Penname: krazi4TwiSaga [Contact] Real name: Krazi
Member Since: 14 Jul 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I´m a diehard TwiHard Fan. I fell in love with the saga and read all four books constantly for over a year. There was never a time at some point in my day that I did not have one of the four books in my hand. I was addicted, until fanfiction became a part of my life. 


I´m a singer/songwriter and I´m currently living in Madrid, Spain. I´m having the time of my life, but trust me there´s no place like home. I have since become addicted to fanfiction, so I spend my days and nights reading, thank God for Iphone´s with 3G, I no longer even watch TV. Strongly considering a 12 step program, but that means that I would have to admit I have a problem. And i just don´t think there is one.


My preferences of course are anything Bella and Edward. I am a strong Robsten Supporter and Bellward just fit in my book. I don´t care what the go through, just as long as at the end of the day they are together...


I´m on twitter!!!!!  @krazis_korner


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Reviews by krazi4TwiSaga
Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15414
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Dec 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Dead Souls

well..I think from the conversation...Mrs. Schaeffer knows the Cullens and she was talking about Edward's return...I also think she is extremely rich and will leave it all to Bella because she views her as a daughter..also she's going turn out to be someone who really important, but has chosen to live out of the public eye..ok I know what your thinking and your right..I've got a lot of free time on my hands.... anywho....James is going to be the maniacal bastard he also ways is...don't let the sweet talk fool ya...he's going to stalk Bella and try to hurt her again....that's my story and I'm sticking to it...great chappie!!! off to read more

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Tramp Abroad

okay...I've got a couple of question, because I'm kinda confused...Where do they live...Why is Edward being their brother a secret....Why is Alice so negative towards Edward.... what has he done wrong...all the previous chapters indicate he was not at fault with how his relationships ended...the women hurt him...so why wouldn't Alice think he'd be perfect for Bella...

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Way We Live Now

ahhh.... there he is in the frozen food isle.... I was missing Edward... hope he gets an invite to dinner...I asked before and will go back through my reviews to check...but why is it that Edward's relationship to Alice and Emmett being kept a secret...and why don't they want them to be toghether...because seems as though Edward has been nothing but hurt, so I would think Alice would think they're perfect for each other..or maybe I just think too much... too short, but sitll a great chapter!!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Pride and Prejudice

ok...where's the invite? Although the way he was talking I think he's already been invited by Emmett or Alice..

Krazi

xoxo

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1482]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 181268
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Wow...that was a doozie..... I really hope that Edward can save Kate too... I know that Bella will be okay eventually, but I just hope Kate's good deeds get rewarded in the end....I kinda feel bad for Charlie... and I definitely can't wait for Demetri to get a good taste of his own medicine....Excellent writing... I'm absolutely hooked to this story!!!!! Great Chapter..

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

haha!!!! That´s surely got me on edge.....can´t wait til they bust the door down...in a way I´m glad that Esme didn´t tell Edward about the baby...I´m hoping that will serve as the glue that will mend the family, because even after all she´s done...I don´t want anything to happen to Esme!!! oh and please save Kate too... Awesome chapter...

 

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 121864
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just started reading.. I´m liking everything so far... great story!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 38227
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

I missed you!!!! So glad your back and Domella is here to kiss it and make it all better...can´t wait for more...and trust me no matter how long in between updates...I will most definitely be here...Thanks for a great story!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 98908
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwww.... so sad to see it come to an end...your right we´ve had some really good times and some bad with this story...you did an excellent job...I hate to see it go, but as they say all good things must come to an end....but hope to read more great fics from you in the future!!!

Krazi

Summary:

 

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210866 Read Count: 109203
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

As always I loved it...I have my own story going and i rec´d your story to to the great readers of FanFiction.net... It is truly amazing... even though Esme is a royal bitch..just saying... can´t wait for the next chapter.. loving that the kids all side with Bella... Bella and the kids living a tree house was really funny... let´s see how lunch with      Bitchme´goes. next time..lol

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

Wonderful as usual...I am so ready to pimp slap Esme for being a colossal bitch-in-;aw....it's pretty much expected of Tanya by now...I just realized this story is great but also super unique in that the other couples had limited involvment and the little they did have was of a pretty negative nature...love how you've change things up.... great chappie Babes!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Glad you like it - given the way B & E started it was inevitable that most people who knew their history would be against them but it is also what makes depend on and be so close to each other and why they usually communicate to each other so well.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

Awesome chapter... I enjoyed it very much...I would surely love to know why Esme is being a royal biotch...so hopefully you´ll clear that up for us.. and because I´m extremely nosey I wanna know what was in that packet.... yeah they´re trying for a baby.... I can´t wait... poor Carlisle he´s really cool but s caught up in the middle... I need to go back and review... I forgot what Edward´s Tattoo says... great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Edward's tattoo is over his heart and says 'Owner of Isabella Cullen'  with her special occasion collar wrapped around it.

For the next chapter wil be the outtake of Esme's lunch with Bella and the phone she makes at home.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

Wow.... didn´t see that one coming at all..... On one hand I understand, but I´m with Carlisle... my forgiveness depends on Edward and Bella´s... Esme has quite a few skeletons in her designer closet....I want Carmen and Tanya to get theirs as well... Bella is one of a kind.. not many ppl would´ve handled the situation like that... can´t wait for the fallout...poor Carlisle... he really is a victim as well in all this mess...great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

wonderful as always....glad to finally be putting the Esme situation to rest.... can´t wait for the triplets.... I just love ExB babies... their always the cutest... great chapter...good luck with the awards!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for redaing - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

That was wonderful, as usual.  i just love all of your stories!  I´m glad the babies had a safe arrival and everyone behaved at the hospital, that was the best Christmas present of all.  I can´t wait to see it Rose has changed at, hopefully, she has for the best.  Another thing that seems like it´s going to be epic is the impending breakdown of Esme, i hope she can go through what she needs to, to heal and become apart of her familiy´s life again.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks you and thanks for reading - Esme hitting bottom is coming - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Awww...say it isn't so, I'm not ready for it to be over! Lol!  It was definitely worth the wait, so no worries.  I'm glad Esme finally got her shit together, too bad it took Cancer to get her there.  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

