Penname: MaryMary [Contact] Real name: joyce
Member Since: 29 Jun 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a  retired 66 year old grandmother from Texas. I was born and raised in Texas. My husband and I own a ranch in North central Texas and raise cattle.  I have two children and 4 grandchildren. I love reading my favorite stories are about the mafia and mysteries.


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Reviews by MaryMary
Summary:

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 37688
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well ...Bella opened herself up for this. SO.. it has many sides.

 

 



Author's Response:

Little confused by what you mean here...the jealousy and such?  Yes she did.  She didn't really think about how she'd feel watching him go out with someone else.  And the kiss?  Well hopefully she'll understand :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this is soooo funny.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you think so!  I have a lot of fun with these two crazy vamps.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Happy Edward.  Well Happy Bella too.

 

Still funny.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah I don't think she's complaining either :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well, way to drag that out of him.

 

HMM..



Author's Response:

Drag it out?  That was how it had to happen. It was pure Smugward style, telling her he loves her during a fight, completely unplanned and unromantic.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is a good vamp story. Not so outlandish and it is funny.  His internal verbage is hilarious.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it :)  It's a lot of fun just letting these two drive each other insane but come together where they belong.  Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Okay now... we need  your update quick. Victoria.. grrrr

 

 



Author's Response:

Hehe I'll get to work :) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved the story. His inner voice is so funny!

 

Thank you for a good story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) I love his inner voice too, the things he doesn't say are often funnier than the things he does!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue 2

excellent story. I have laughed and laughed. I will miss this.

 

 

 

 

Thank you,



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So will I, but I have a feeling Smugs will stay with me no matter what.  I may bring him back someday too, but I've got lots of writing ahead right now.  Thanks so much for reading and I love that I made you laugh

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cowtake

You know this story can not die. It is way too funny. I mean, I have cows and my husband said the same darn thing.  I will feed them, haul off their babies at 6 months but I will NOT stick my arm in a cows behind.

 

Really you got to write a sequel. Life on the " Vampire Farm with Ed & Bella. " LMAO

 



Author's Response:

Hahah That's awesome!  I love that Smugs reminded you of the husband there.  That's too great!  I'd have to do learn quite a few things about farms but it's totally a fun idea!  hahah Love it!  Thank you ;)

Summary:

Bella Swan was on the fast track to the perfect life, until everything fell apart one night. Now her life becomes more and more tangled at every turn.

Can she find her way out?

Special thanks to M81170 for the banner.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24637 Read Count: 147
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Siblings

Well she got what she ask for when she did not listen to her brother. I am being hard here but those people that don't listen have to learn the hard way. Poor baby having him for a father.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Road Trip - Shotgun!

So Bella was not pregnant from James?  I think  you lost me with that first statement.

 

I have no theory on Jasper.  I am not sure how much that he and EM maybe the same.  He wants no commitment he offers only advice. So

Move on.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Confessions

for crying out loud. Jasper wake up here.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  The story is more up to date on FF and Twilighted.

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 19040
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

woohoo... finally..

 

Edward undone!

 

 

LMAO



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 185139 Read Count: 16016
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

whoa.. Carlisle you dog.

 

HMM.. what will Edward do now??

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:

Good job, I can not stop reading.  Finally a vampire story that has intrigue.

 

 

Bella and Edward, well now. Lie to your soul mate and pay dearly.  Good Job.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I keep thinking Edward you snooze you looze. Well It does seem he has lost Bella finally.  I think her biggest attraction to Carlisle was his honesty and his respect for her thoughts. 

Aro uses Charlotte as a tracer. She obviously is not loyal to him.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies

Well I think Edward has truly lost her.  Edward is still youthfull in his actions. Always wants to control her. Carlisle tried.  Isabella is now "a force to be reconned with".

 

good story,

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I reread this. He waited 3 long years. Well how long has Esme been dead?  Did he just immediately think of Bella?  Must be an overlap there on HIS part.

 

Edward is so screwed. 

 

Remember a vampire can affect her emmotions.  Edward did that before the ball game.  Hmm..

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals

edward... hmm he needed to move on. He did when he left her PERIOD. I dont blame her for moving on.  I dont trust him any more. Playing two sided. I will always wait for you.. BS

 

The clans are both corrupt. I would do my best to let the war begin and then let them kill each other off while I watched. Who ever wins I would kill.  (vampire wise)

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Part 2

Well Edward lost because of his deeds, as he should.  Edward can not always win because he is beautiful. That is shallow.

