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Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 294885
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Felix.  Please let it be Felix.

-fingers crossed-

 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Please hurry back with another update.

And please for the love of GOD let that be Edward at the door.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

YEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Okay i forgive you.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3574]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1465674
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Okay i'll put down my hammer.  You are so mean.  I was actally scared for a little while there.  All of Edwards Progress!!

Whew!!  I feel so much better.  Thank you so much for this chapter.  It was great, very suspensful.  And good for Bella for not forgiving him completely and finally, (FINALLY) saying something, telling someone (Especially Edward) about Carlisle.

Can't wait to find out about Esme's garden.  I'm so excited!!!

Well done.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I'm picking my pitchfork back up.  What do you mean Edward is being 'Carlisle's Edward' again?!  WHY??

:((

It's all an act right, right, RIIIIGGGHHHTTTTT?!

Please.

Good Chapter anyhow.  Can't wait for Creating a Mate's Update. 



Author's Response:

Bella says she doesn't care if its fake, because it feels real to her.  Next chapter is Edward's pov.  But first a chapter for CAM & BTP

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Great Chapter, loved it! 

It's Carlisle isn't?  Isn't? 

Nice job, can't wait for the next one.

P.S. : I'm not whining, i'm just eager about Creating A Mate.  Didn't you say you'd have that out before the next Chapter of The Perfect Wife.  Again not whining, just curious, and missing my Controlward. 

Keep up the good work. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow really doesn't cover how amazing and awesome this chapter is.  I love it, you did a great job with this.  I personally was hoping that all the girls would get a chance to have a few sessions with giving Carlisle the what-for in the basement, but maybe that's just me.

Can't wait to see what Esme did with those ashes.

I love your writing keep it coming

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

OMG, yea!!  Wow, how do you feel?  This amazing, heart wrenching story has come to an end (minus epilogue), how do you feel about that?

I would buy your book, the series, whatever it is, i would buy it and read like Twilight.  Your story is that awesome.

You did amazing with this ending, it was perfect.  A lot of times a writer will start an amazing story, have all these good characters and all these could conflicts, but then their ending just sucks, because the happy ending that they wanted their characters to have, wasn't earned.  You did great in that, Bella isn't quite there yet, but she's on the right road, she will get there, you given us that, and for that i thank you so so much.  You never disapoint, so also thank you for that.

I'm ranting i know, but it's been a long day for me, so i'm in a ranting mood. :(

Anyway about CAM, can't wait, i am a major supporter of this story.  Yesterday in fact, i went back and reread it i miss it so much.  After TPW, i just know you'll do great with it.

Thanks for letting me rant, and just wow, great job on such a complex, emotional rollercoaster of a story.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Tears, baby, actual tears.  Great, Epi, really perfect ending.

Do your shoulders feel lighter now?  lol.

Great job, so happy that you were able to complete it, a lot of authors never do, and it can be so frustrating, so thank you so much.

Much love, and can't wait to see what happens next with CREATING A MATE.

;x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 117177
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 May 2014
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love how you did this.  Having the Cullens interfere every time Mike tried to make a move.  That is awsome.

I've just re-read this story and I fell in love with it all over again.  Please tell me you haven't forgotten about it, and that you will come back to it soon.  You'll break my heart if you don't.

I also am a huge fan of THE PERFECT WIFE.  I've been reading it since it was on FanFiction and that was a while ago.  It's so intense and I actually had to wait for you to write a few chapters at a time before I would read again because I couldn't stand be left with the cliff hangers you would leave or with a feeling of absolute dread when I would finish reading a new chapter.  (This is good.  I just easily get into a characters mind set, its hard to walk away without taking something like what's been happening to Bella with you when you turn off your computer.)

You are such an awsome writer and I can't wait to see what you'll do next.  But I'm majorly looking forward to CREATING A MATE.  So come back soon.

Thanks for letting me ramble.  ;)



Author's Response:

i promise a chapter for CAM & BTP after I post Esme's secret next week for tpw.  I couldn't leave everyone hanging waiting to see if Edward really hurt Bella or not.  I'm not quite that cruel.  :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great Chapter, awesome job.  I love how this story is progressing.  I think it's great that Bella automatically knew that she had to calm Edward down.  She just knew.