Wow... that was definitely amazing.  I balled my eyes out the entire time.  I love that you didn´t make us suffer long and reunited them in eternity quickly.  I have enjoyed taking this ride with you tremendously and these two will definitely be missed.  It´s always so sad when the really good ones end.  Thank you so much for sharing your phenomenal talent with all of us.  I´m definitely looking forward to more of your great stories in the future!  Great ending to an even greater story!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 69646
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

here's a thought...just don't stop...I really like the story..and I want to stick around and wait for you to finish...it really is a good one...oh btw Charlie is being a prick!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 57722
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

I just want it to be over.  I want them to get back together!  James is so weird, and don´t think I missed the red hair that Edward saw.  Mmmhmm ... I saw that, Edward may have been to preoccupied with thoughts of Bella, but I saw it all.  What´s the deal with James´missing daughter and wife?  One and one ins not equalling two here, but I will continue to hold-on.  Great chapter as always!

 

P.S. I voted for Little Bell as the best kid, she is so hilarious!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

Phew.....that was close....I so don´t want her with Jake....and can she go to the fundraiser and bitchslap Edward and then the can have some great make up sex...hahaha...it´s just a suggestion....lol...can´t wait for the next chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14

CAN I GET A WHAT WHAT WOOO WOOO.... I AM DOING THE HOKIE POKIE...THESE TWO HAVE FINALLY DONE THE DEED...YAYYYYYY LAWYERWARD IS GONNNA BE LITTLE BELL´S DADDYWARD...HA..UP YOURS JAKE SHE NEVER CALLE D YOU DADDY!!!!!!!!! THIS DESERVES A DRINK!!!!!!

 

KRAZI XOXO

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

I enjoyed the calm... but I gotta say Little Bell is a girl after my own heart... she is so wanting Edward to be her Daddy.. from the way she kept changing the subject.. If she can have mor Ewoord.. she not gonna miss Jacob too much... I´m just saying... Smart Girl!!! see ya next week!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

Wow... I have no words for how much i loved this chapter... hey I agree with Bella... Yeah her a Jake are through and she finally has a chance to be happy... I wouldn´t wanna wait either... the Jake situation just dragged out anyway and he knew she didn´t feel as strongly for him as he did for her... I eff´n love Little Bell she is head over hills in love with Ewoord.. which i think makes things a bit more easier for B & E...see ya next week....

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

Well where do I begin...Rosalie is not being fair...she should be able to see how much happier Bella is... and being her best friend she should know that she loved Jake, but was never in love with him.. so she couldn´t sacrifice her happiness to marry him...Little Bell is the bomb diggaty!!!!! She runs the show... she may ask about Jake, but she wants Ewoord to be her Daddy... and having a son myself I understand that they don´t want to confuse her.... Did I mention I wanted to pimp slap Rosalie!!!! okay rant over.... wonderful chappie...you always make Monday worth waiting for!!!!! See ya next Week...Laterzzzzz!!!!!

 

KRAZI

XOXO

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

Freaking awsome....Gosh I love these two....thanks for leaving that opening for Bella to get pregnant for Edward....because we don't know for sure if he's completely sterile...I love reading between the lines....I really hope that Ewoord will join Lil Bell's first day of school...and Jake doesn't show up being a jackass....just saying...thanks for be the cure to the 'Monday Blues'....great chappie...see ya next week!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

that BIOTCH!!!!!!!! I HATE TANYA DENALI!!!!!!!!!!!! IRINA.... KATE...SASHA.....AND LAURANT, BUT THAT´S OKAY....I THINK ESMOM WILL HAVE A FEW CHOICE WORDS FOR THEM....PERSONALLY NOT TOO INTERESTED IN WHAT JAKEY POO´S DOIN AS LONG AS HE´S DOIN IT WITH SOMEONE ELSE, BESIDES THAT WAS FOUL HOW HE JUST BAILED ON LITTLE BELL...IT MEANS HE WAS ONLY THERE TO GET IN BELLA´S PANTIES...HE´S A FREAKIN DOUCHEBAG...I LOVE THAT LIL´BELL MENTIONED THE DADDY ISSUE TO EDWARD, SHE´S GONNA BE THE ONE TO SEAL THE DEAL FOR THOSE TWO...AND I´M WITH HER JAKES A POOPEY HEAD!!! GREAT UPDATE AS USUAL.....YOU MAKE MONDAYS SOOOOO MUCH BETTER!!! SEE YA NEXT WEEK

 

KRAZI

XOXO

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20

haha!!! a day with Lil Bell... I just love her... the kid believes in speaking her mind.... she is too cute... I´m glad Edward didn´t get so overwhelmed that he considers leaving them... I still hate Tanya... but nothing new there... poor Felix... but Edward will have to pay the ticket.!!!! Great Chapter!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

that was freaking awesome... can somebody please neuter Tanya... she is seriously driving me to drink... God... get over it already... can you give her a man so she can move on already... I think Lil Bell is the freaking best.. that kid is hilarious.. the things she says.. ´can she get naked too´ I nearly peed my pants... Why do I get the eerie feeling that it´s Jake at the front door... great chapter... can´t wait until Monday!!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

Whoaaaa!!! Jake´s dead...didn´t see that one coming..I would have bet money it was him at the door....That was kinda sad... I wanted him gone.. not necessarily dead, but such is life... I just can´t wait to find out what happened... I was really proud of Edward he was really good with lil Bell.. she is so freaking funny.... I understand that Bella is hurting and I´m glad that Edward didn´t take to heart what she said, and knows that she´s just lashing out, and he just happen to be there... we all know how she is, of course she´s gonna blame herself, but she can´t control everything... great chapter.. haha... we meet Charlie at the cliffie...lol..

