ExB Rated M for adult themes, sexual content and adult language.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 172799 Read Count: 143539
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 The Consequences

I see you have not updated this story in forever. Please finish it.

Summary:

Kidnapped from the dreary town of Forks, Bella must face being sold as a slave to a richer, more demon like vampire. As her master teachers her the rules and uses her, somewhere along the way, he feels for her, but throw in Jacob and Edward must fight for the girl who could potentially change his ways. But what if, one night, Edward's family from Forks comes to visit, and they recognize the chiefs missing daughter? How will they save her too?

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I want to thank rpattz1990 for this amazing banner. I LOVE IT! SO much. Thank you dearest.

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I want to thank jennmc75 For this Beautiful Banner that she made for me. You honestly dont know how thankful I am for it:)

 

*Contains rape and a very Dark Edward.*

 

ATTENTION: If you have any experience in making banners for stories, if you could, please make one for this story. Please make one and send it to my email.    Akersiscool@gmail.com

Please and thank you:)


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40554 Read Count: 58901
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

update??

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ugh..Jacob is not dead..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

they have been through hell.

Summary:

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 13403
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: WHO ARE YOU...?

I have read this before. Not repetitive. Good story.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1364]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 161955
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

well hurry yourself up. Blood thirsty people.  Cullen chocking Isabella, not good.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

keep writing kid.. I hate the flashbacks. Too long.  Maybe shorter!

 

Otherwise interesting story line.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Well reading your note at the top, had me wondering what you were doing. Well it is  a story about a hit man.. Please they kill people not. You can not sugar cote that.  Fiction and that is all to be said about that.

A strong story line is better than half a chapter each of just sex.  I swear people just cut and paste that over and over.

 

You are doing well, slow but well.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

Bella has post partumn depression. She probably has a slew of problems after Dimitri terrorized her.  She needs a helper to help with the baby and the cleaning while she lays on her but and gets well. Edward needs to help her as much as he can that will rebuild their relationship. (sounds good on paper)

I say that perhaps staying alone for a couple of weeks might be good. No Kate, Charlie or Seth. Alone time for that little family that needs it so badly.

 

Thank you for not ditching us. I had given up on this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for not giving up on this story completely. I assure you, it will be finished. I would not do that to the readers, leave them hanging without an ending. thanks MaryMary. I appreciate you still reading and as always, I appreciate your candor.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

you loaded this twice. I guess  you know now. Cliff hanger!!! 

 

Hurry up.

 



Author's Response:

I hadn't known, thank you for pointing that out. When I tried to upload the chapter earlier it went completely crazy. LOL I nearly have the next chapter done and Im pretending that there was a 'please' in front of the 'hurry up'. LOL. Thanks for the review I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

well please dont take so long to update. This story is intense.

 

UGH

 



Author's Response:

LOL I really enjoy your reviews. Honestly I do. I hope to have the next chapter out at the same time next week. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. And for the please. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

ok cliff hanger.............come on. write faster..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two Reunions

Leave it to Edward to go after her then punish her. DUH..

 

If you dont want her then leave her.

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: the Rescue: Part Three Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Well, Bella needs to focus on her baby.  She made a choice now live with it. She saved her father, she lost her love.  Now reality sets in.

 

Personally I would not talk again to Edward, unless forced to. I would do all I could to avoid contact with him at all cost. No matter how much it hurt me. He doesn't want me then fine, I am alive for my baby and my baby alone.

 

 



Author's Response:

Indeed reality is setting in for them all. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Greenaway

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Glad you are back. I am one that messaged you. Okay now great chapter. Sad though, Bella  can she take any more hurt?  She came in abused. Then Carlisle and Esme hated her and that never went well. Then she tried to make her father live. Almost cost her her life.  Then Edward decides that he can not forgive her for defending her family. He defends his, but oh my.  She left him because it looked like her only course of action. She is selfless so she tried to fix that problem herself.  THen the Volturi abused her. She gets back and Edward tells her he could kill her. That makes sense why go after her. Oh I get it the baby he did NOT want. Then he leaves. Remember this baby maybe his but she is not married to the father so.... Aiden is a Swan. That should kick Cullen in the ass. I think Bella has had enough hurt, don't you? Normal people would lapse into some type of depression or they would become violent. Carlisle still doesn't like her. HE wants the baby.

Her best friend Kate slept with her Edward whatever he is to Bella, not husband, not boyfriend, not really anything. I am glad she moved out.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Well hello to you 2. I can not believe you finally gave us another chapter.  Not many stories I could go right back to. Some are so uninteresting I just pass them by when they don't update.