Thanks so much for coming back to this story.  I don't know if you read my comment on TPW but even if you did, i still want to give you props.  That was an awesome story, very well told.  You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you do next.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

YES! YES! YES! YES!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

Phew.  Okay love it, I saw no errors so that was awesome.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

Hrmhrrrm.  Sorry.  Anyway, what will your update schedule be like, or is there one, Just curious.  Ok and oh what else was i going to say....

Oh right:

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMING BACK, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

When I logged on and checked my favorites i saw a banner i've never seen before and i read the title thinking what is this and then my chair fell backwards because i was jumping up and down squeeling YES! YES! YES!

So Anyway great job bringing us back into the story and great cliffy, even though it is a cliffy and those just give everybody nerves until the next update but still good job.

Thank you so much. again.  I can 't say it enough ;)



Author's Response:

I'm sensing you're pleased with the update?  :)  Honestly, I have no update schedule.  I never have.  I don't plan my stories in advance so I really have no idea what to write next until it hits me.  I know it drives everyone crazy, including myself.  I promise it won't be 3 months before the next update though.  I've got an idea for the next chapter and no other deadlines staring me in the face right now.

Mic

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

YEAH YEAH YEAH (Im chearing out of my seat, which has fallen back to the floor)

whew, okay i got it out of me, im ok, i might need a new chair if this keeps happening.

Great update.  Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oops i did it again, i knocked over my chair, got lost in the 'YEAH's

Oh Update! Update! Update!

Sorry, ever since that Britney Spears Glee episode i've had Brit on the brain.

Anyway great job, yet again.  Thanks for another update, can't wait for the next.

;)



Author's Response:

Try sitting on the sofa so you can't knock it over.  :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes.

Please keep writing, updating, and never ever stop.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm not a religious person but you have my best wishes and happy thoughts directed at you and Robbie.  Good luck!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 109555
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thanks for another great chapter.  Really appreciate it.  ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.  Nice job.  I'm really hoping the girls don't take that shit lying down.  I'd take Edwards "short leash" and beat 'em with it. 

Come on Bella, wake up and show Ed who's boss.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.  Nice job.  I'm really hoping the girls don't take that shit lying down.  I'd take Edwards "short leash" and beat 'em with it. 

Come on Bella, wake up and show Ed who's boss.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is my Fav chap.  You did this really well.

About the AN, Rant: GOOD FOR YOU!!!  Don't let anyone bother you about updates or chapter length.  You can't rush your process and you can't force it.  Real life, especially three kids, are priority.  Don't let anybody tell you otherwise.  Your awesome, your story is great, and I thank you for sharing it.

Keep up the good work. ;)

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1244]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 158902
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great Chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I forgot to ask this in my last comment:  Where did you get the pictures for your banner?  Are they from Eclipse?  Please Let me know.



Author's Response:

Yep they are from Eclipse :0) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not Fair, you say "Yep their from Eclipse" but i can't find them anywhere.

:(

Help a RPattz-lover out.

***On Knees pleading***



Author's Response:

I found them on various blogs, Robobessesed, Naugthy Kitty's Twiworld.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great job. Well done. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whoa, great chapter.  Can't wait to see where you take this story.

;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/8628/images/The_Singer_Connection.jpg

 

What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 60732
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Why war with the Volturi?  Great chapter though, very lemony. ;)

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 15640
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Way Out

Great story so far.  I've read a similar one like this on FF.  Was that yours and you've changed some things?  Let me know.



Author's Response:

sorry about the delay in replying to your review...

I dunno if it was me, because I do have this story on ff.net, but I'm pulling it because of the recent drama about nc-17 ratings...I haven't reworked or changed anything on my story, so perhaps there's someone else out there who had the same sort of idea...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 714]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

BT Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 57332
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

What time of day was the wedding?

I'm just curious, also a little worried about Carlise.

I'm sure you wrote it somewhere, i just forgot.

Great chapter.  How many more chapters do you reckon, again i'm just curious.

Anyway ;)



Author's Response:

The wedding was in early afternoon. :-) I don't think I ever wrote the exact time, but when Edward and Bella were at the Couch Tomb in Chapter 26 it was June 29th and Edward had a little countdown going. ;-)

It looks like the story will be 34 chapters, plus an epilogue.

Glad you enjoyed the chap - thanks for reading!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1700]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 265728
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

I love your story, really i do, but if you or your beta, (do you have one) could work on dialogue that would make a world of difference.  What your saying is great, but if someone were to actually say it out loud in a conversation, it sounds off.  Try saying the dialogue out loud to yourself when writing, that can be a huge help, (I do it all the time.)  Just something to think about, keep in the back of your mind.  Other than that loving the story, awesome characters and idea.

