Penname: nilo24 [Contact] Real name: niloafr
Member Since: 10 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Before i saw Twilight , my life was boring and i didnt have any clue about becuase i am more to myself and not outsider so i spend a lot of time with my usual chours ,...that is boring , when i saw movie , i coudnt stop thinking about it so i search and find books , i read the 4 books . english is my second language it take time but i like the main charector and the only friend in whole world is book becuase its the only one who doesnt talk back at you and hurt you so , i want to read more so becuase twilight open me more i search and find Fanfiction and read all kind of Edward , desprate one , dark side one , funny one , drunk edward, i like it people have wild imagination , now after 2 years i decide to write what is in my head . its hard for me to write it becuase of my english but i will do it . it give me achievemant.


 


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1338224
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

its a little weird you save three chapter of 74 that all chapter is same content so i think you have to delete the simaler chapeters

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3574]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1465711
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

Memory Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 8977
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Hi . i read your stories it was happy ending i felt for bella who have storke and all this hospital visits its very tought time and she compare i o her life what she did wrong that she deserve this . emm you are good in writing this you could put this story in fanfiction dot com becuase a lot people will review it its very good and short . i love it thank u fo writing i .

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 158312 Read Count: 134711
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

hi , Thanx for writting i am eager to find out what you plan with this story how three wife and one male will be ,..emmm i cant imagine this kind of life are all about sex i think it is . its hard to live like that and you nee tention in this kind of life

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: Dark Edward/Cullens
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 74237
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 May 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

I'm new to your story and love it. I added it to my favorites a while ago, but just started reading it. I could not stop. Thank you for a wonderful story and I look forward to future updates

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

Another powerful chapter! Poor Bella! But so glad the truth is finally out

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

That was wonderful! You're writing is beautiful, as always

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball

this chapter blew me away. it was even better than i imagined it would be. can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

i think u have 4000 review in fanfiction in here, not much peoplecaming but they will come becuase fanfiction delete some stories and people come here

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

i dont get it . in authour note you mentioned that you will write chapter 18 but this is chapter 14 i search your story in google i find out the only place you write is in this website so why you are saying you have more than 4000 review and you update until chapter 18 emmm i really confused im egaer to ur update

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

hi .

 

wow thank u for up dating so soon , no mistake really it was very nice. okay i recomand for slow burns you read this chapter its so good

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5390119/26/The_University_of_Edward_Masen

and also if you more emmm master of universe you could search in twilighted.com without sensor and fanfiction with sensor you will love their slow burns



Author's Response:

thank you very much for the recomendation, i will look into it thank you :) xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it



Author's Response:

hehe im glad you liked it :) and im ecstatic that you love the story. thank you so much xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

hi....thank you for up dating .hope your new classes are good . i love the way you described the i love ou in the begining of this chapter the way bella hand was writing in edward chest it was so kind and romantic . i really liked . emmm i really love to know more about alice and emmet feeling toward to thir rose and jasper are they also have monster within themselves that alice and emmet recognized too

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 83525
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

interesting plot line , bella become doll for edward and he doesnt feel herself yet but he doesnt like the way bella act on him , im sure he is feeling grows , keep up dark edward up i like him

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10252
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow, i read your whole story today wow, it was really good a little bit of mistake and i wish you choice different for children but i am happy for bella , it was very nice . thank you for writting this story .

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 122206
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter, hell, . It's great, and i love it.

WOW! Cannot wait for next chapter. This has rapidly become the highlight of my week. Thankyou!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hi, wow its a little funny that all cullon kids are in all her classes and they all want to be talk to her and feel her safe emmm interesting. i eager to know what will happens

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love your story! It's one of the best that I've ever read. One thing I really enjoy is your unique plot, it makes your story that much more addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

emmm,weird she will fight and screams so bad wow, how you want this story goes i dont know im still in this chapter 4 i have to read a lot to see what will comes next.but thanks for taking your time to write . i love it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i just started this story and its really really good. Your writing is amazing... It's like you are in Bella's head but also the reader is aware of what she is oblivious...