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Well.... I wanted to throw eggs at her in the beginning, but that was just the illogicalness in me.... As a mother... logically she did what she had to... and I´m hoping that this sickness is not just grief related... what makes me feel optomistic is Edward´s little care package at the end... if he´s not giving up, neither am I...I found this chapter alot more emotional than the last... where I did feel sorry about what happened to Jacob... the pain of their separation and the hurt in Lil Bell´s heart touched me way more... but I´ve trusted you this long... I refuse to change that now... sorry about the Award, but this was and amazing chapter and you are one hell of a writer...   I´ll be doing shots of Stoli until next Monday!!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Ha...I´m trying to hold on but the angst is killing me.. i voted for Nessie and the kid for the Avant Garde Awards, cause let´s just face it. Nessie is the bomb... she is totally awesome and gives it to ya straight..lol..great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hold on a little longer... I hate the angst too! I'm pretty damn sure it's over, but then I'd need to know exactly what angst is. A lot more action than ruminating from here on, ok?? M

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27

Whooo Hoooo! I thought she was pregnant, but I didn´t want to jinx it.  What I was really afraid was that she was going to move to Forks.  I can´t wait until Little Bell gets to see Edward again, and Bella finds out the promise he made to her.  Great Chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxox

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

whoa... this just got so fricking hot!  I knew James was still a demented douche bag!  I´m glad Edward never gave up. This just proves that him and Bella are meant to be together!  God, you always leave wanting more!  Great chapter!  I´m going to miss you for a while!

 

krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

Whoa!!! Another cliffie!  Happy Holidays!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

Phew... glad that hurdle is over!  Now hopefully on to happy times with Bella, Little Bell, Edward and the peanut!  Great chapter!

 

Happy New Year!

 

~Krazi~

Summary:

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 337228
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.

Hey I had no problem with it...I would have if E & B would have switched..but it was funny as hell and the fact that he broke her vagina is cracking me up...I love this effing story...I´m sad to see it end, but looking forward to a long and eventful sequel....Thanks for a great read"!!!!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

OMG.....that was great....I´m so glad there is a sequel.....this chapter was really funny...i enjoyed all the dialogue very much...Poor little Michael fell asleep with his sheet music.....Off to read the sequel!!!!! Squeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Krazi

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 226164
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Start!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I loved it and hope that keep going.  You have to give the new baby a chance to flourish too! lol! Great chapter hon!

Krazi

xoxo

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1969]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 189844
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

whoooo!!!!!! Hoooooo!!!! I'm fist pumping the air!!! it's about time these two have a date.... Esme and Carlisle are so smart...I'm glad that Edward supported Bella with her talk with Esme... and I'm glad the little riff between Esme and Bella didn't turn into anything major....also glad to hear Victoria signed away her parental rights... she can come back and be a jerk, but she can't take Jack away...great chapter as always.. I can't til the Monday teaser!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

woo hooo.. glad that went well... I was really nervous about the meeting and them finding out about Jack... I wanted to slap Irina there for a sec, but in the end I forgave her.. I hope that Edward´s not mad about the book tour and he goes along for the ride... Great chapter.. and thanks again for spoiling us so much this week... I´ll try not to let it go to my head.. BTW I pimped out your story in my update... cause it´s da Bomb... see ya next Friday!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

{PS, thanks for the pimping! I'm glad you enjoy the story enough to want to share it with others!}

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Whoa... that was a bit heavy!  Not too sad to see Victoria go, but in her defense, she did try to help Bella in the end.  James was a sick and twisted individual, I´m so glad he´s going to be rotting in jail.  Jealousy really can eat away at people.  I´m really glad that Edward didn´t get to mad at Bella because she believed James´lies in the beginning.  Ít´s natural for her to freak out when she sees something that looks like official court documents.  I´m just glad to didn´t keep us in suspense too long.  Great chapter!  I´m going to really be sad to see this one go.  Merry Christmas!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Ahhhhh...... declarations of love...dry humping... and Jack, Bella, and Edward waking up in bed together... can it get anymore beautiful... this chapter was amazing... I love every single thing that transpired.... this is such a beautiful story... and the the subtle lemons are perfect for the story line... after all Jack is the real star hear...lol.... great chpater... see ya next Friday.. Have a great weekend!!!!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Whew..I´m glad and sad that, that´s over... It was a real tear jerker...Esme just broke my heart, this story is amazing and love waiting for updates to see how it will unfold...Thanks for a great read!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

haha!!! I just love the pixie... glad that Bella, Jack, and Edward could spend some family time together (hint hint)... can´t wait for more... although I know that Victoria is just waiting in the wings to reak havoc on every one... see ya next Friday!!!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

OK... FIRST THINGS FIRST I´M GLAD THAT EMMETT´S GIVING BELLA A CHANCE AND NOT BEING A JERK...I UNDERSTAND WHERE HE WAS COMING FROM, BUT AT THIS POINT JACK NEEDS A UNITED FRONT FOR HIM BELLA IS HIS MOM AND EDWARD IS HIS DAD....LOVING HOW EDWARD COMES TO THE RESCUE AND DEFENDS BELLA...THE FLAME IS GROWING BETWEEN THESE TOO... AND I´M LOVING HOW YOU ARE DOING IT SLOWLY AND SUBTLY....EDWARD KISSING THE PAVEMENT PRICELESS... BUT MORE SO THE REACTION FROM BELLA SEING HIM HURT....I´M LOVIN IT... LASTLY I KNEW SOMETHING WAS ON THE HORIZON...WHAT ON EARTH DOES VICTORIAS FATHER WANT...THIS PHONE CALL WILL NOT END WELL I CANT FEEL IT!!!! WELL I GUESS I´LL HAVE TO LIVE WITH THE TEASER TIL FRIDAY....GEE IS TODAY THURSDAY...LOL.... GREAT CHAPPIE....LATERZZZ