 

 

 

Summary:

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You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 22934
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am reading along and not reviewing. I am sorry for that. Great story. Not all the hate. I like that.

Season of the Lie by Anadabyel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 332]
Summary:

 

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 Awsome banner above by S is for Psycho, Crap one below is mine.

 

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Lonely Edward, Jasper, and Emmett come upon a lovely desperate young woman as she is about to commit suicide. They decide to try and make her their mate by unconventional means.  Dark Cullen Bros.  AU/OOC/AL/AS 

This is my first attempt at Dark. 

Story will contain violence, murder, physical, and psychological abuse.

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Emmett, Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32730 Read Count: 27573
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

no we have Cullen bad guys.. and Good James. GO figure.

 

HMM

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

sicko cullens>> hmm

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

sicko...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

yuck........sicko..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

that ended different than I thought. I figured they would all love her. I thought their natural tendency to protect their mate would be a problem to share. >>> MEN SHARE ha ha.

 

Well Papa Bear picked up the pieces..

Thanks for ending it quickly.

 

 

Summary:

A Twisted Twilight Tale

This is my extended imagination running wild on the basis of Twilight. You know how it starts, but in this tale Edward is a more possessive and a bit violent because be I am obsessed with a darker, and dominant Edward. Not always the gentleman. Warning!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68234 Read Count: 24898
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Hunt

No I am not upset they did not fight. Jacob sounds more intense as well.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sleepover, Alice Cullen Style

yes she would think it was a dream how could she know otherwise?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Prey

Well at least this Edward is more entertaining and Bella is not a snivelling, tripping fool.

 

thank you,

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dazzled

ha ha.. dazzled..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: First Date

utoh... no rape Edward.. come on.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Bound and Helpless

well seduction but no rape. Thank you. I did not want to start this off hating him.

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 714]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 52837
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Can you blame her she has lost him again. She tried to prevent it.  I can only imagine her grief.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

this is so good.

 

GOOD JOB.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

ahh. come on!..

That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 359]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella has been alone for 4 months. Edward is gone. Alice’s marriage is in tatters. Carlisle agonizes as his entire family is destroyed, until the day he receives a desperate call from the one person who can change it all: Bella Swan E&B Canon Pairing NMAU


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories for Lissa
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155833 Read Count: 42062
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27--With Love From Texas

victoria.. grr

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25--At Last

Cold shower time for the readers!  whew.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24--Almost Home

good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23--Forever

Beautiful.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26--Remorse

Good chapter. I so wish you had not named her Renesmee. SIGH.. No Carlie either, way over done.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Is There a Doctor in the House

and you know this all makes sense. She has to go to Carlisle, she knows no other doctor would know what to do.  Plus it would reveal the vampire baby.

 

Now I get that Carlisle feels he needs to honor Edward but he lets that go too far. He should find out everything before he makes a decision. He knows Edward was changed young and his decisions sometimes are not well thought out. They tend to be black and white just as young people do.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Interminable

Well Hello that got his attention. She will die soon. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20--Unexpected Surprise

Well our Bella is changing slowly.

 

Jacob finally gave up. Now will he imprint on...............Renesseme?  Oh how I dislike that name.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21--Visitors

Tanya was tame... hmm

 

Laurent went to hunt and visit?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17--The Little Things You Do

so funny. I mean here she is pregnant by him. So cat's out of the bag so to speak. He wants to wait?? Her hormones are going to pus her for relief... Pregnant women tend to be horney.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43--Surprise

ugh

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13--His heart

Some of this is exactly like Twilight. He is sucha jaded vamp. Listening in on others thoughts has really done  a number on him. He needs to be in the moment loving and being loved. Baby talk.. missing in this.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14--Vow

looking forward to  your update.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15--What's In A Name

Well here we go on the journey.. To Renessme. I liked Beth better.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28--Feeding the Monster

good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30--Labor Day

good chapter

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31--Lull

Thank you the imprinting on babies is awfull. Pedophile. eck.

 

Good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Unknown Factor

That anti venom is a switch!..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Going Vampy

love, lust and speed LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39--Field Trip

Well great chapter.  Charlie stands to gain more than he has lost if he can see the forest for the trees.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44--Showdown

good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45--The Truth

good chapter.

Insecurities by JamesRamsey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper
was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be
safe - My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there.  5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Awards'


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 66753
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 May 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sorry I am reading and not reviewing. This is a great story. I would like to see Edward reap what he has sowed with Bella. She is a beautiful vamp. and she is strong.

She has got to toughen up mentally and then she can kick his..booty.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Well Edward has grown up. Who would have thunk it would take him a 100 years to do that.

LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

great story. thanks,

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 102957
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh wow did not see this wreck coming. This is a big hurtle. Will she be able to have children?  They wanted them so bad.

 

I say move out of LA. Screw that scene. Those actors that put up with this daily, I feel sorry for. They do a job and the public will not let it end. I would not live there. I would move to Tin BUCK Two if it were me. Have a normal life, fly out do a job then go home.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

really well written story. Just enough suspense. Good Love story.

 

SO WRITE!

 

Mary

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Cliff hanger. Just cause they know they are married, no one dies. So!!

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Come on now, heal our Bella.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Yes she has had a big loss. It happens she is alive. Now she has to move forward. He has had a loss too. Her choice to go to that damn party. Life is all about choices then you have to suffer the consequences. 

 

Bella is smart, come on get her out of this damn dismal spot.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Get her to have sex and start therapy and move. She has to be healing, then end it.

 

Loved the story.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I am going to hate this to end. I do hope you will get Bella up and in better health before you end this.

 

Good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

thanks for writing a real story about people that have big problems and then work through them.

 

Everything is life is not always EASY.

 

Summary:

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Bella has finished her last day of work, it's her 19th birthday, and she is soon leaving  for England.  She runs into the brother of an old friend from jr high.  Will she end up still going to England? 

 

 

                                                                        


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102860 Read Count: 41035
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Mr Spanky is back!

Some of this is poop. You dont have to be in business with someone if You don't want to. 

 

If Bella was older she would KNOW this.  I personally would say I will shut up but she does NOT come to my home ever.  If you dont handle this then expect me to. I may sub but I am a human to respect my wishes.  You let her into YOUR club I can not control that, my home I can or I don't live here. Plain and simple.

IT IS CALLED BACK BONE.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: It's all Alice's Fault

Well this is all well and good. BUT you have to sign on for this and you have safe words. No playing without them.

 

I personally think that some of this is good for people with no self decipline, but spanking adults is crazy. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Who Is She?

I am not keen on BDSM. I still think it is sick. 

 

Rules are good for most people, they need to give respect to others.

 



Author's Response:

Maybe this type of story is not for you.....but thanks for your opinion anyway

Summary:

Two broken families in search of happiness. Two broken hearts in search of their true other half.

Based on my one shot "A Little Flirting Goes a Long Way". Edward and Bella had a long way to go find each other, but now that they have, will they find love again. Future lemons and language. Please read and review.

The story will tell about Edward's life and Bella's life before they met, Edward's marriage to Tanya and Bella's marriage to Mike. It will be angsty telling this part of the story, then it will get to where Edward and Bella meet and follow them through falling in love.

Jennmc75 made me this awesome banner!

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stories/10931/images/edward_&_bella_2.jpg

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 127339 Read Count: 12240
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Life We Made

Pacey? what a name.



Author's Response:

I used to watch Dawson's Creek back in the day. Pacey was Dawson's best friend. Thanks for reading!
:) freakybella

Summary:

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Isabelle Volturi, Daughter of a mafia legend is one of the most notorious mercenaries in the U.S.A. When her family hears that their rivals in the underground world are trying to distroy their empire she wont stop until the Cullen/Masens have been demolished. Unlucky for her, the heir to the Masen throne, Edward wont go down without a fight.

 

When Edward kidnaps her will he break her spirit or will he help her realise that love does exsist? 

 

And when a third party joins the blood bath will anyone make it out alive?

 

Rated for graphic violence, murder & rape.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40094 Read Count: 33686
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Being Fearless

:-{ Well no love here for B&E.. He is killing her. So that will be a tough romance. LOL

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Consumed

Well that is great punishment to Assward. She is not going to warm up to him. She will kill him if she gets a chance. Interesting.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Relighting the Fire

Edward must be short on smarts. Blood on his PP would tell him she was a virgin. DUH.

 

Well she had been prepared for all types of torture but not rape. Now I am wondering if we are going to have PREGNANT Isabella.  Oh my not with Dickward as the father.

 

Nice folks all of them. Good story.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Can it get Worse?

What do I get for calling this in advance! I should get some kind of award! Edward is really a douche.  At least use a condom who wants your dumb sperm??

 She is sick to add to this. Someone get her another eye. These people have money. Aro please love her don't hurt her more.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The Return

Sorry it is too long?? We have so many authors that write 3000 or less words once a month. THIS IS GREAT>>>

 

 

GREAT STORY.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The passing of CyanideandFineLines

I  hope someone will because I reread this today. I am so sorry about your sister. may she rest in peace.