Somebody told me about this story and that I should read it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i wish more of these good people we creat it in fanfiction sotries was real in real world we living . emmm its so hard and touchy it had hurt,comfort and maybe love in ur story

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just read the  chapter 7 and you've already gotten me hooked.I'm just curious as to have very dark things are going to get. I see that I have a lot of chapters to get through

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow, so she is writting godto know but im thinking when she starts talking it wil be ard to talk after 2 years

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so she confess like that emmm i really love it if u put more prietly confess from bella to charli or edwar alone emmm but itsnot m story to tell

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what can i say a little hurt but good chapter over all

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor bella you are a little fast in these chapter 10 and 11 and love and confession all three guys are feeling about rape emmm



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reivews:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thank you for up dating . i was starting to read a;; 22 chapter yesterday night when i find out you up date new chapter here,

 

last three small 2 line sentence you have mis-spell : you wrote wood instead of would . just want to let u know

he wood look over at me and smile before he looked down at his plate



Author's Response:

Thanks foir reading and pointing out my mispelling:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 69646
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely chapter :)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

its a lot of sugar if edard want test all the cakes and dsirt in bella bakery

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

poor TANYA, did you check my email or read my E-mail . i change her charecter differently from others .

poor Emeth with all caked he have to eat every day he will get sick

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh Emmett , i wish my brother more like , he is funny in this chapter . good job , you know i hate when people dont put review when they read each chapter , they are too lazy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

how he could be reach what he study that he is 24 and he is working in a company ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh in fiction everything is possible isn't it !

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett is cute  , i hope too much sugar, dont bother his health

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

edward sweet in here but he is too shy or ,....that doesnt say his feeling toward bella. peter use bella to her advantures

you know its better not to tell anybody what you have and what you dont have so people dont get used you . in bad way

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow coool

Summary:

stories/12382/images/The_Slave_banner.jpg

After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 169985
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

Thank you for writting this story and time , im so suprize how did you find french story or translat it , i mean how and who wrote the french story its just story i have in my mind it seems all the people in ship survived



Author's Response:

I'm the author of this story, meaning that I both write it in French and in English. I should finish to write the French version around Christmas. My chapters in French are longer and I split them for my English version so there will be more of them.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 42676
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2013
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

i really love your story , why edward telling lie at the beginning , when he truley wants her to have child with him with the act he did in dr office. thank you for writting please up date soon oh also , in this sentence you have tiny mistake , and im surize how easy she could live edward mantion so easy and not anybody following her and how she got euro moneys ,emmmm, over all it nice story

“My father and uncles are incouraging me to marry someone. Someone who has had my kids  already.” He said grazing my face.

encouraging



Author's Response:

yea, thnx. and i really was going to expain all of that in the next chapter you kno her tell jake the how she got out easily and everything, because remember she was there for nine months, it will all make sense in the next chapter.

so yeah and sorry about that little mistake i was trying to hurry and post it.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: story teller

What is love? baby dont hurt me, dont hurt me ,  No more ,...


well , can you believe if i say that from last up date until today i check this site everyday to see this chapter , yep , i love your story , you are very good writer and you are very good in charecters , Please dont listen to Others about why this story is Dark or why edward is like this and they want Softer Edward , you see many writers in Fanfiction or this story dont listen to others they have their oponion and they try to make whats they want in thier story and Reader have to be thank full to read the story , i love the way your story goes , so please dont give up , keepp up what your ideas of story , Okay Well, i dont get why edward wants babys so much , :D i hope the baby is girl Not boy . Girls are sweet and more to mommy until the boys but im sure if baby be girl ,edward try to make boy for next year. I like Mob eward .
Thank you for updating and writting this story , i know its really hard to write and Edit and do,....all the stuff but i know the reviews makes you happy i will review for all the chapters

Author's Response:

AAAwwwww thank you well i guess we know what the baby is. because you just made my day with that review

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

hi dear , wow i am so happy that you up date your story , well, well i see james is good guy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: a life

tough chapter, really all the chapter i read are all about helpless bella , i dont know where you want to go with this story ,,but good luck , good chapter

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

long time no up date, please up date story if you put time between your chapters we will forget , i really want to know what you have i your mind about this story , i dont know where this story will go dear. thanx , edward back , i dont know but i like dark edward

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well, good chapter as always i am wondering how many children in totall bella have why bella stop her body to be pregnant again , thanx for writting

Summary:

Crimson Love banner

 

Sometimes love is darker. More crimson.