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Whew....I was really nervous about the meeting with Marcus....I'm glad she included Rose...it really could've backfired...I'm also glad that Edward didn't assume the worst and turn into an asshat again...but I'm still kinda leery about Marcus' true intentions...leave it to me to analyze the chappie like I'm CSI Ducain..haha...can't wait for Esme's "hell-to-the-no"reaction...or will she surprise me...hmmmm..guess I must wait for the next TGIF...you've made them worthwhile these days...great chappie b3b3!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

wow...that was absolutely perfect... I love how Jack is in on the plot to get his parents together.....this story totally rocks and I hope you win the award you deserve it... I will go and do my part and vote!!!! Whooo Hoooo and update Tuesday and Friday your gonna make me cry along with making my week!!!! Great Chapter!!!! Glad these two are opening up to each other...and I can´t say enough how glad I am that Victoria gave up her parental rights... she may be able to become a pain in the azzz, but she has no rights to Jack and I love that!!! See you next week!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

haha... I´m with Edward she has more friends just showing up than the Cullens... but I really like this Tanya Denali... it´s not often we give her a break and let be a friend to Bella... ´the morning after´ was sweet even with Bella´s self-enduced littl lime... lol.... I´m with you the story has such a beautiful plot and it´s good enough to keep us all interested.. I just love finding out what´s gonna happen next, the smutty lemons don´t matter.. so outtakes sound like a cool idea... I love Jack so much.. and agree with how he has decided to refer to Victoria.. he has some pretty deep rooted scars that were cause by her... I really think he wants his Mom and Dad to hook up... Great Gran sounds like a hoot.. will we be getting a little taste of her later on... I´m really nervous and excited about the meeting coming up with Marcus and Diane... I´m glad Tanya will be there too.... thanks for making this week better by giving us the extra chapter... I´ll try not to get spoiled... great chapter!!!!!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Whoa!!!!!!!!! Didn´t see that one coming...Yeah right... I knew that evil wench would be appearing soon enough... poor Jack.... Thanks for this little early Christmas present... does this mean we´re still on for Friday or has it been cancelled... lol... can´t help but be greedy... great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

That biotch.... I can´t wait till she gets what´s coming to her... and that douchebag James was in on it too... That´s right EsMom.. protect your young... I´m just glad that Marcus had nothing to do with her being their and is genuinely concercned about what´s best for Jack... great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Go Esme... I can´t believe she decked Victoria... I understand Edward´s point of view on James.. But I also understand Bella and Tahn´s... I´m glad Jack gets to spend some guy time with his dad... I´m really nervous about what the end of summer will mean... great chapter...

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! There are teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yes!!!!!! Best cliffie ever!!!! I knew would workout for those two. I want you to know I trusted you all along. And for the record, Victoria is a douchebag! great chapter!!!

BTW, Bella needs to be honest about the entire phone conversation now, because Edward´s question should have called all her fears!! Have a Happy Thanksgiving!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Excellent as always! Hmm... I´m still on the fence with Renee.  Yeah! Edward and Jack just arrived. I just love everything about this story! I voted on the Avant Garde Awards!  Good Luck!!!

 

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

That was soooooo good!  I love that they have finally brought it ALL together!  That was a sweet moment between them at the zoo, when Jack asked about changing his name.  I was so worried at FAO Swartz when Jack went missing; I thought Victoria had him.  I know you are in no finished with her, so surely she´s just lurking under some rock, waiting to cause trouble.  Great chapter; have a good weekend!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

OMG!!!!!!  I can´t believe this!  I knew that Edward wouldn´t do something like that.  James is such a douche bag!  I can´t wait until Edward gets a hold of him.  I hope he doesn´t hurt Bella!  She should have just waited until someone was around, taunting him without backup was not wise.  God I can´t wait for the update!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Awww... I´m going to miss this story! I thoroughly enjoyed taking this little journey with you and I´m looking forward to your future work! I couldn´t have asked for a better ending, and I just know the Epi will be great as well! Thanks for giving us something great to look forward to these past few months!  Great chapter and awesome story!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

*Sighs* Well all good things must come to an end! And this story was a definitely a good thing. I absolutely loved taking this journey with you and I´m proud to say I may have missed reviewing only one chapter. So, with a heavy heart I will not say, ´good chapter´, hit the rating button and review button for the last time. Can´t wait for the new story to begin! Thanks for sharing Parachute with us!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 42676
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2013
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: preface

that was quite a start... Edward is a meanie... but still sexy... can´t wait to see what Bella does..

krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

haha...this Edward is crazy, but I can´t find it in me to hate him... and he must love Bella in his sick and twisted way, because he didn´t take on anymore wives... I´ve never seen him cheat on her..and the poor thing is crazy about him too.. I understand she doesn´t want to be, but let´s face it we can´t say no to Mobward,, he owns us!! great chapter!!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

yes we can not resist mobward

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318635 Read Count: 79805
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~

Ok another cliffy....my heart can´t take it....we were almost there...that was about as bad as orgasm denial....I´ll just be over here pouting til the next chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten- Relevations

I'll admit I was kinda nervous there for a minute, but this is better than Christmas morning..Subward is moving in with Dommella... I can hardly wait... I think I'll pack myself a bag and go along for the ride....Don't I wish...Damn Fiction... anyways.... Excellent eff'n chapie babes!!! You frick'n Rock!!!! Trust me I'll be sitt'n here biting my nails til 10 o'clock SHARP!! Don't wanna miss a thing!!! Laterzzzz!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive

Gosh... this really had me on edge...I can't tell how much I am enjoying this story...so different from the others... I had to hold my breath there for a minute.. when I thought he was going to take her up on her offer...Excellent chapter...can't wait for move in day...BTW gotta love Emmett... he's such a big teddy bear... laterzzzz!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse

That  was so well worth the wait... I really feel sorry for him his punishment was harsh... I really think that on the inside that Bella really appreciated his defending her, but of course she couldn´t let him know that, thus effectively rendering her a weak domme...I hope..... but i wanted to kick James´ass myself.... But this Bella is a kick ass Domme... when I grow up I wouldn´t mind being just like her!!!! lol.... You make the wait well worth it.... Thanks for a great chapter....