I'm so sorry for your loss, and thank you so much for sharing it with us here.  I know how theraputic (spell check) it can be to write out about hard times, it really helps, I hope it's comforting and helpful to you.

Also, I love how angry Bella was with Alice, I want to see that in other stories on this site because sometimes Alice just needs to be told no, sit, stay, bad.  lol, great job, can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love honest critic. I will definitly work on my dialouges : ) I have a beta, but she just works on the grammar and spelling ^^

Thank you for your condolences, I hope it will help to write about it. I've never done that before...

THANK YOU! ;)

xx
Gelix

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 23968
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Ha ha ha "special Cookies"

they make me laugh.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1969]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 189844
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I just wanted to say that if you wanted to post a day early, that would be okay.  No one would think less of you.

nevermind, *kicking floor* I just can't wait to see what happens next or how Bella's going to tell the Cullens especially Edward.  When i first found this story i read right on up until 3am.  I've read two teasers already and i want more.

anyway... can't wait til tomorrow. ;P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should be up in about 8 hours or so! Don't forget to check out our delicious little teasers, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog!

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

OHHHHHHH That is cruel.

You can't just stop there then expect for me to wait a whole week, can you?!

I'm going to go nuts.

Great chapter, literaly can't wait for the next one.  I'm shaking.

;P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Great Chapter, yet again.

Keep up the good work.

;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Another great chap.

I loved the Outake you did of when Edward left Vicky.

At a boy Ed!!

Anyway...



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 45301
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it.

Are you planning on bringing Edward back from the dead or something?

That would be cool, hard but cool.  Anyway... love reading you stuff, always a pleasure.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, (i say and think that a lot with your stories, hmm...) Anyway Wow.

Not to sound like a crazy highschool girl but 'like OMG'

This is going to be good, i just know it.  You have yet to write a bad story, (disturbing, bone chilling, stomach knot making, but never ever bad and always worth reading)

I keep getting off track, i think i'm just still realing from this chapter.  It's great really to get Bella's side of things, gosh and she's pregers.  Yikes.

Please let Edward be alive.  (My inner RPattz lover made a request that i say that.  It just seems wrong to kill Edward in the beginning of a story.  At all really.  No one should ever kill Edward, unless it's Carlisle, then that's okay.  I'm rambling, i know)

Keep it coming.  It's always a pleasure to see where you take us next.

Thank you, ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story so far.  And hate to burst your bubble, but Edward is going to remain dead in this story. I'm going for unexpected with this one.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 428]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 75583
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2010 Updated: 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Carlisle better stay dead mister!!

Also your kitten should be named Murphy or George.

Good Chapter, great story, keep it up.

Maybe it's just me but i always thought of Matt as being a big guy.  A little smaller than Emmett but that body type.  Anyway...

 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ha okay so totally cool that you named the cat Murphy.  That was so fun to read even more so because of your choice.

Anyway my dog is named lucky.  And when we picked him out we (four kids) were lucky to get a dog and now-a-days he's lucky to be alive because mom can't stand him, she loves him, but she can't stand him.  He whines a lot.

Anyway great chapter. Keep it up.  Completely in love with Matt right now.

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 14547
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

Ok, this is what the third time you've put this story up??

I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens with it, but if you could find it in your heart to repost the story where Bella falls for her music director who also happens to be Rosalie's father (and Edward) that would be much appreciated.  I really liked where that one was going.  Plus the Banner was awesome.

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 6783
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 28 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

OHH i love this, please write a continuation, or another few outakes.  It's so hot and awesome.



Author's Response:

I won't make any promises, but I will try my best. 

Thanks for the love!

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 9885
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Twenty One

Oh thank god I found you here. Freedom fanfic needed time to confirm my account and I need my Durtynelly fix anyway I can get it be it Buried which I've followed for years and am in love with to macabre which is brilliant and gives me happy creepy chills.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, doll! :) 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Twenty Four

Oh god, creepy!

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

Where are you? The suspense has been going on for months!!! I need my release baby come on! Daisies too what will Edward do to pussy Phil and whory Renee?

Just tell me you will eventually be coming back. Please

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85645 Read Count: 37276
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is it weird that I keep thinking Esme might be behind all this? Idk



Author's Response:

I can promise that she isn't.