For the 'Beyond The Pale' Contest located at: http:// www. fanfiction. net/u/2431148/BeyondThePale. Image used: #17. (Voting open NOW!)

WARNING: Contains graphic violence, sex, and language. There are disturbing images and themes in this story.

(Banner by: Me, Myself, and I.)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7242 Read Count: 621
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Crimson Love: One-Shot

Wow, this one shot story was great. i went to the site in your profile and vote for this story . in this story you put everything in it.  love , hate, hurt, obsesseness,....i really like it . you have to change name of the story to obsessive of Edward as all readers here in this site and fanfiction are obsessed . i like the lemon part also you wrote very highly and i hope when that part come to my story i could wrote it i dont how to write but im sure is hardest part to write becuase its,.... well my story is called If only . if u have time i be happy if you read it

Carnival by pdd912 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella meets Vampire Edward at an amusement park in New Orleans.  Mind control and Smut ensues.  Dark Edward.  Defiled Bella.  Consent is questionable.  Might be nonexistent.  AU, very OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1336 Read Count: 594
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 30 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this chapter, it has everything . it seems you want to write more becuase he have unfinished buisness with her. good chapter , thanx for writting this chapter

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 32198
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Yes...

you put so much emotion in this story , you are very good in writting and efeacting all our hearts for sure . thank you for putting time and writting this story



Author's Response:

awwwww thank you soooo much.xoxoxoxo I really really try and i get sooo happy when people love it thank you....my sister is working on the next chapter right now xoxooxoxox

Summary:

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A gentleman.

A gentleman is a man of noble birth whose conduct conforms to a high standard of propriety. His behavior is beyond reproach. Usually Edward Cullen is the perfect definition of a gentleman… that is unless the new chamber maid, Isabella Swan, is nearby.

 Banner by the wonderfully talented RachelxMichelle


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5190 Read Count: 2525
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 23 Jul 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, you put everything a readers wants in one chapter good job dear

Summary:

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Very mature subjects matter - AU- Canon pairing – Edward kidnaps Bella to use as a toy. The Cullen's attitudes different from canon – lots of lemony goodness, or badness depending upon your mindset. Some bondage, ok lots of bondage...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43257 Read Count: 32520
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed half-star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow, you are not slow writer you jump to hard stuff emmm

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

if you see that you dont have more reviews becuase this site is not working with internet explorer 9 , as you many people using ie 9 and they put messages for stories and ,..but all the messages are blank , the owner of site said its been 1 years this happens to reviewing of stories so she suggest to use google chrome for send reviews to other , so i downloaded this apps espically for this site . i know you might be heart broken if you see you dont have more reviews is this site faults and ie9 versions,...

 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow, this expensive lingerie needs a great body i think most actors and model are wearing this i love la santa and cheaper lingerie

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 256437
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 28 May 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i love this story , i love dark side of edward and you kind of write it like beauty and beast kind of way , good job dearest and i know how much time you spend on writting this story. thank you for make our boring life interesting by reading this story .

Crossing the Lines by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1353] New!
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Desperate times call for desperate measures. Bella is starving for a better life for her and her son, and taking her clothes off in front of a stranger is just the first of many lines she'll cross.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106010 Read Count: 218625
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 05 Dec 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

wow, i could just i love this chapter , you described every thing well, you are very good writer and very good story teller. i am sorry about your daughter condition , i am psychologist and i work with authism children , they need love , they kindness , they will notice it if you be kind with them and it is so cute when they hug you from your back , i alwyas tell my client espically to the parents , that their child dont understand work , money and car and house , they only need loves , only loves and most parents dont care unfortunatly and they get loved by us , by babysiter , by their teachers,.. i hope you and your child have this kind bonding and dont worry becuase she is young she will get learn faster and change faster in better stage of her life .