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake

Haha!  This was well worth the wait.  When I read your author´s note, I went no further, because frankly, it  would have been like eating the spiciest hotwings with no water.  Such a tease!  I decided I would wait patiently for you to return.  I know I will not be disappointed!  Great outtake!  Missed you BB!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List

Ha! You were right, well worth the wait!  James is a douche bag, can somebody please run over him with their car!  Lol!  That ending had me pissing myself!  Great chapter!!

 

krazi

xoxo

Glad your back!!!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off

Ha! That was awesome!  I just about peed my pants at the exchange between him and Jake!  Why do I get the feeling at the end of there conversation that Jake my not actually be gay... maybe bi-sexual.  Who knows but it was still funny.  And has Jake ever been her sub or are they friends?  

I thought for sure she was going to deck him, when he kissed her!  I was scared for his safety.  Mistress Marie is one tough cookie.  I can´t wait to find out more of her background.  I think she likes him more than she´s letting on.  There´s no way that she would be taking all of this fuckery from someone else.  I´m also curious like Edward about her history with James.

That was priceless that he would not only cheat on dinner, but also get her favorite meal!  Only Edward!  His punishment was totally awesome!  Way to keep him wanting!  Mistress Marie is my freaking hero!  Can´t wait for more! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey Krazi!!

You are so spot on about Jake. At first I had planned to make him like super gay, but when I wrote him, he sort of created himself. Also, your perception of Bella is so fucking right. Of course she's attracted to Edward...the guy is gorgeous and she is human. The only difference is that she has control over her feelings and doesn't wear them on her sleeve, but I guarantee you that Edward pulls it out of her by the time this story is done.

The James situation...well, I can tell all my secrets...how am I expected to get you to come back?

Much love to you, doll!!!

xxx

Korry

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions

Okay, that was so like... OMG!  This is one krazy adventure and I´m with you all the way!  First with Carlisle, I was so nervous he was going to see Edward´s chastity belt, that would have been too funny!  Lol!  I was so glad to get some type of insight into who Bella is, those little tidbits were really great in helping me understand her more.  I´m really liking this Angela, and I think her and Edward are going to become good friends.  I´m also crossing my fingers that Bella will be joining Edward at his parents for Christmas dinner.  A girl can dream can´t she!  Lol!  Hmm... I wonder what Edward thinks of the fact that Bella wanted him too....  And the old dude requesting Edward to join them was freaking priceless!  You could almost see the look on Edward´s face just reading the end.  Lol!  Great chapter!  Now tease me BB!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette

You love toying with our emotions. don't you! I love this freaking story so much! I can't wait to see if she pleasures or punishes him. I just love Angela, she is a riot! I'm enjoying the slow look your giving us into Bella's life. I'm interested to see how Christmas goes and who celebrates with who! Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

Oh. My. God!  How could you leave me to burn like this! You evil, evil woman! Lol!  That was fire bb!  I have no words, except... OH Shit! What has he done now? But something tells me that Mistress is going to surprise us all! Great chapter... thanks for the update!

 

Krazi

xoxo

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey, hun! I know I am so sorry. I promise to update soon for ya so I can quench that fire. Everything is all good and like you said, Mistress is going to surprise everyone...even Edward, prhaps. Thanks fot reading, hun.

 

Korry

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

Yeah, I wanted to smack Rose in the face, she was being a real bitch!  If she was interested in getting into the lifestyle I could understand a bit more, but just to find out if it was one of her subjects... that was so not cool!

I don´t know if you originally planned it that way, but I love how you made the prologue a dream sequence and not reality.  I love that Bella was in bed with him while he was dreaming of her.

I so can´t wait to see where she´s taking him! Hopefully, there´s a teaser somewhere on the horizon!! hint hint! Lol! Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

KRAZI!!

Hey Hun!!! I really, really tried making Rose likeable, but I am a bit biased...just a tad. So, I can't say I fought to hard for her. As for the prologue, yes, I have been planning to make it a dream sequence, I just didn't know where it would ever fit in.

I don't have a teaser for the next chapter, but I do have a peek into the xmas future. You ready? LOL

“Alice, I swear, you don’t need to wait on me. You’re the boy’s nanny, not the fucking maid,” I groaned exasperated.

The little pixie looked up at like I a wounded bird, and I instantly regretted my statement. But fuck, ever since I arrived, she been asking to get me this and get me that, and I wasn’t used to being waited on.

It was driving me up the fucking wall.

“I’m sorry, Mr. Cullen,” Alice said quickly.

She adverted her eyes from mine, bowing her head in a submissive manner, and I panicked. In that simple gesture, she made me feel like the Dominant, and it was the oddest fucking feeling.

 I rushed to correct it.

“Hey, none of that Mr. Cullen bullshit, okay? Call me Edward.”

She nodded as she placed my soda in front of me. The silence grew between us, and I felt like such a fucking dick. All Alice was trying to do was make me feel comfortable and I snapped at her. It wasn’t her fault that I was mentally fucked up and couldn’t handle the idea of somebody submitting to me. My thought process was so twisted anymore, and I knew that shit was going to get worse. How the hell was I expected to act around my parents? How long did I expect to keep my newly acquired lifestyle a secret?

Was I fucking capable of that?

Much love xxxoooxxx

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

Okay, so if my memory serves me correct, you sent me a teaser about Christmas dinner and him being snippy with Alice.  Okay, so you tease me then leave it out of the chapter.  Very clever my dear!  Lol!  I am so unhappy with Victoria´s presence right now!  Argggggh!!! Can´t poor subward catch a break?  Damn, poor boy is catching hell on all sides.  I just hope that Bella let´s him explain.  I´ll being over in the corner, gnawing on my fingernails until the next update!! Lol! Amazing chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey, Krazi!!

thanks for reading and revieing and your outstanding support. Sorry to tease you like that, but I wanted to give you something. Christmas is right around the corner and depending on how the next chapter goes, we'll see if our fave Domne makes a unexpected appearance. much love. Xoxo 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

Wow.... that was some heavy shit, Mama!  I kind of see all sides, but I´m really disappointed in Angela, because when no one was there, Bella was.  She put her life on hold to take care of her sister, so she just has her best interest at heart.  Also, it really sucked how Ang threw Edward under the bust at the end.  I just hope that Bella dosen´t clam up and go back to giving Edward the cold shoulder.  They´ve made some good strides and I would hate for this to be a major or minor setback for them.  Great as always hon!  See ya next time!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Oh, Krazi!!