 

My only problem is you will not kill of the "grimm brothers". SICKO DEM & FELIX. They need to be burned at the stake. UGH bad people.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 23858
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

a box of Kleenex later.. You tell a good story my dear.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, No More Sadness

Thank you for a beautiful story,

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3949]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Complete & read by Chandrakanta, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 791305
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Em.. oh EM.. lol



Author's Response:

my sentiments exactly! I had almost finished writing the chapter when I swear his voice just popped up in my head and I was like "Emmett, are you even kidding me!!!" - but what can I say, he is who he is - winking blue eyes, sassy dimples..... I am such a pushover for these boys....

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

You know, Edward is that hunk and all that but he has this ego that is going to kill him. On their honeymoon and he acts like that. Then Victoria shoots him and Jasper.

I wonder if Bella will recover from this? Will she think that she is at fault? Paul is needed big time.

 

Wonder went to sadness.  Shot or not Edward needs a spanking.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review - you are absolutely right - and don't worry, he is not getting away with anything!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

HMM Bella is so mixed up. She is weak and strong. This sub stuff is sick. Sorry but it is. If anyone touched her and kissed her he would. FREAK! Natural for her to feel the same if your sub is just that a sexual sub not someone that LOVES  you!  Hell. then you would not care as much.  Her weakness is not protecting HERSELF. She is a roll over for whatever he wants. Never mind if it hurts her.  She is college educated, not a full out ediot!

Come on giver her SOME REAL BALLS>

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I promise - she will show them next week. thanks for the review

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

well Hell Jacob got into someone else's home and got shot. He was not invited. He threatened lives. So She can beat this! Period.

 

Now get her up off the floor and Charlie go beat the hell out of Billie.

 

LOL

 

 



Author's Response:

THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!!!! Thank you so much lol

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Was it too long?  HELL NO. Do you know some of these other stories update 1,000 words and then want a review. It is hard to review when  you have nothing to work with.  It was beautiful and I was taken by suprise actually.

 

I am not keen on the BDSM. I think way too much about that. I skim over most of it and read the rest. Yes he is teaching her to take care of herself. She says I am sorry wayyyyyy too much!

 

Good story,



Author's Response:

thank you so much MM - I'm glad that you are taking out the bits that you don't like and that I'm giving you enough story to carry on with - there is so much more to this story than BDSM and I love that you see that.

Thank you Honey,

Michele

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

funny.. 9 weeks pregnant.

 



Author's Response:

Did you like it? I hope so!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Well, I really thought you were going to get her upset with pictures from his night out and those women coming on to him. I am glad that slid by.

It was a good chapter.

They are going to fight and when they do she has to be able to be strong. He can not control everything, that will make her into a BIMBO.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review. You are right, she has to learn to be strong and to stand up for her convictions.

xoxo

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

great job



Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Great chapter but I really wanted to see Bella's wedding dress.



Author's Response:

Hey there MM,  I have so many great photos that I will put up in the next chapter, INCLUDING her wedding dress. I hope that you will like it!  I promise to post soon!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Last chapter I thought I would suggest you take the pen you write with and stab Edward with it, several times.

 

The description of his character is right on. As an actor he thinks the world revolves around him.  This is his dom life style as well. Yes he takes care of his sub, but for his gratification as well.

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

well life on the DOM farm will change now with a new DOM on its way. Trust me they come out as dom's.



Author's Response:

loved your comment! thanks for the review

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Well, it happens and usually over stupid stuff.  They need to talk. Esme needs to at least open up to him even if she does not like what he says.  This will end badly.



Author's Response:

have a little faith in me, and of course in the Cullen Kids xoxo

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Here is the deal, you may not always answer reviews, but you write 10,000+words per chapter and that is worth reading.

Some writers write 1200 words and at the end they say no updates until I get 20 reviews.. How in the heck do  you review that few words?  You can not develop any thing!



Author's Response:

Thank you darling - but I really do like to try and reply to the people that take the time to read my story. xoxo

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Well, he feels like he cheated because he became aroused.  Yep right there. Bella being pregnant again with baby #3 and being insecure will take a hit on this.

Summary:

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 38232
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

too much angst..  She is a vamp... she has strong emotions. She has to move forward, I picture her in circles.

 

I want to say moving right along here. Take her out and hunt. Taker her out and loose her. Make a movement foward.

 

yikes



Author's Response:

Angst?  My story?  I don't think so.  :)  To each their own but this is mostly humor I would say.  He'll get her out to hunt and they're moving forward all the time.