Bella? Marie? by FriskyKitten Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Bella (22) is trying to create a new future by avoiding her past. She's wary of relationships, yet longs for love and acceptance. She enjoys the feeling of being needed, and works as a live-in nanny to Rosalie's four-year old son.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she catches his attention at a club. 

However, he doesn't recognize her. 

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. 

After one night together, everything will change. 

How will Edward react when he discovers that the confident Marie was really his quiet nanny, Bella?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters. 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 143453 Read Count: 32768
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 30 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Sex Kitten

that is all fine and good but Bella needs some one to cherish her.  Edward and Rose are getting closer. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8:Supernatural

how about writing faster. 

 



Author's Response: LOL. I'll try. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, too. It means so much :) Hope you enjoy the chapter 9 teaser, from Edward: “What the hell are you doing sneaking up on me?” she demanded angrily, a hand clasped to her chest, probably willing her heart rate to slow down. “I was in my workshop. I had things to do before breakfast.” She was still breathing heavy while her eyes took in my old scruffy work clothes, and I realized that when she had first seen me, she mustn’t have recognized me in my work gear. “What is it with you and Henry? You both seem to enjoy scaring the hell out of me,” she accused, turning back to face the counter and pulling out the coffee container from an overhead cabinet. She mumbled something which sounded very similar to, “like father like son.” “Bella, it’s not my fault if you are exceptionally unobservant,” I quipped. She seemed to have a tendency for getting lost in her own mind and ending up a thousand miles away. She turned her face and scowled at me. Bella looked quite cute, trying to act fierce, so I smirked at her. I was starting to see that she had a feisty side, but one she controlled due to her respect for her job. I wondered what she might have said to me right then if I weren’t her boss. Bella shook her head and, with raised eyebrows, closed her eyes and sighed. Her shoulders relaxed as she extinguished the fire in her eyes. The idea that I’d forced her compliance stirred something unpleasant in me and I almost told her to honestly tell me what she wanted to say. Instead, she roughly opened the coffee container. I watched silently as she measured out the exact proportion of coffee grinds and placed them in the machine. It wasn’t until then that it occurred to me that the coffee she’d made for the last three days had been just how I liked it – perfect in fact. Yet I’d never told her how strong I liked my coffee. So how did she…? “Bella?” “Hmm?” “How do you know how much coffee to put in?” I knew for a fact that Rose liked her coffee weak as shit. “I’ve seen you do it before.” She shrugged. “I guess you could say that my… observation skills are in fact… quite exceptional.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

The fact an unborn child's death  has held a man's sorrow this long is strange. Men generally let go quicker because they have not vested so much in one, Especially if it is not their first.  Women on the other hand have a much harder time.

I think that Edward is finding the nanny isn't as dull and childish as he first thought. Men are visual though and if she dressed he would catch on.  That is if you write it.

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey! So glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) A lot more about Cynthia will be revealed later. :)Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means the world. Hope you enjoy the snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, Edward’s pov: Going to Henry’s bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly. I could see... Bella. Swimming. In a bikini. Fuck.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

faster faster!!

 



Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I’m thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Here’s a little taste of what’s to come shortly, hopefully this weekend. It’s Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella’s view: “So… er… you still want me to give you a massage, or what?” I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it. He smiled, raising his brow. “Are you sure that’s okay? I wouldn’t usually… But my shoulder is killing me.” I nodded. “Of course it’s okay. I wouldn’t have offered if….” My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again. “Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So… how do you want me?” His lips twitched, and if I didn’t know any better, I’d swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it. “Uh…” I honestly didn’t know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass… I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night… I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn’t been able to help myself. But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his… My mouth went dry.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Massage

please dont take so long......................Please..

So nice to have a Bella that has past problems, but isnt demented. So many write her as weak, immoral, without a moral compass.

 

HURRY,

 



Author's Response: Hey! I've been really unwell these last few weeks, so haven't been able to update sooner. Sorry :( I’m so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know that you like seeing Bella's strength and values. It's so good to hear you say that! She's got some ways to go, but we'll see her grow even more :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here’s a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It’s from Bella: My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward’s twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence. Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Never Forget

how about updates more often!!!



Author's Response: Hey!I wish I could update more often, but real life is hectic and slows me down! I’m sorry it’s taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta’s and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta’d teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends: Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger. The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I’d taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward’s reaction. He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his. I knew I shouldn’t have taken off my damn sweater!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Friends

Well, she deserves happiness. Let us hope that this is right for her.  We know if it is she will be great with Henry.