I don't know what to say to this awesome review, mama ;) You rock my socks off!! After reading this and knowing what I just updated, I know that you'll be very happy my dear :)))

Thanks for reading, per usual, and I'll talk to you soon!!

 

*mwah*

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Awww... shucks, look my name is in the AN! *wipes a single tear*  Love you too bb!  Thanks for the mention!

 

I enjoyed hanging out with Carlisle and spending a few quite minutes with Bella before the kraziness that is Christmas at the Cullen´s commences.  I hope Angie surprises Bella and decides to show up!

Okay, I laughed my a$$ off at the description of Esme´s sweater... hee-lar-i-ous!  And Edward putting his foot in his mouth was cute as usual.  I am so looking forward to what the twins and the Drunk Whitlocks have in store for Christmas dinner, and I´m curious to know will Bella end up handing Rose her a$$ for all her bitchiness?  Don´t keep me in suspense too long!

Glad my favorite sub´s broken peen is on the mend!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey, Krazi!!

You're welcome! You know I loves you!!! 

I am in the midst of writing the Christmas chapter now and all I can say about it is that...everything that Edward expects to go wrong does. Kind of like that awkward moment when Edward brings Bella home in Twilight, and the look of total embarrassment on his face...yeah, a lot like that. What sounded like a awesome idea will be the worse idea yet. Also, if you think the sweater is funny...you should see how Nana Cullen and Mama Esme treat eachother...Monster-in-law, indeed.

Thanks for always sticking with me on this story..truly. 

Love ya lots!!

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

Perfect as usual, and it was well worth the wait, believe me!  I can´t wait to see if Rose causes any trouble and if Bella finally kills Nana Cullen, she´s reall an old hag! Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 40450
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth

I will never see Disneyland the same... lol.... great chapter... thanks for the update.. looks like Christmas came early!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

yeah!!! I´m bouncing up and down like a fool... Bella is letting down her gaurd!!! woo hooolll something more!! i like the sound of that,,,, great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

That was pretry hot... I knew when he told Emmett to put on some music the hot piano sex would make an appearance... the new contract was super sweet and made me go awwwww.. all that was missing was circle yes or no...lol... Em was a riot as usual.. and Rose in heels all the time... is there really any other way for Miss Hale to travel.... I mean really...lol... great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

Hahaha!!! you have officially killed me with the fact that Charlie is a retired porn star and he and Renee live on a nudist colony... that was sooooo funny.... I can now stop holding my breathe the I love you´s have been said..... yippieeeeee!!!! I can´t wait to the meet the Swans... this should be extremely interesting... great chapter!!!!

Krazi

xoxo

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: OT Bella's Interview

this was awesome... and very entertaining... lol... It was nice to get a real take on Bella´s feelings... I really like this Bella alot... Great interview... hope to see more, maybe with both of them!!!

krazi

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Author's Response:

thanks so much for all the sweet reviews!!! sorry that i made you wait so long for updates :)

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN´T BELIEVE YOU JUST DID THAT..... THANKS FOR NOT FORGETTING TO UPDATE FOR US TOOO... YEAH, DIDN´T SEE THAT CLIFFIE COMING... IT WAS A LOW BLOW I TELL YA... BUT NEVER THE LESS IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER... LOVE LITTLE RILEY... AND THE CULLENS WERE AMAZING AS USUAL... BUT HOW LONG WILL YOU MAKE US SUFFER....HOPEFLLY NOT TOO LONG... SEE YA SOOO!!!*WINKS*

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Whoa shouty caps and !!!!!!'s... sorry, I have a plan, promise... and Yay for me for remembering!!! I put TWCS nect to my FFn link so that I can't forget LOL

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 16 Sea Monkey

ok.. I get it... and I trust you... so i´ll be patient.. I promise... a ¨sea monkey¨.. really Edward... lol... as always.. Emmett cracks me up!!! Great Chapter

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading <3

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Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

Lol!  This was a great chapter!  Esme and Carlisle finding out about Charlie and Bella was priceless!  Great chapter!

 

FYI!  I voted for Play With Me for the Avant Garde awards; good luck!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4201]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1108627
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Haha!  Bella is such a little trooper!  I was tickled pink at her reaction to the food he gave her.  I´m with Bella he was being somewhat of a bastard, but one sexy hot bastard that had her soaking her panties.  I must say that I´m thankful he decided to reprimand her on the spot instead of denying her a release later.  That would have really defeated the purpose of the ornament he added.  Extremely naughty of him to keep rubbing between her legs in the hot tub.  I have no idea who tripped the alarm, but I do know it made me mad, and I really hope it doesn´t spoil the nights fun.  Exellent as always BB!  Great chapter!   Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a very Happy New Year!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

hi Krazi ... he was being a Bastard, but that's his job... that's why she is with him for his controlling, dominate, sexpertize...lol .... thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It was eff´n awsome...you´ve got me hooked. i can´t wait to find out more about her past and Domwards...but trust me I´m in no hurry...please take your time...i promise  I´ll be here!! :)

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it and it can only go slow, becasue that's the way I tell a story...lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I´VE NOTICED THESE TWO HAVE HAD UNPROTECTED SEX TWICE...WILL THERE BE FUTURE BABIES, NURSING AND PLAYROOM SCHEDULING? IT COULD HAPPEN!!! I WOULD LOVE IT.. I´VE READ OTHER BDSM FICS WITH OTHER PPL HAVING TO WORK AROUND CHILDREN BUT NOT B & E...I HOPE I´M NOT BEING TO FORWARD, BECAUSE I AM DEFININTELY HOOKED TO THE STORY....SETH COULD HAVE PUPPIES AND I BE JUST AS HAPPY!!! LOL... NOTHING CAN MAKE ME STOP READING... WELL OK A TANYA EDWARD HOOKUP WOULD MAKE ME BARF!!!! THANKS FOR A GREAT READ AS ALWAYS!!!!! SEE YOU NEXT WEEK!!!