 

thank you for your lovely story and for your lovely time

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

it is amazing story with a great story line , i loved everything about this story about how you make my heart goes warm with bella and mr.mason and their situation your enligsh is much better than i am thank you , thank you for making your time to put this story for us

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

can i say , that i miss you , its been very long time for you to update this story and for me every day i coming to check your story to see new chapter,  love your chapter as always, Edward has secret and bella is very simple , she is very naive and well it brought to this lifestyle. edward is caring and nice to bella friends ,... i dont know what he is secret but i love the way you keep me on my toes so i have to wait for 6 months to know what is his story. just want to tell you

Thank you , thank you , thank you , thank you for writting this chapter and updating this story . i appreiciate it . i am huge fan of this story . thank you

i hope you had great easter weekend and god bless you

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

my darling author , it was great chapter, enjoy your summer vacation , i loved this chapter, it was perfect , you suprize me after crappy day i had it bright my heart to see you up date this chapter for your readers

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

excelent story , i love uour writting and your beautiful stpry line

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i miss this story , please please next chapter

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I MISS THIS STORY , WHEN DO YOU POST , IT BEEN VERY LONG TIME

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i miss your story , i hope you are okay , i love your story and evey week i check this story i put it in my favorites but no next chapter likes to know what is it in your beautifull head of yours.

 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow, she finally said it , it is hard for edward , bt she said it . great chapter , super perfect

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 51158
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great story line and , i feel edward judge to soon about bella situation , and i wish he didnt post this article. she broke her , didnt he get scared if father of bella come after him ....

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i love this story , its funny and your story line is different from others and it is cute , i am so happy that you are up dating this story and i can read it , you deserved more reviews  . thank you for your time

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow, so much secrets , poor bella , she is very alone

Serve Me by slnguyen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 119]
Summary:

Edward was getting himself a new plaything. One who would take care and fulfill his every need.

Isabella was getting herself a new master. One who she has to learn to give herself to completely.

Both go to the Company to pair them off and, for them, it was a match made in heaven.

They will struggle to make their arrangement work, especially in public. But in the end, all that really matters is that their needs are fulfilled and satisfied. Who knows? Maybe they'll even learn to love and explore each other in ways that may leave you hot and bothered.

This story will be purely lemons.

WARNING: This is purely fiction. If you do not like any of the material written or it offends you, then I encourage you to stop reading. This story contains degradation, humiliation, BDSM-like scenes, slave-like scenes, and TONS of lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68472 Read Count: 133848
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2014 Updated: 08 Apr 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

what is sory behind bella why she is so easy to accept to be married to the dom who she dont know about .i love to know edward and bella story before this agreement , does edward married for the first time with bella or does he married with other sub he had before , i know its 2 chapter now but i think you will suprize us a lot .

 



Author's Response:

An answer for this is that I'm planning to expand on their story and go into a little bit more detailed explanation of their arrangement as the story continues, but I have to say that Edward and Bella's story isn't the main focus. The lemons are actually my main focus of this story. That might change later on though. Depending on how I decide for this story to go.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: How It's Going to Be

hi dear ,

thanks for your response on my last email , did your read this story : Crossing the Lines by she_viking

 

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=9516

 

this story lemon is kind of different and your lemon also very differen and its interesting but i feel you know how to make this story line in great story.

thank you for writting and taking your time to up date it .

 

great job

 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Nothing Will Stop Me From Having You

talking to mother on the phone very interesting idea,... ha ha h

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Punishment

lol, cleaning a desk ,...great action

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 287353 Read Count: 109773
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

it is sad story , i feel it would break my heart to know what is happeining to him and others



Author's Response:

I know.  :(  But it's also a beautiful love story, so I hope you're stay with us! 