 

Go after him. No! She should allow him to really see her. All sides. If he guesses this out she should be honest that she kept the secret to keep her job. Not to lie but she had no choice.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Deja vu

Please dont take so long to update. I was about to delete this thinking you had dropped the story.

 

 

COME ON NOW KEEP IT GOING>

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Truth

Time for Bella to move on. Now I know you are hung up on Edward/Bella, but this one will not work.  Bella should let him dwell on his mouth.   Calling her a slut. HMM. That was totally low.

 

I don't totally blame her she tried to keep that secret, not use it against him. He persude her not the other way around. She needs to move on to another job. Let him replace her with some OLD granny type.  Then he wont want to have relationships.

I am not a big Edward fan. He either is a pu..y or he seeks it as a big DICK. 

I know she lied but the big picture is HOW DID SHE DO HER JOB? That has never crossed his ... erection filled head. She Loves HENRY and that should be his damn focus. 

 

STILL.. move on Bella..

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Consequences

Yes Ben gets a lot of kisses. Angela is next in line for kisses.  I hope that she does not sail right back to him. He was so mean to her.

She did not try to extort money out of him. That happened one time and she has not tried to get him in bed since. Now lets look at him. He pursued her and has started it once again.

She needs to go to school. Perhaps set up times to maybe see Henry. Once or twice a week to help him get through the seperation. I just would not walk right back in there and start cleaning and cooking and screwing Edward.

IMO

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Revelations

Sorry Writer. I do not like Edward.  He puts himself first. In this situation he did not think of Henry before he started talking to her. Again that night he is right back with her seducing him. He is not taking responsibility for his actions. I do NOT like Edward. He thinks Royce is a douche.. I think Edward is.

 

Bella will be better off going to school and making a life without them. She could babysit Henry from time to time so they can be together. But if SHE is smart she will get OVER Edward. He used her as much as she used him. And he is so hurt.>>>SCREW THAT. Oh yes caught the part about her stomach upset. PREGNANCY?? That will be awfull for Bella... She does NOT need Edward to think he has to love her.. He is sure he will be alone forever.. Let him. Please let her shoot him down about another 1 night stand. REMEMBER THE SLUT COMMENT. it is out there no take backs.. I do not like this Edward..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: My Exception

This is a good story.  I am glad he did not purpose a friends with benifits deal to her. She has had enough people screwing her over.  Angela was wrong the club scene was not right for her. She needs someone but not like that. She needs to be cherished.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Perfection

Well, I want things for Bella. She deserves to be happy. Not screwed over each time someone with money has a bad day.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Unexpected Events

We love reading the story, once again she is alone. She can not go on being at other people's mercy.

 

Best not go back there even though she is pregnant. Gosh I hope I am wrong. Maybe sometime you will update and we find out.

 

 

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2157
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

Good story.

 

Aro should have heard the old saying "what goes around, comes around". In this case cold damp cell and bread and water.

 

thank you,



Author's Response:

Thanks, MaryMary...he really should have thought of that!!!

I'm guessing he won't survive long...

Kathie

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 821]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: The Sport of Love Writing Challenge - CLOSED
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 133334
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

So good! Sweet & so hot. sigh.. I need a shower LOL

 



Author's Response:

Haha so glad you liked it!  I'll have more for you very soon that will hopefully require another shower!  haha Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

You do so good. I LOOOVE this story. I guess it is because no matter how important he is, he is decent and honest. Honest to Bella!

Our Bella here is the right balance, smart and sweet.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  He is definitely decent and honest and just too much in love with his girl to hide it!  So glad you like both him and Bella.  I really love writing them :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

Sweet. "home"

 

 



Author's Response:

:) Home indeed!!!  Love that!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Ahh Tanya in the bathroom.  Poor old Tanya no body loves her everybody screws her, oops perhaps not everbody!. LOL LOL

 



Author's Response:

Heheh Esme just had to be sure she wasn't going to interfere any further :)  Gotta love Mama Bear!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

Okay this is funny as usuall. Love this story. Love & humor!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you love it and it's still making you laugh :)   That's my goal!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

That would be hard. She does her job and he had a bad day. That was hard on both of them.

MAMA is okay all else can be repaired.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, it was a tough day for both of them.  Everything is just fine now though :)  Esme being healthy certainly puts things in perspective!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

I want to say this is a sweet story. Good to know some one in sports and that level can be so commited to a female. Usually they are committed to being laid and not much else.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think there are several that are very good husbands, it's just the bad ones we hear about!  It's nice to know some don't give in to temptation though!