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Twice? Are you counting?...lol ....babies?....hmmm, well that discussion will come later...That's all I can say. Tanya and Edward ...ummm...HELL NO!!! lol...lol Don't worry you can ask me anything, I'll answer what I can the rest you'll just have to wait for...lol...Thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter as usual.. you never let me down.... Bella beating up Emmett was hilarious.... see you next week

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks...glad you like it...BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Okay....i am like wanting to bitch slap Caius and Irina...i don´t see were she did anything wrong..and to me she was very respectful...Can´t wait til Domward gives them all a piece of his beautiful and sexy mind.!!!! See ya Monday!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

okay... where do I begin... I´m glad that not everyone agreed with those two douche bags Irena and Caius... I´m really loving Jane and Aro in this story.. Can´t wait to see what Edward´s suprprise is for Bella...I´m writing a story of my own and I have rec´d Diamond in the Rough to all my readers... this is really a great story... see you next week.. oh and by the way if you wanna update early... I ain´t mad at cha.... I´m just saying....lol....

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rec...i find that since I started writing I don't have as much time to read, but maybe I will get a chance to check out your story ...Thanks again ...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You never disappoint me... loved it.. especailly how Bella goes to subspace in TGI FRidays but is fiesty and rebelious in the tattoo parlor... I completlely understand the rules he´s implemented for her mentorship with Jane, because he wants her to feel free to talk to him and not hold it all inside.. so she has that avenue to talk to Jane, but can write about it, thus sharing it with Edward indirectly... ok... enough said... I have alot of free time..... can´t you tell!!!:P See ya Thur....

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks...my husband thinks that I have a lot of free time too,,, with all my writing I do. But i figure,,,the wash will still need folding tomorrow...lol ...thanks for the comment and I glad you liked the chapter...lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter... and not too much drama.. they needed a break.. Glad that Edward is falling more and more in love with Bella... I´m intrigued with the mystery of the missing collar...See ya Monday...Have a great weekend!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

They did need a break, but the night is not over yet...  :)

Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8


I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”

He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”

“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”

Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”

Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”

I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”

I nodded.

“And it’s working.”

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

A-FREAKING-MAZING....WHOA THIS CHAPPIE REALLY BLEW ME AWAY..THE SAD PART ABOUT IT SOME SICK BASTARD HAS REALLY DONE THESE THINGS TO ANOTHER HUMAN BEING...I HAVE NOTHING BUT THE UTMOST RESPECT AND LOVE FOR DOMWARD!!!! IT WAS REALLY HARD TO READ BECAUSE OF THE CRUELTY AND VILE THINGS THAT HAPPENED, BUT IT WAS WELL WRITTEN AND ÌT BROUGHT ABOUT EDWARD´S DECLARATION OF LOVE.....WHOOO HOOOO...GLAD SHE TOOK LIGHT THE THINGS THOSE JACKASSES FROM THE CLUB ARE PUTTING ONLINE...YOU MAKE MONDAY´S ROCK.....LATERZZZZ!!!!!!

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Wow...Thanks alot..and Bella saw the people on the blog for what they are...jealous..lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

okay..first let me say: ¨love it... love it.... and love it some more....¨ That was angsty, because after Seth´s unusual barking the night before, I thought that someone had lured Bella off to hurt her...Glad she was alright...and glad Edward got to share in that experience....the morning kitchen spanking was ¨hot¨...looks like Bella really needs a workout in the playroom to relieve some serious tension...

 

i guess i have a question for Edward...Can we delve a bit into his past relationships? Maybe that will help clear up a bit of the ¨Club Talk Nonesense¨why are they so against seeing him happy...have there been past altercations that we don´t know of..and were they the cause of his resigning to be content single'? Just asking!!!

Great Chappie Babes!!!! can´t wait for the ¨Usual¨... see ya then!!!!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Bella can't wait for the usual too, I hope she gets it...

I added your question to the list we'll see what Edwards says about his past ...playmates...Thanks for reading, and the comments. I have a teaser for you..lml

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

awww.. I'M SO SAD FOR HER... THOUGH I DO UNDERSTAND BOTH HIS AND HER POINT OF VIEW..AND I KNOW IT WILL DEFEAT THE PURPOSE IF HE GOES SOFT ON HER...IT'S JUST I REALLY FELT HER PAIN WITH THE NAME ON HER FOOT...I WOULDN'T WANNA WALK ALL OVER HIM..BUT THIS WAY SHE WILL FEEL SHE IS DOING IT INTENTIONALLY....I KNOW THE PUNISHMENT WILL ONLY SERVE TO HELP STRENGTHEN THEIR RELATIONSHIP..MAKING THEM GROW STRONGER...IT STILL SUCKS...TRUST ME AS A PARENT I KNOW... SOMETIMES IT DOES HURT ME MORE...BUT AS ALWAYS YOU SERVE TO BRIGHTEN MY MONDAY  BLUES WITH THESE AWSOME UPDATES...GREAT CHAPPIE HON!!!! SEE YA LATA IN THE WEEK...

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love and Edward will be telling his side on Thursday..lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I didn't change my mind... I always new that it would be hard on him and he would be hurting just as much as she is.... I was a little teary when she broke down confessing that she felt like he left her...that was hearbreaking... BTW Who is Mason? Is he still sick or did something happen to him? I don't remember him being mentioned before in the story...okay see you Monday... Have a great weekend!!!!

P.S. Going to hell over kissing Jake.... Hilarious!!!!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

mason was mentioned in passing and you will learn who he is soon, BTW you were the only one to mention the  kiss with Jake ...:)Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.” e :) ...