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 28766
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

it is nice story , developing in good parts, but i feel so sad for bella she cant be in this horribile situation . it is hard for her

Summary:

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It's always been said that they're three sides to every story- yours, mine and the truth. With all the forbidden sex, manipulation, lies, secrets, deceit, twists an turns around every corner, finding the truth proves to be quite a difficult task. Backstabbing and deception become commonplace... Warning: super lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68959 Read Count: 16314
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2015 Updated: 14 Jun 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Sinfully Right

this story is very confusing , very , everybody have secrets, it brings cruisty of readers by reading this story ,

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 132612
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

POOR ISABELLA AND ALL THE PROBLEMS SHE GOTS

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

oh , this is unbelieveblae , her sister did this and bella killed her , it is not good at all

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I LOVE THE BLACK WEDDING DRESS AND I LOVE THE CHARECTOR BELLA WHO IS NOT LISTENING TO EDWARD AT ALL

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

what can i say about yout lovely story , it was amazing i love your plot line and the way you described your charectors and how bella is fighting back with edward and i laugh a lot in last chapter it was great that she wear black wedding dress and how you describe their relationship . you have great story and you are great writer, but it is sad that bella parents died one day after their wedding and it is going to be hard for bella to accepted it . i really like it if bella do give hard time on edward , you make it so funny .

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

it is sad the way bella lose her parents but bella cant forgive edward easily she have to give space between her and him , it is hard to grive

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh uh , it is not easy to grive , it was nice chapter ,but i feel it is to soon to forgiving edward

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

it would be fun if princess get angry towards edward  , it would be funny

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i thought this chapter was like caught me if you can , bella running away and edward is to chasing her like the begining of your story , i like it , to be hard to get but , i am happy about your story . thank you for taking your time and writting this wonderfull story.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

sister betraying bella , is hard to trust anyone

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

WOW, I DID NOT LIKE EDWARDS FATHER ATTIUTED , HE IS VERY OLD FASHION. It was none of their business whether BELLA  and EDWARD had sex or not, IT IS HARD SHE HAS A LOT TO DEAL WITH IT , SHE IS NOW LIVING WITH THEM AND SHE NOW HAS ENEMY WITH HER SISTER SITUATION AND DEATH OF HER PARENTS THIS IS NOT GREAT FOR EDWARD PARENTS THINK SO CHEAP

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 326]
Summary:

Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 23433
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great story plot , i thought it was edward who i was suspecting i didnt know it would be jasper , great story thank you for writting it .

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160365 Read Count: 65841
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

it wa very funny chapter , i like this chapter the most ,..sniffing women :):):):)

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 359]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131123 Read Count: 56086
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Oct 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces

wow, i read your stories in two days , i love your charector espicall edward the funny, crazy vampire edward , he deals with bella well , i love he made breakfast for her and was carefull of her ,so she doesnt do suicide again , at the end of the chapters their funny side was and it got very serious , your plot was very nice and you are great writer , thank you for writting this story



Author's Response:

Hello, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed Edward's character and the plot, it means a lot. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the last few chapters and the outtakes :) 

Blood by nnytak Rated: M starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Isabella has been a slave to vampires for years but after her owner develops feelings for her he is forced to get rid of her, after eight years in Volterra she gets thrown into a new situation that she will do anything to get out of. AU, M for language and later violence.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: What Runs Through Them
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91480 Read Count: 7014
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2016 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Twenty-Five

YOUR STORY IS VERY COMPLICATED , A LOT CHARECTOR AND SWITCHING BETWEEN DOL AND BELLA AND OTHER  CHARECTOR , AS READER I GET CONFUSED A LOT , A LOT OF FANTASY CHARECTOR .

The Lantern House by SukiH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129] New!
Summary:

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When Renee dies leaving Bella all alone, she answers an ad for a housekeeper for the reclusive writer Carlisle Cullen.

She takes an instant dislike to his nephew Edward, who's a fancy city lawyer, but are there other dangers she should be more wary of?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13597 Read Count: 10062
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2016 Updated: 07 Dec 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great story plot , love it , eager to see what will happen and know more secrets to un revill about it



Author's Response:

Hey thank you for those kind words. I'm hoping this all won't get totally confusing by the end because I don't want anything to be too predicatable if I can help it and I want to keep Bella guessing a bit, so there are a few red herrings & tiny details along the way which might or might not turn out to be important. Anyway I definitely feel like a party, & the next chapter's going to be all about Bella & Edward. x Sue

Summary:

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 16508
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

love your plot story line , great and sweet ending



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I'm so happy you liked the ending. <3