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Okay... first let me say it was an awesome pleasure and priviledge reading as usual...you make Mondays a helluva lot better.... now I thoroughly enjoyed lunch with Jane especially the way she´s able to keep up the constant third person... i thought it was very beneficial, because it gave Bella much to think about by way of general worth in the relationship.....Glad you cleared up who Mason was... that was sad.. Also Jane is an execellent mentor and example for Bella... she was right about confessing a mishap as soon as it happens, because it causes you to be more aware and less likely to do the same thing again.... Now for that Sexy Domward... yes I believe that you will get a bit of negative feedback on what he did, but i feel he was justified by not letting her put his spunk in her mouth... the punishment was that she could have it until her nutrition improved and that´s not possible for her to achieve in one day... if he doesn´t follow through with punishments... he´ll be a weak dom and that is not what Bella wants nor what she needs... I´m glad she took it like a champ and is starting to realize that he needs to be needed just like she needs him... it brings him pleasure and happiness seeing to her needs.. okay enuff of my yacking... I guess one could say I have alot of free time on my hands.... but I just like to show that I´m paying attention.. it´s the least I can do after you take time out of your life to give me this great story....:) See you Thursday!!! great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Gee Krazi...you get it exactly ...Thanks for the comments ...lml

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was a really refreshing... I´m glad that his intention was for her to have a stress and nightmare free day... It was good to see the light banter and carefree moments between them... I really feel like he wants her to move in, but that´s just me rambling of course I wouldn´t dare dream of rushing this magnificent story... that was funny when he told her not to cum.... she was so almost there... i´m with Edward I feel all these strange accurances are leading to something not so good...the meaning behind her tattoo was very touching and God I just think everyone has a name for their vaginas when they are little, it´s like the parents think the actual word vagina is taboo or something..and usually the word is ridiculously silly....Great chapter hon...always a pleasure...Til next time

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

They needed a regular day...I personally taught my children real names ..vagina and penis my mother was agast. She said to me one time "Your kids don't know what a iron is, but they sure know what a vagina is" ...lol (too funny) ....When I was little we called our vagina's butterfly's that's where I got it from...Enjoy the rest of your weekend, OT should be up tomorrow (Sun ) late morning .....Thanks for reading, I have ateaser for you...lml

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was awesome.... I don´t care what anyone says, I love the relationship these two have...and I know that some aren´t going to agree with what he did to her when they woke up, but it was clear that he didn´t want to make her suffer unnecessarily, but she just wanted to please him and feel wanted.... though you will find the nay sayers that won´t agree, after all    she´s been through to have someone like Edward really love her and want to be with her, willing to put her needs before his own.. it´s alot for her to take in and at the time she needed to be with him and if sacrificing her pleasure for his, well I agree with her, because her punishment is affecting both of them... I really feel sorry for Sally too.... but I´ve gotta give it to Edward he´s a really good Dom, because he could´ve made the usual harder on her to reiterate her punishment, but he designed playtime in a way that she was able to enjoy it and there was no use beating a dead horse...they´ve got to ride out the punishment, but it doesn´t have always to be the big pink elephant in the room either... hey I´m giving a couple of fist pumps for Domward... he´s fuckawsome!!!! lol... Great Chapter hon!!! but you never give less than the best... You make Mondays and Thursdays my fav!!!! See ya Thursday!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks Krazi, i actually thought more people would be upset over the hand signals thinking that he was treating her like a dog. But the hand signals are basic and come in handy in all kinds of situations which will be seen in later chapters. and Edward was going easy on her becasue he loves her but also becaue she is new  -- give them a year and I doubt he will be as ...understanding ..lol ...enjoy the rest of the week ..lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Hey I have complete faith in Domward.. he is wise and all knowing and if nothing fair...poor guy is suffering from her punishment as well... damn permanant ink...I think he´s just as excited as she is for this punishment to be over... the explanation of the wax play made it all the more intriguing... I can´t wait until Leah gives birth maybe her negative attitude will pass with the placenta... one can only dream... I´m gonna blame her negative attitude about things on the hormones... I honestly think that Edward has proven that what he and Bella have is more that kinky sex... so she should lay off and trust Bella´s judgement and enjoy seeing her happy after all she´s been through with James...I don´t know about Bella, but having to ask permission to go to the bathroom would keep me in the right frame of mind.... It´s not a bad idea... it will definitely keep her head in sub space.... and it´s not an extremely challenging task.. she´s doing really well with the hand signals.. and it allows them to subtly play in front of vanillas...without detection... Ok... my review is gonna be as long as the chapter in a minute... lol... great chapter Babe!!! Have and awesome weekend... see you Monday!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

leah is a little bitchy, I'm sure she will tell Bella what her problem is eventually . No it is not a hard task, but it is humbling and well you'll see ...have fun Krazi ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Gosh you make Mondays the freaking best... lol.... loved it... I don´t think she got to a ´red´moment, but he was ignoring her on purpose.. I love how he can go from being Master to Edward in the blink of an eye... effectively making him all that she needs.. he truly does take care of her an put her needs to the forfront of his mind... this gives a whole new outlook on the d/s relationship,      it´s just not a bunch of kinky sex.. they actually have to put more thought and effort into their relationship than vanillas do... I´ve got a newfound respect for this community!!! great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

See Ya Thursday!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ah...our Eddie likes to watch her squirm...lol...but he had under control...and your right Krazi there has not been a red moment yet... the D/s relationship consist of a very strong emotional bond, to the point where they (both sides) can almost antisapate each other's needs...it's very dramatic and at times draining...but it's not all about kinky sex. Just as a marriage isn't all about sex. The relationship of mutual love, respect and admiration  for each other is the center point and the sex is an added bonus. That's why Edward went from bimbo -to-bimbo ..lol...he didn't have the fundamentals with them and even when he was with Tanya or Irena there was something missing and he knew it....ok, enough I could go --on and on ...lol ...have a great week sweety,,,see ya thursday...louise